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I wrote ALL of these! tell me if you can see the message! enjoy! give me an honest opinion.

-[-=The Dark One=-]-

Part 1
Haunting

The dark one creeps quietly through the streets. His evil deeds unknown. He peeks into my window. He must be overthrown.

He wears a cape as black as a starless night. His eyes are all thatís light. They're so gray, they cause much fright.


What is he, who is he, where's he from? He won't tell me. How come? Look at all the evil he has done.

Is there a way to defend? any help someone can lend? Time is running out, itís almost the end.

A war has begun, one that cannot be won. All I can do now is run.


Part 2
Alone

He haunts me night and day, I want him gone is all I have to say, I have to get rid of him some way.

I am alone. I feel like he is eating me away to the bone. In this deep pit i have been thrown.

Am i going to die? I feel like no one can hear my cry. You comforting me feels like a lie.

Part 3
Daylight

Help, i feel dead, all he does is fill me with dread. I canít live like this, is all that has to be said.

Can someone get me away from him? The moonlight is getting so dim, with fear; I'm filled to the brim.

Go away... You cannot stay! Night is gone for ever now its day. Now, the sky is no longer gray.

The dark one was just me. My eyes were closed so I could not see, but you have opened them... and now I'm free!


-=Fiery Night=-

In the dead of the night.
I see a flickering light.
It shines so bright.
A terrifying sight..
It fills my soul with SO MUCH fright.

The light fades away.
The eyes of the phantom turn to grey.
I've got to escape this.
IS THERE ANY WAY?

Can you tell me why?
Why did you shatter the sky?
You made the fallen cry.
A cry of anger.
A cry so bitter.
I won't listen any longer.
TO YOU!
YES YOU!

I finally realize what I've done.
I finally see a rising sun.
...I am the phantom of the night!

OH!
Fiery night.
Painful sight.
OH!
Shine so bright.
You're the light.

Wait...
HOW CAN THIS BE?
The shadows I hide from are cast by me.
I'm shredding my cloak beneath the tree.
...Because I finally see.
...LORD SET ME FREE!

I can't take it in the fiery night!
I need you to be my light!

-=--=Scribblings of A Mad Man=--=-

Hello.
I can here the whispers in my ear.
Every single word I hear.
Losing the battle is my fear.
Can't you see the dripping tear?
I've lost all I once held dear.
I am losing my mind it does apear.

Oh.
I can see the fallen in my sight.
Their rotting flesh causes fright.
Someone please turn on the light.
Something I'm seeing is just not right.

You.
You evil ones look into My eyes.
Your tantalization is all but lies.
Oh the insanity... Painful cries.
In the abyss... Far beyond the skies!

No!
You can't tell me what my life is for.
I know that it's for so much more.
More than a shutting door.
God tell me there's got to be MORE!

I am... A madman.
This was not... My plan.

Help!
I need to escape this dreadful place.
YES! I'm losing the long long race.
I'm far away from time and space.
Lord God give grace...
... Before I'm gone without a trace.
I'm the last person I want to face.

My heart is running away.
Farther from my body every day.

After the world it does run...
Looking for a reason?
I CAN'T FIND ONE!

I am... A madman.
This was not... My plan.

What is this you find in your hand?
...As your reaching out for land.
These are...
... THE SCRIBBLINGS OF A MAD MAN!

.-=[''-Midnight Walk-'']=-.

I'm taking a walk on a starless night.
Trying to find my way without a light.
I hear a scream and it fills me with fright.

I take a step and I fall into abyss.
I grab for the ledges but I always seem to miss.
I am at the end. What is all this?
I hit the bottom and something is amiss.

I rise once more.
I'm in the middle of a raging war.
What is this all for?
On the horizon I see a glowing door.

I reach for the handle.
It's so dark, I light a candle.

A cold win blows from the inside.
The shadows run amuck and I hide.
They're running oh so far and oh so wide.
They grab onto my back, taking me for a wild ride.
I shall cry more than I've ever cried.

Walking at midnight.
Walking without moonlight.
The darkness is filling me with fright.
The shadows choke out my sight.
You come in, to my delight.
Help me fight the endless fight.

Won't you unvail the sun for me.
Light the skies for all to see.
I don't want to be who I used to be.

Walking in your love so true.
It's the only thing I'll ever.
Live my life... ALL FOR YOU!

Never going to go on a midnight walk... AGAIN!

-=Save me from the monster I am=-

I see a hand reaching out to crush my soul.
It tortures me in the night so dull.

Can't handle the haunting.
Can't handle the taunting.
I tell you God, your all I'm wanting.

Save me from the demons of the night.
Save me from the painful sight.
Won't you come defeat my fright.
Please won't you tell me wrong from right.

Blood trickles down.
From the thorny crown.
Shaking the entire ground.
My soul is coming all unbound.

So save me from the monster I am.

-The Cross-

You were betrayed.
You were double crossed...
But your battle was nowhere Near lost.

You were thrown around.
Tossed to the ground.
To this place of torture you were bound.

kneeling over being whipped.
Losing strength as the blood dripped.

When you screamed there was no sound.
In mockery you were crowned.

A bloody crown of thorns upon your head.
It's probably better to just be dead.

They nailed you to the cross.
...But your death was not a loss.

...Because my sin went down when you died.
My wrongs were erased when you cried.

The blood dripped down.
Falling to the ground.
In that sea of blood my sin did drown.

The next day you were rested in a cave.
This place was your rocky grave.

On the third day the door of stone was rolled away.
For your resurection was on that day.

When you rose, our sin rose too.
Lifted from your shoulders.
Forever made new!
Praise the Lord our Savior!
It's all we can do!

The cross is where my salvation begins.
The cross is where my condemnation ends!


-=[The Reign of The Dark One]=-

-=Verse 1=-
The Dark One ventures off into the night.
Filling the hearts of the fallen with so much fright.

He is the one who causes our cries.
He just smiles as his enemy dies.

Can we live in fear?
Can we just wipe away the tear?
Can we just ignore what we hear?

The rustling in the dark.
The only light I have is a spark.

He bangs at the windows, shattering the glass.
Is this night ever gonna pass?
I can hear his footsteps in the grass.

Be my rescue from the monster.
Be my savior from the hunter.
I can't take this any longer.
... But I know your so much stronger.

-=Verse 2=-

I need to be freed from this murky cell.
... But I've been bound up so, so well.
I'm in a fiery jail.

The wind blows against The Dark One's cape.
I need to somehow escape.
I am in chains and I hear the claws scrape.

His eyes ignite with rage.
He should have never been let out of his cage.

... And now what has it come to?
My deception tells me the problem is you.
What is their left to do?

So I give you all I got.
Which, sadly is not a lot.
The Dark One fills my heart with rot.
... But this battle must be fought.
I am gonna use all I was ever thought.
I tell you my soul will never be bought...

Except by you my lord.
Who defends me from the monstrous hourde.

-=Verse 3=-

The floor shakes beneath my feet.
This absurdity... this evil, I must defeat.
... But my soul is infected with deceit.

Lord please help me stand my ground.
Help me find what's hard to be found.
Save me before the day I drown.

This is the reign of The Dark One!
A battle, that i feel, cannot be won!
Alas, a new age has begun.
Now look at what we've become.


-=[The Dark One's Identity]=-

Who is this Dark One I speak of?
...You may ask...
His identity is hidden under mask.

Is he real, or is he fake?
Waiting for the answer...
Is something I can't take!

He is the wall between dreams and reality.
He is real when you say his name.
After you see him you'll never be the same.
To defeat him you must play his game!

I look into his eyes everytime i look in the mirror.
I wipe my eyes to see the vision clearer.
I try to stare on deeper.

Who is he?
Is he me?
Can it be?

I can't escape him is all I gotta say.
There's gotta be a way to get away!

Is he a demon on my shoulder?
Is he the one who makes the night colder?

Or is it just me turned inside out?
Am I losing sight in the drought?
I'm starting to have doubt.

So tell me the identity of The Dark One!
Is he the product of what I've done?
Is he the monster I've become?
Is the near future going to be glum?

I was the dark one...
But now I'm not!
Because by you I've been sought.
It's by your blood that I've been bought.

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-=|-=THE NIGHT=-|=-
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The shadows are lurking on the wall.
Screaming so loud their midnight call.
The shaking ground shall make me fall.

Their eyes ignite.
I must fight.
Escape the painful sight.
Turn on the light.
Shine so bright.
In the gloom of the night.

I run through the streets trying to escape.
This shall not be my fate.
What an evil spirit did I create.
The maggots cause it to deteriorate.

I need you in the night so black.
Get the demon off my back.
Their slipping into our world from a crack.
I just can't carry them in a sack.
There is so much that I lack.

So take this burden from me tonight.
Take them way out of sight.
Oh, Lord, God shed some light.
Shine so bright.
In the night
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| November 3, 2009, 12:35 pm
noone will comment?
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| November 5, 2009, 7:30 am
That's cool. But it'll take some time to read the whole thing.
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| November 5, 2009, 8:32 am
thnx, but you dont have to read them all. There are multiple ones
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| November 5, 2009, 8:25 pm
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