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Hi. Could I have some CC on my convertible: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/327591 As this is my first large, quality car, I'd like to know how I could improve next time.
I gave CC to http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=20385&topicid=80247 and http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=20385&topicid=82252. Thanks in advance for the feedback!
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| June 12, 2012, 11:11 pm
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Quoting Halhi 141
Hi. Could I have some CC on my convertible: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/327591 As this is my first large, quality car, I'd like to know how I could improve next time.
I gave CC to http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=20385&topicid=80247 and http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=20385&topicid=82252. Thanks in advance for the feedback!

It's good. Probably my favorite one of your cars so far.

I like the shape and size of it and the seats are well done.

But try tiling it so there are no studs showing. That way it will look more like a car. Also, would it be possible to make a roof for it? One that folds from the back.
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| June 13, 2012, 4:12 am
Quoting Halhi 141
Hi. Could I have some CC on my convertible: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/327591 As this is my first large, quality car, I'd like to know how I could improve next time.
I gave CC to http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=20385&topicid=80247 and http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=20385&topicid=82252. Thanks in advance for the feedback!
Good car! I think this is a good MOC. I like the wing mirrors and even though you didn't use snot techniques, I think it gives the car a nice look. You could improve on the the length of the front nose/bonnet of the car because it seems just a little too short. Also you could add some more detail inside the car on the dashboard, such as speed dial and gear stick etc. Overall a good MOC.
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| June 14, 2012, 2:17 pm
Quoting Halhi 141
Hi. Could I have some CC on my convertible: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/327591 As this is my first large, quality car, I'd like to know how I could improve next time.
I gave CC to http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=20385&topicid=80247 and http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=20385&topicid=82252. Thanks in advance for the feedback!


a little blocky but decent
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| June 21, 2012, 7:06 am
Quoting commander vargus

a little blocky but decent
What could he improve?

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| June 21, 2012, 10:22 am
Quoting Arnas Scheel
Quoting commander vargus

a little blocky but decent
What could he improve?


Mr. Scheel,

Good question for our new member. Good job.
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| June 21, 2012, 2:18 pm
That is a very professional theme you have engaged in, which is a double-edged sword. On one hand it shows self-confidence and potential, but it also says you are not yet ready.

First, the sad truth:
car models require a lot of tiles, cheese slopes and other detail bricks.

The model itself though, is not bad. But not good either. it seems very plain on most parts, especially on the below shot. if you are having open studs, you can make curving lines on the hood to have an aerodynamic look or add some grills and such. Tiled surfaces would be excellent, but I know there are problems with that - if the pannels are two plates thick, a greater angle makes a gap exponentially larger than a thinner pannel.

It is not easy to say much about a creation that is not adequately detailed, except of saying it needs more details and less studs.

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| June 21, 2012, 3:24 pm
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