After looking at it again I understated the greatness of the nose. It looks really really good! Also to clarify "rail section," I think you should double check the rear thrusters, and the little section between them, but again you have a rather magnificent pelican.
You fixed it! The wings and sides of the nose are excellent. One final thing the tail section doesn't seem right to me, fix that and you will one hot ride. Not that you don't already, but I think it will make it that much better.