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Star Wars Episode 1 "The Uprising" (Part One)
The republic is doing bad on Endor right now so they are going to destroy the droid base that killed or locked up clones, for more read the story
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It is a normal day at the Endor Base...



Commander Drivic: (pant pant pant) Commander Static!

Commander Static: What is it Drivic?, What happened to all the clones we sent to capture the droid base?

Commander Drivic: That's what I came here to you to talk about!, (pant pant pant) they all got killed!. you see we were doing well but then I noticed a lot of clones were dying then I looked and I saw a Hailfire Droid and a Spider Droid and last I knew it I was the only clone left and I had to come back here and tell you!

Commander Static: Did they kill all the clones?

Commander Drivic: No, they did leave some clones but they locked them up in their prison.

Commander Static: Did Captain Zim die?

Commander Drivic: No, but they locked him up.

Commander Static: Ok, I will have to talk to Commander Fox about this.



Commander Static: COMMANDER FOX!!!!!, come here...

Commander Fox: What is it?

Commander Static: First come over here and we will tell you.

Commander Fox: Ok, I will be right there...



(Commander Fox walks over)

Commander Fox: What is it?

Commander Static: The clones we sent out to take over the droid base are now dead or locked up in their prison.

Commander Fox: What happened to Captain Zim?

Commander Static: He was locked up in their prison.

Commander Fox: That's bad, I will try to call for more clones through this walkie-talkie...



(Commander Fox talks into the walkie-talkie)

Commander Fox: Republic Cruiser send us down some clones right away!

walkie-talkie: Beep Bop Boop ZZZZZZZZZZDDDDDDDDZZZZZZZZZZ



Commander Fox: The droids must have hacked our communications to the republic cruiser

Commander Static: Well, that's great we have to fight them ourselves!

Commander Drivic: Well we are dead meat...

Commander Static: We may be then but for now we aren't so we will have to take them down ourselves...

Commander Fox: Commander Lard is right we may be later but we aren't now Commander Drivic.

Commander Drivic: Ok, fine but this is not my idea...



(Engines driving toward the Commanders)

Commander Bishop: Well, I pretty much heard all that you said so I decided to bust that droid base and free all the clones.

Commander Fox: You can't because you will get killed and we can't take any risks

Commander Bishop: So what?, I don't care I am still going to do it though...

Commander Static: Ok then suit yourself...

Commander Bishop: You can't change my mind because I am the risky one and am brave but you guys are wimps.

Commander Static: YOU ARE THE WIMP!!!

Commander Fox: Stop you guys, none of us are wimps!!!

Commander Drivic: So what are we going to do?

Commander Fox: I think we should take out the base ourselves I mean it will be risky but it is worth the risk.

Commander Drivic: Ok

Commander Bishop: So let's go then!



Commander Bishop: But before I go I need someone to get on the back turret, anyone want to?

Commander Drivic: I will!

Commander Bishop: Ok then get on.

Commander Drivic: Ok, on

Commander Bishop: Ok let's go...

(Engine drives off)



Commander Static: Is he crazy?

Commander Fox: Not really he is really more bold and proud of himself

Commander Static: I can see that.

Commander Fox: Let's get the troops ready...



Commander Fox: TROOPS GET READY FOR BATTLE!!!!!!

Clones: YES SIR!!!!!!!

(There is all this rucus)



Clones: WE ARE READY SIR!!!

Commander Fox: Good!

Commander Static: How do they do that so fast?

Commander Fox: Practice!

Commander Static: O.K!

Commander Fox: Now let's go troops!!!!!!

Clones: YES SIR!!!!!!!




------------------------(and they march of to the droid base.............)----------------------------------






(PART TWO WILL COME SOON......) (Oh!, and please tell me if I made any mistakes, thank-you!)



Comments

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  July 23, 2009
dude that was awesome and long.
voidshifter .
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Adam Jacomay
  May 10, 2009
This is excelant! Great storyline!
 I like it 
  May 4, 2009
Nice story! :D
 I like it 
  May 4, 2009
sweet!!
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  May 4, 2009
Awesome!
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  April 28, 2009
Can you check out my newest moc?
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  April 27, 2009
cool, could do with more of a legooey background but i struggle with that as well, looking forward to when there is action drop me a comment will ya
 I like it 
  April 27, 2009
This is really cool. Maybe I will have a comic contest in The Five Hundred First.yay
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  April 26, 2009
Dude, thats cool! make some more comics!
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  April 26, 2009
AMAZING! really neat! Good plot too, can't wait to see #2!
 I like it 
  April 26, 2009
I agree with Fed. A good story gives you a 4/5 in my book. Just try to improve the build. Nonetheless, good work. Can you check out my newest moc?
 
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