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This forum game is played by continuing off of the previous person's installment of an ongoing story. Each installment should begin and end mid-sentence with a "...", so as to give the next poster a chance to complete the sentence. There are only two rules:

1. Do not kill the main character. Other characters may be introduced and killed at will.
2. Do not end the story. I will be ending the story if/when the thread gets too long.

Aside from that, everything goes! Feel free to introduce any and all wacky situations or characters that you can come up with. However, I must ask that you keep posts short. 100 words at most. I won't be keeping count, but if a post seems too long to me, I'll let you know.

I'll start us off:

"Alyn Drenic swung his laser rifle over his shoulder as another explosion rocked the area around him. He clasped his hands to his ears, in pain because of the noise. All of the sudden, someone appeared in front of him. It was his..."

((Richie, I must ask that you not change the race of our hero this time around. Alyn is your regular old, run-of-the-mill human, no furry additions. :P ))
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| February 27, 2012, 5:19 pm
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Quoting BiO.Andrew (Down that corridor, running to the exit door...)
I'll start us off:

"Alyn Drenic swung his laser rifle over his shoulder as another explosion rocked the area around him. He clasped his hands to his ears, in pain because of the noise. All of the sudden, someone appeared in front of him. It was his..."

...target, Elmore Winkleton. What luck! He pulled his rifle out again and squeezed the trigger. Elmore dropped to the ground. Alyn pulled the dog tag from his neck and read the name on the back, this would be his next target in this twisted game, it read: ...

((Nice ending, Andrew. But I saw it coming from the start =D ))
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| February 28, 2012, 4:25 am
Quoting ED Eroomdivad
...target, Elmore Winkleton. What luck! He pulled his rifle out again and squeezed the trigger. Elmore dropped to the ground. Alyn pulled the dog tag from his neck and read the name on the back, this would be his next target in this twisted game, it read: ...

... Phineas Altmann. A cold sweat drop rolled down his spine when he read it. Phineas was his best friend, more than a brother, since childhood. Both raised in an orphanage, they learned how to strive to survive. Joined the army together and more than one time one saved the live of the other. And now he must kill him or...
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| February 28, 2012, 8:26 am
Quoting CEO Luiz Camargo
... Phineas Altmann. A cold sweat drop rolled down his spine when he read it. Phineas was his best friend, more than a brother, since childhood. Both raised in an orphanage, they learned how to strive to survive. Joined the army together and more than one time one saved the live of the other. And now he must kill him or...

...be thrown out of the army, losing any chance of finding... "it." Now, this "it" was no ordinary it. "it" was an it of such tremendous power, any man who touched "it" would become very much like "it." So of course, everyone wanted "it." Alyn had two choices: kill his best friend and find "it", or leave his friend alive and...
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| February 28, 2012, 10:37 am
Quoting LTE CEO of MMWI
...be thrown out of the army, losing any chance of finding... "it." Now, this "it" was no ordinary it. "it" was an it of such tremendous power, any man who touched "it" would become very much like "it." So of course, everyone wanted "it." Alyn had two choices: kill his best friend and find "it", or leave his friend alive and...


((The "Knights Who Say Ni" would drop dead after hearing this... :)~ ))
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| February 28, 2012, 12:32 pm
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Quoting LTE CEO of MMWI
...be thrown out of the army, losing any chance of finding... "it." Now, this "it" was no ordinary it. "it" was an it of such tremendous power, any man who touched "it" would become very much like "it." So of course, everyone wanted "it." Alyn had two choices: kill his best friend and find "it", or leave his friend alive and...

...be tossed back out onto the street from which he came, and in a world where money is scarce and food more so. It was his life against his friends, surely the hardest choice ever to be made. He made his decision. He would...

((We're gonna hit 2k posts before Monday at this rate =D ))
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| February 29, 2012, 2:28 am
Quoting ED Eroomdivad
...be tossed back out onto the street from which he came, and in a world where money is scarce and food more so. It was his life against his friends, surely the hardest choice ever to be made. He made his decision. He would...

((We're gonna hit 2k posts before Monday at this rate =D ))

...Play the good old "Lord of the Living Dead" trick. Allow me to explain: 1) Arrangements are made for a near facsimilie of the "Victim" to be made. 2) "Victim" kidnaped. 3) An "Accident" takes place that is evidenced to have killed the "Victim" (This is where the Facsimilie comes in) Also, sufficient evidence is placed to prove that the event in question was not accidental. One problem though--...
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| February 29, 2012, 5:53 pm
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Quoting Rich Collins... 257th Wolf
...Play the good old "Lord of the Living Dead" trick. Allow me to explain: 1) Arrangements are made for a near facsimilie of the "Victim" to be made. 2) "Victim" kidnaped. 3) An "Accident" takes place that is evidenced to have killed the "Victim" (This is where the Facsimilie comes in) Also, sufficient evidence is placed to prove that the event in question was not accidental. One problem though--...

...There was no time to make such a complex and preparation requiring plan. Within this arena he had to kill or die. He gulped. He would have to save himself. As an explosion rocked the ground he...

((Or he and his friend could eat some poisonous berries... =D ))
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| March 1, 2012, 2:43 am
Quoting ED Eroomdivad
...There was no time to make such a complex and preparation requiring plan. Within this arena he had to kill or die. He gulped. He would have to save himself. As an explosion rocked the ground he...

((Or he and his friend could eat some poisonous berries... =D ))

((lol, poisonous berries...))

...decided to search for "it" a little more before making the decision to kill his friend or not. So, our hero starts his quest! Unbeknownst to him, his friend had recently killed someone and had found his name. His friend was very... ambitious and had little to no qualms against killing his buddy. And so, Alyn was HUNTED. Alyn decided to search for shelter when...
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| March 1, 2012, 2:59 pm
Quoting LTE CEO of MMWI
((lol, poisonous berries...))

...decided to search for "it" a little more before making the decision to kill his friend or not. So, our hero starts his quest! Unbeknownst to him, his friend had recently killed someone and had found his name. His friend was very... ambitious and had little to no qualms against killing his buddy. And so, Alyn was HUNTED. Alyn decided to search for shelter when...

... A Foxtaur, apparently a rival hunter mistaking Alyn for some other target, sprang from te bushes, igniting a pair of Arcwave Sabers as she came. She proceded to...
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| March 1, 2012, 6:06 pm
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Quoting Rich Collins... 257th Wolf
... A Foxtaur, apparently a rival hunter mistaking Alyn for some other target, sprang from te bushes, igniting a pair of Arcwave Sabers as she came. She proceded to...

...viciously swing her sabres, slicing a notch out of his nose. He yelled and leaped into a backflip. He squeezed the trigger on his gun and the foxtaur turned and sprinted away, her tail smouldering. He caught his breath as the fern fronds swayed slowly in her wake. He stood like that for a moment before...
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| March 2, 2012, 1:32 am
Quoting ED Eroomdivad
...viciously swing her sabres, slicing a notch out of his nose. He yelled and leaped into a backflip. He squeezed the trigger on his gun and the foxtaur turned and sprinted away, her tail smouldering. He caught his breath as the fern fronds swayed slowly in her wake. He stood like that for a moment before...

...He realize he was bleeding. It was only a minor wound so he extracted an aerosol bottle of Organic Patching Compound ((Basically Spray-On Artificial Skin.)) from his first-aid kit and proceded to patch up the wound. He would have to have the cartilage regenerated later on but just as long as he didn't catch a cold he would be fine. Realtivly certain the Foxtaur had realized her mistake and wouldn't be back, Alyn looked to the sky, hoping to find...
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| March 2, 2012, 2:24 pm
((Ok, why is this place dead all of a sudden? Is it something i said? Either way this isn't going anywhere if someone doesn't post and because mine was the last post, that ain't going to be me.))
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| March 4, 2012, 3:27 pm
Quoting Rich Collins... 257th Wolf
((Ok, why is this place dead all of a sudden? Is it something i said? Either way this isn't going anywhere if someone doesn't post and because mine was the last post, that ain't going to be me.))

((it's probably the foxtaur. :P))
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| March 4, 2012, 3:35 pm
Quoting ariklego ...The Director!
((it's probably the foxtaur. :P))

(( :( ))
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| March 4, 2012, 4:18 pm
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Quoting Rich Collins... 257th Wolf
((Ok, why is this place dead all of a sudden? Is it something i said? Either way this isn't going anywhere if someone doesn't post and because mine was the last post, that ain't going to be me.))

((I tried but I can't think of anything that could be in the sky.))
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| March 5, 2012, 4:04 am
Quoting ED Eroomdivad
((I tried but I can't think of anything that could be in the sky.))

((Perhaps whatever he's looking for is eminating from "It" Perhaps he Alyn intends to follow the path of whatever he's looking for backwards in an attempt to navigate independently.))
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| March 5, 2012, 4:43 pm
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Quoting Rich Collins... 257th Wolf
...He realize he was bleeding. It was only a minor wound so he extracted an aerosol bottle of Organic Patching Compound ((Basically Spray-On Artificial Skin.)) from his first-aid kit and proceded to patch up the wound. He would have to have the cartilage regenerated later on but just as long as he didn't catch a cold he would be fine. Realtivly certain the Foxtaur had realized her mistake and wouldn't be back, Alyn looked to the sky, hoping to find...

...the glow of a rising sun beginning to light the sky, but there was nothing but stars and a cold white moon. He knew what he would find of course, because that was the very thing he was searching for: 'it' was a way to bring back the the life giving ball of fire that had lit his world for so long, 'it' was the machine that would end this long winter and return light and warmth to the world. It had disappeared many years ago, when...
((There you go Richie, I worked it out. Plus I also thought up an idea for why Alyn is killing people/'taurs, so could you guys leave that for me to do?))
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| March 6, 2012, 2:47 am
Quoting ED Eroomdivad
...the glow of a rising sun beginning to light the sky, but there was nothing but stars and a cold white moon. He knew what he would find of course, because that was the very thing he was searching for: 'it' was a way to bring back the the life giving ball of fire that had lit his world for so long, 'it' was the machine that would end this long winter and return light and warmth to the world. It had disappeared many years ago, when...
((There you go Richie, I worked it out. Plus I also thought up an idea for why Alyn is killing people/'taurs, so could you guys leave that for me to do?))

...A long dead Therastian Colony Ship swallowed the sun in its automatic refuling process. Nothing could be done to stop the ship which had been travelling without crew or passengers for over a million years. The worst of it was that Alyn and Phinaes were around to witness the Great Star disapear back when...
((You forget ED; I'm liable to introduce characters of numerous "Furry" species as well as other fantacy creatures, even a few creations of my own (Therastians for instance) Therastians, by the way, are supposed to be a reptilian species (Because i said so) But besides that all a y'alls is allowed t' do whatevers ya want. Pardon my spelling, i can't think today. I speak English very goodly.))
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| March 6, 2012, 5:24 pm
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Quoting Rich Collins... 257th Wolf
...A long dead Therastian Colony Ship swallowed the sun in its automatic refuling process. Nothing could be done to stop the ship which had been travelling without crew or passengers for over a million years. The worst of it was that Alyn and Phinaes were around to witness the Great Star disapear back when...
((You forget ED; I'm liable to introduce characters of numerous "Furry" species as well as other fantacy creatures, even a few creations of my own (Therastians for instance) Therastians, by the way, are supposed to be a reptilian species (Because i said so) But besides that all a y'alls is allowed t' do whatevers ya want. Pardon my spelling, i can't think today. I speak English very goodly.))

..the Third Great War was finally drawing to a close. It caused the slowly rising calm across the globe to break, shattering the almost peace and sending the planet spiralling back into chaos. That was almost three years ago now, and the army had resorted to killing off those at the lower end of the skill spectrum. Not because they needed to improve the general ability level in the forces, but for a far more primal urge: food. Looking back on his Alyn...
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| March 7, 2012, 2:48 am
Quoting ED Eroomdivad
..the Third Great War was finally drawing to a close. It caused the slowly rising calm across the globe to break, shattering the almost peace and sending the planet spiralling back into chaos. That was almost three years ago now, and the army had resorted to killing off those at the lower end of the skill spectrum. Not because they needed to improve the general ability level in the forces, but for a far more primal urge: food. Looking back on this, Alyn...

...Began to cry. The air had grown warmer as the weather regulation satilites-- working overtime since the cataclysm-- aproached the apex of the sky. Suddenly the humid atmosphere liquified and it began to rain. The cold drops mingled with Alyn's hot tears as he contemplated the future, hoping...
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| March 7, 2012, 5:14 pm
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Quoting Rich Collins... 257th Wolf
...Began to cry. The air had grown warmer as the weather regulation satilites-- working overtime since the cataclysm-- aproached the apex of the sky. Suddenly the humid atmosphere liquified and it began to rain. The cold drops mingled with Alyn's hot tears as he contemplated the future, hoping...

...there was some way to save this godforsaken world he had the misfortune to live in. He picked up his gun, which he had noticed he dropped, and slung it over his back. A jet flew overhead, and as the sonic boom trailing it smashed through him he began to walk, into the unknown that lay beyond. His breath caught in his throat when he saw...
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| March 8, 2012, 3:42 am
Quoting ED Eroomdivad
...there was some way to save this godforsaken world he had the misfortune to live in. He picked up his gun, which he had noticed he dropped, and slung it over his back. A jet flew overhead, and as the sonic boom trailing it smashed through him he began to walk, into the unknown that lay beyond. His breath caught in his throat when he saw...

...A Ghost! Or was it an Angel? The Spitit-- or whatever-- was in the image of an Anthro Fox; snow white fur and silk, shining with a blinding light rivaled only by that eminating from it's-- no <i> Her </i> --eyes. <i> She <i> disappeared as quickly as she had come, sinking into a patch of moss growing on the ground. When he finally gathered his wits, Alyn examined the moss. It was loose and the ground below it was... Gone... "A tunnel!" Alyn whispered. He climbed in and...
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| March 8, 2012, 5:19 pm
Quoting Rich Collins... 257th Wolf
...A Ghost! Or was it an Angel? The Spitit-- or whatever-- was in the image of an Anthro Fox; snow white fur and silk, shining with a blinding light rivaled only by that eminating from it's-- no <i> Her </i> --eyes. <i> She <i> disappeared as quickly as she had come, sinking into a patch of moss growing on the ground. When he finally gathered his wits, Alyn examined the moss. It was loose and the ground below it was... Gone... "A tunnel!" Alyn whispered. He climbed in and...


fell. it wasn't a tunnel, it was the entrance to a big subterranean room. Alyn looked around and saw that it was right below the surface.
"Well, well, look who it is. If it isn't my buddy Alyn." Alyn turned around and saw...
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| July 31, 2012, 11:53 am
Quoting Krill Zayvalov

fell. it wasn't a tunnel, it was the entrance to a big subterranean room. Alyn looked around and saw that it was right below the surface.
"Well, well, look who it is. If it isn't my buddy Alyn." Alyn turned around and saw...

...Phineas, Standing there grinning like a maniac, an odd-shaped Gunblade dangling by a chain from his left hand. The saftey was off, the gun was loaded, the trigger already half pulled. Alyn had seen this tactic before...
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| July 31, 2012, 5:17 pm
Quoting Rich Collins... 257th Wolf
...Phineas, Standing there grinning like a maniac, an odd-shaped Gunblade dangling by a chain from his left hand. The saftey was off, the gun was loaded, the trigger already half pulled. Alyn had seen this tactic before...

...in training camp. He and Phineas had trained together in the same squad, he remembered. Phineas yanked back on the Gunblade, then suddenly let it whip forward, slicing the bullet in half, and sending the pieces in opposite directions, where they smashed into the walls. The Gunblade stopped an inch from Alyn's face, and then was yanked back by Phineas. "Long time no see, buddy!" Phineas flashed a smile. Alyn looked at him, and they both started laughing. Then they heard a sound from the other side of the cave. Alyn turned around, just as an arrow whizzed by him and struck Phineas through he face, killing him. Alyn looked around. He saw a big bipedal figure. It moved forward into the light. It was...
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| July 31, 2012, 6:45 pm
well. this story died. was it something i wrote?
:P
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| August 16, 2013, 1:11 pm
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Quoting Krill Zayvalov
well. this story died. was it something i wrote?
:P

This group is pretty inactive, most of the core members migrated to the forum (there's a like somewhere...) and then most of them then migrated off to other pursuits. For example the mighty BiO now seems to spend his time gaming and making Minecraft maps (which are pretty darn good, imo) and I've gone off to play and attempt to make computer games.

So yeah, since no one is using the group feel free to advertise and make convos and stuff (within reason).
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| August 17, 2013, 6:27 pm
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