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The Shadowed Rahkshi
"He comes from the shadows with great speed and power, destroying all that stand in his way.
About this creation
It had been rough. The toa had evovled and the Rahkshi no longer posed a great threat to them. The matoran had learn how to take down the Rahkshi and the Brotherhood of Makuta were getting more vunerable. The Makuta needed something...and fast.

Deep into the swamps of the island of Como Tiu, Vats of a dark green liquid hung from the ceiling on chains make of solid protodermis. A large, dark being lifted a long, leech like creature and threw it into the vat. The creature had a single eye, and was covered in thick, purple leathery skin. It was a kratta, the solid embodyment of shadows. The creature writhed in the tank, growing and shrieking as arms and legs grew from the shell of the leech. The purple skin grew darker in tone and thickened into a black metal, solid protodermis. Razor sharp spines flew from the creatures back as it screamed. From it's arms and legs grew claws and over it's single eye grew thick, black armour. 4 segments covered the creatures head and the creature curled into a ball. Then, the creature roared as it threw it's limbs against the vat, smashing it to pieces. It fell to the ground.

The creator of the being's arm came from the shadows.
"Take this staff, my Rahkshi. You've got toa to hunt."



A close up of the spine. Not that great, but it is hard to created a decent looking spine.



A side view. Here you can see the elongated staff.



A size comparison with the original. Much bigger. And more intimidating.

I wish to continue this story, and create a hand drawn comic to add to this story.

Please comment and tell me what you think.




Comments

Scott Aldridge
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ontopovamountain perry
  October 23, 2010
the spines are really good! - Mountain Boy
Scott Aldridge
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Sander Van Lembergen
  May 29, 2009
he's so AWESOME !!!!!
 I made it 
  May 6, 2009
Quoting Yuri Fassio Awesome. The ridges on the back are most cool... The only thing I can say is tha maybe it could use better thighs...
Yeah. They look almost...too thin and armourless. I'll probably remake this one day anyways so thanks for your feedback. And thanks for yours too, everybody else!!!
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  May 6, 2009
Awesome. The ridges on the back are most cool... The only thing I can say is tha maybe it could use better thighs...
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  May 3, 2009
that is awsome
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  May 3, 2009
So far this is your best creation.I like it.
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  April 29, 2009
This dude is wicked! *thumbs up* liking the spine in particular...
  April 18, 2009
Try making the eyes white. it looks good on one of the custom rahkshi i once made.
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  April 13, 2009
Ohh1 Very nice! I love the way you used those "claws" as spines!
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  April 11, 2009
Wonderful! It looks great! Much more intimidating and leech-like than the offcial sets! And I love the graphic story you've got about it. How would you like to join my bionicle writing group, the Bionicle Bard Hall? It would b an honour to have you aboard, good sir.
 
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