Previously: Ache's plan was put into action. The Beast was hunted down and slain, but Irrek ran into some other enemies...
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Music for this chapter:
Ache: Theres now way these scouts could have known we were coming. They were searching for something. And where there are scouts...
Irrek: An attack force follows.
Ache: You're right. We better get moving.
Alright, listen up people.
It would seem we got some Necrom close by, so we need to get out of here quick. Our numbers were few to begin with. We did what we came to do, now we need to leave before more of us get killed. We'll take the Southern Pass.
Gaurd: Did you hear that?
Ache: Oh no...
Ambush! Hold them back!
Necrom scouts and assassins came out from behind all the trees along the pass.
Men were being pushed off the side of the cliff.
Ache watched the scene in horror.
He jumped toward Irrek as he began to fall...
But was too late.
Ache paused a moment.
Ache: You three need to get back to the city.
Ache: I'll meet you there. Now go.
Quoting Lord Lego 436
Yeah, I agree with Brik. that loss in this chapter doesn't convey much to the reader, because they didn't know Irrek very well. You might have wanted to show a couple boring chapters in the story to show that Irrek and Ache are good friends. I love the set, though.
Well, I was hoping you would catch the line in chpater ten where Irrek asks "Why should I help you?" and Ache replies "Because we were once like brothers, fighting side by side." Also, this IS just a short comic version. The book (which Im pretty sure I will make) will be much longer and much more in depth. By the way, all these losses have a meaning later, so dont be discouraged.
well you get points for originality and for catching my attention,for you see i usually just look at and rate star wars themes and occasionally mechs,and i don't take an interest in mid evil settings and battles to often because most are the same but i can tell that you work hard on this and i actually noticed so on that note 10of10!!!
I was just starting to like Irrek... While I was thinking who my favorite character is in this story, I realized you don't go very indepth with the characters. It's not a big deal, but I think it couldn't do anything but help. Your pics. are also getting better.