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Arnas Scheel's WIP Port Stage 2
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Hello everyone! I know I posted something recently, but my mind has struck a brick wall with ideas hiding on the other side. Your Mission, if you choose to accept it, is to break down that wall of bricks. :P
I C&Ced
Space Gypsy's "Protect the King!"
and
Broken Bricks' "Swallow plane"
http://mocpages.com/moc.php/330374
Thanks for your meaningful time!
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| June 29, 2012, 12:44 pm
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Quoting Arnas Scheel
Hello everyone! I know I posted something recently, but my mind has struck a brick wall with ideas hiding on the other side. Your Mission, if you choose to accept it, is to break down that wall of bricks. :P
I C&Ced
Space Gypsy's "Protect the King!"
and
Broken Bricks' "Swallow plane"
http://mocpages.com/moc.php/330374
Thanks for your meaningful time!

It's pretty good for a WIP.

I like the the flag, the spears and the tree.

But I think the sand should be less flat. Add mounds ;) and the transition of grass and sand could be better. Maybe make a small watch tower between the two groups of spears. That would be good.
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| June 30, 2012, 5:43 am
Quoting Arnas Scheel

Ok, first Arnas, I'll need some information about this MOC considering I see none in the MOC. :P
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| July 3, 2012, 8:29 am
Quoting Arnas Scheel
Hello everyone! I know I posted something recently, but my mind has struck a brick wall with ideas hiding on the other side. Your Mission, if you choose to accept it, is to break down that wall of bricks. :P
I C&Ced
Space Gypsy's "Protect the King!"
and
Broken Bricks' "Swallow plane"
http://mocpages.com/moc.php/330374
Thanks for your meaningful time!

Firstly, nice overall idea for the moc, I like the jetty, butt you could add ropes or docking poles (to hook ropes from boats on etc) on it, I also the the flag and the water detail around it, but the others areas of water could do with some features such as a fishing boat or light house (medieval of course!) or a rocky out-crop)
and like space gypsy said, a less harsh transition from sand to water would be good!. well done on the work so far

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| July 3, 2012, 2:36 pm
Looking good. I like the general layout, but I think that a bit more texture in the water and ground would help. 'Figs on the dock unloading some cargo or something would also be cool. I look forward to seeing the finished MOC!
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| July 3, 2012, 3:22 pm
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