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Legacies: Chapter 14- The Gaurdians
After slaying the Beast, the soldiers took the Southern Pass to escape, but they were ambushed. Many soldiers died, and Irrek fell off the side of the cliff.
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After the survivors left, Ache picked up a spear and sheild.



Be at peace...brother. I promise, your death will not have been in vain.



In the waters below the cliff, Irrek lay still.

Two mysterious figure appeared by him.
Mysterious Figure: Rise, Irrek. Your time has not yet come.

The mysterious figures placed Irrek back on top of the cliff.

Finally, he awoke.

He saw the spear and sheild in the ground, which meant someone survived the battle.

He put on his gear and headed off.

He soon caught up to Ache.
Irrek: Ache! Wait!

Ache: That voice... it can't be...

What manner of trickery is this, demon?

Irrek: This is no trick. I'm here. I'm alive.

Ache: Liar!



You Can't be Irrek. I saw him fall. Now tell me what's going on before I slit your throat, demon.
Irrek: It's me!
Ache: Liar! Why should I believe you?
Irrek: It's like you said. We once fought side by side like brothers. I want to honor that past, and continue fighting with you.

Ache was shocked and fell back, dropping his weapons.
Ache: It is you...

Irrek: Yes. I'm here to help you.

Ache: But, I saw you fall. How is it possible?
Irrek: I don't know. I remember falling, then everything went black. Next thing I knew, I was back on top of the cliff.

Suddenly, the others came running to the scene.
Gaurd: There! I thought I heard Ache's voice.

Tailen: Irrek? You're alive?
Gaurd: But how?
Irrek: I'm not sure. Come on, we need to get moving.








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Nufalak of Mythada
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Tokugawa Brickeyasu
  June 13, 2011
As you're making this a book, I'd say it would be better if Irrek showed up later in the story than emediatly after falling down the cliff. And a while after that, the "Mysterious Figures" appears again, in more person, and explains what happened. I think that would be better, purely story-wise.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Tokugawa Brickeyasu As you're making this a book, I'd say it would be better if Irrek showed up later in the story than emediatly after falling down the cliff. And a while after that, the "Mysterious Figures" appears again, in more person, and explains what happened. I think that would be better, purely story-wise.
I agree. I havent worked on the book in a LONG time, so its still stuck on like chapter two, but its already VERY different from the comics. Same basic story stays the same, but a lot of details are changed and events added. For example, I have a whole chapter showing some of Irreks life before the Vixens even go to the Crater. The Crater battle itself involves Ache, and so does Azhirs attack on the city. Much more detailed, but the core story is still there.
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  September 27, 2009
cool
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  April 18, 2009
is that an orc i see as one of the demons that died
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  April 18, 2009
I asked for a little more about the characters and you delivered. Great job!
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  April 18, 2009
Quoting Skylar LaBounty Its good you didnt kill him, I was kind of starting to like him when he "died".
Ya, I was considering a few things I could do with him. People didn't seem to like the idea of him "dying", so I went with this idea, which actually fits into the story better than my original plan.
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  April 18, 2009
very interesting, im guessing well find out who saved him in the next comic, whens it coming out
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  April 18, 2009
Its good you didnt kill him, I was kind of starting to like him when he "died".
 
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