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I have finished the prologue of my book, the Zodiac Revolution, which can be viewed here
http://zodiacrevolution.blogspot.com/
Awe thinks it's legit so that should be good enough for everyone.
>.>
<.<
I will update this comment whenever I add another chapter. Chapter 1 is due in about 10 days or so.
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| October 16, 2010, 3:42 pm
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Feel free to make characters, vehicles, buildings and scenes from the theme. I can reveal that chapter one will include a C.O.P soldier, so yes all this is related.
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| October 16, 2010, 3:56 pm
Nice, held my attention the whole time.
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| October 17, 2010, 12:23 am
That was amazing! You kept me intrigued the whole time! Although, I would change smoothe metal to sleek metal. It sounds more that way.
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| October 17, 2010, 10:11 am
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Quoting Alori Zriešto .


Well... Where to begin...

Fed decided to create the EOS with Anders from the UNE. They did it, I stuck with the COP after some angst over to go or to stay. Luckily for us all, I stayed.

>.>

Stuff happened, the spy drama started, madness went down.

Then, Moffatt and Ian decided the slowly inactiving EOS wasn't worth it, and kicked them from canon. I decided that Phaze, an EOS-er who came to us in the aftermath, was legit enough to take control of all EOS-related things.

In-universe, the EOS was no match for the COP, let alone UNE and COP combined. "We" didn't know this though, and assumed their every-single-man attack was just one part of their military. The EOS invade Earth because they're looking for something, and Earth is like "Yeah, no." and they are defeated. The war resumes as normal, the COP breaking the cease-fire as we warned Earth we would. No rest for y'all UNE.

Phaze, is this more or less accurate?
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| October 17, 2010, 7:32 pm
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Quoting Alori Zriešto .

Oh, this kills my doubts. But have you heard from Fed? Did he commit suicide or what?

PS: you can't ban me for asking this, since Steel Curtain is inactive now.
[ Just sayin', don't kill me D: ]


I haven't heard from Fed in some time. He mentioned something about college in New York last year, so maybe that's where he is.

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| October 17, 2010, 7:43 pm
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Thanks for all the feedback guys. I'm just starting chapter 1 now. May be done in a week or two.
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| October 17, 2010, 8:40 pm
Quoting Awesome-o-saurus The Not-So-Great

Anders
this more or less accurate?

*Andreas*
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| October 17, 2010, 8:43 pm
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Quoting John Moffatt
*Andreas*


Oops.
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| October 17, 2010, 8:58 pm
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Quoting Sam "Shnineham" Nineham
That IS legit. Very nice writing, and you do seem to use a wide range of vocabulary. Great prolougue, can't wait for chapter one.

EDIT: Danny, would you mind checking out my Dialectic Chaos COP comic, you might find a character you want to use or something.

Oh good I could do with some character names. Can you add a link please. Thanks for the feedback as well.
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| October 18, 2010, 3:46 pm
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Quoting The Chaos Union
Don't kick me or anything. I'm just letting you guys know that the GAMAA corps have declared war upon the UNE. And almost all the other little fractions have declared war too. Just letting you know. Don't kick please!!!

They'll be crushed by the UNE. As for the COP, these little groups will be simply ignored.
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| October 19, 2010, 9:58 pm
You have a wife? No wonder she has fleas.....

@Phaze: You read the prologue yet? If so can you email suggestions? Awe has already.
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| October 20, 2010, 4:13 pm
Quoting The Chaos Union
Take my wife's.....fleas.
Kaosh Faktzunz!

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| October 20, 2010, 4:43 pm
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Quoting Phazezorz .
I've skimmed it. It's good, but some of the detail is lacking in some spots (I like to describe specific motions, like flaring nostrils or things like that.), but it's nice.

<.<

so... erm.... do you like my prologue? >_>
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| October 20, 2010, 7:49 pm
Quoting Awesome-o-saurus The Not-So-Great

I haven't heard from Fed in some time. He mentioned something about college in New York last year, so maybe that's where he is.

I emailed him, he said he is on Mocpages by a different name and wants to stay out of it, last time I checked
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| October 22, 2010, 7:12 pm
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