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If you were dissappointed with the score you got, or just want to know what you can do better, ask here and we'll tell you how you can improve. Normal members are also allowed to give some advice.
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| May 30, 2011, 3:05 pm
I'm going to ask Space Gypsy how I could add more detail and excitement to my vig.
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| June 3, 2011, 8:03 am
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Quoting Barrett K.
I'm going to ask Space Gypsy how I could add more detail and excitement to my vig.

It was a bit crowded. You should have entered it in the Clone Wars category, in that category you can make it as big as you want. The vig was pretty nice, though, but nothing too exciting.
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| June 3, 2011, 9:00 am
Quoting E.K.O .
It was a bit crowded. You should have entered it in the Clone Wars category, in that category you can make it as big as you want. The vig was pretty nice, though, but nothing too exciting.

I thought about it. I thought the goal of a vig was to provide a detailed, yet small, scene from the battle. I think it contained an appropriate amount of excitement, even if it was crowded.
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| June 3, 2011, 1:17 pm
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Quoting Patrick Lowe
E.K.O. How could I have improved my moc, is it my photography ( Ithink it is the pictures were quite blurry)

The vig was nice, but lacked some detail. The photos were also a bit blurry.
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| June 4, 2011, 5:06 am
How could I have done better on my entry?
http://mocpages.com/moc.php/272804
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| June 4, 2011, 6:29 pm
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Quoting Barrett K.
I'm going to ask Space Gypsy how I could add more detail and excitement to my vig.

Yes of course. I would have made it more bigger, that would be a way to make more detail. Or the landscape could be made with more layers. As for the excitment. Try making the minifigs do cool poses, like in mid-air. Hope I was help, and I mean no offence.
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| June 5, 2011, 8:47 am
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Quoting Jag .
How could I have done better on my entry?
http://mocpages.com/moc.php/272804

Check the comments, I left some suggestions.
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| June 5, 2011, 8:49 am
Quoting Space Gypsy .
Check the comments, I left some suggestions.

Thanks!
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| June 5, 2011, 11:36 am
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Quoting Space Gypsy .
Yes of course. I would have made it more bigger, that would be a way to make more detail. Or the landscape could be made with more layers. As for the excitment. Try making the minifigs do cool poses, like in mid-air. Hope I was help, and I mean no offence.

He can't make it bigger as it can't be bigger than 8x8, although I noticed that his entry actually is 7x8, but still, that wouldn't help vey much.
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| June 6, 2011, 1:49 pm
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Quoting Jag .
How could I have done better on my entry?
http://mocpages.com/moc.php/272804

As Space Gypsy said, it could use a wall with greebles or an another detail. The floor could also use some tiles.
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| June 6, 2011, 1:52 pm
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Quoting E.K.O .
He can't make it bigger as it can't be bigger than 8x8, although I noticed that his entry actually is 7x8, but still, that wouldn't help vey much.

Oh right. I feel stupid now :)
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| June 7, 2011, 2:32 pm
Quoting E.K.O .

On my Star Wars Jokes, how could I have got that extra 1 point from you? I nearlly had a perfect score :P
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| June 8, 2011, 1:58 am
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Quoting George G.
On my Star Wars Jokes, how could I have got that extra 1 point from you? I nearlly had a perfect score :P

I think you should have built some vignettes to some of your jokes instead of placing them on a paper. That's what I did to everyone of my jokes on my Star Wars Jokes.
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| June 8, 2011, 8:47 am
Quoting E.K.O .
He can't make it bigger as it can't be bigger than 8x8, although I noticed that his entry actually is 7x8, but still, that wouldn't help vey much.

I'm pretty sure it was 8x8, if you look at the last picture that is the underside of the vig, there is proof.
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| June 8, 2011, 11:00 am
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Quoting Barrett K.
I'm pretty sure it was 8x8, if you look at the last picture that is the underside of the vig, there is proof.

Ok, I realized that now, I thought Thires leg was part of the paper background. :P
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| June 9, 2011, 9:36 am
TAKE QUALITY PHOTOS!!! Clean backgrounds, and USE THE MACRO SETTING on those close-up shots!
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| June 9, 2011, 12:11 pm
Hey E.K.O, how can i make my Lightsaber better? I got a 3 :P
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| June 9, 2011, 2:10 pm
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Quoting A minute ago ...
Hey E.K.O, how can i make my Lightsaber better? I got a 3 :P

I didn't like that you added some black on it, but it may be because I haven't seen a reference pic, and some parts on it looked blocky, but I guess you couldn't make it rounder. Had you added a lightsaber blade on it, it would have gotten a higher score but I think you don't have enough pieces for that. Sorry, I can't think of anymore to say, I just think that it wasn't that impressive but I think it's nicely done, so you got a three.
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| June 9, 2011, 2:21 pm
Quoting E.K.O .
I didn't like that you added some black on it, but it may be because I haven't seen a reference pic, and some parts on it looked blocky, but I guess you couldn't make it rounder. Had you added a lightsaber blade on it, it would have gotten a higher score but I think you don't have enough pieces for that. Sorry, I can't think of anymore to say, I just think that it wasn't that impressive but I think it's nicely done, so you got a three.

Yeah, i see your point :P

But i guess i should have included a reference picture, because it does have black on it.
http://media.giantbomb.com/uploads/0/7472/378678-dookusaber_mr_super.jpg
I did that blocky build because i wanted the black and grey strip detail, and i couldn't find a decent way to make it more round.
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| June 9, 2011, 2:27 pm
I'm happy with the scores I got on my Popular Saying MOC but what could I of done to make it better?
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| June 9, 2011, 2:27 pm
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Quoting commander fix1028
I'm happy with the scores I got on my Popular Saying MOC but what could I of done to make it better?

The ground was nice, but it looks a bit sloppy. You didn't cover up some holes at some places. You should also have added some bricks behind the grey cheese slopes to not make the ground look so blocky.
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| June 9, 2011, 2:52 pm
How could I of improved my clone wars moc?
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| June 17, 2011, 10:09 am
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Quoting commander fix1028
How could I of improved my clone wars moc?

I think you should make it more studless, because the floor were not entirely studless and as Space Gypsy said, the doors needs some more tiles. Some parts on the moc looked a bit sloppy.
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| June 17, 2011, 10:35 am
Any more than just tiles? http://mocpages.com/moc.php/277569#reviews
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| June 28, 2011, 8:20 pm
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