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Legacies: Epilogue
Previously: The war is over. Arsem and Azhir have been defeated and the Book has been destroyed, but at the cost of Mirus' life.
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In order to destroy the Book, Mirus created an energy sheild around himself and it.

Unfortunately, he and everything else in it was decimated by the blast.

Irrek: Father... I'm sorry.



Irrek roder back to the city, where Leod, Serdok, Ache, and Tailen were waiting for him.



Irrek: It's finished.
Leod: Where's Mirus?
Irrek: Gone. He sacrificed himself to destroy the Book and Arsem in the Nether.

Leod: I'm sorry.

Serdok, it's time.
Serdok: Yes sir.

Time for what?
Leod: Your new position.

Serdok returned to them with a crown.
Leod: Hand me your sword.



Serdok placed the crown on his head, and Leod handed him his sword.








Irrek: Thank you. All of you. Without you, this victory would not have been possible.

A few nights later, Irrek walked outside to the new "Shrine of Heroes".

He placed his old helmet in front of it.



Ache approached him.

Ache: You must miss him.
Irrek: I do.

Do you think I'm ready to lead this kingdom? I feel... out of place.
Ache: I couldn't think of anyone better. You'll make a great leader. You are a great leader...






THE END!





Comments

 I like it 
  December 27, 2010
very great and i must again thank you for this comic because it inspired me to make kc and when you make the book,ill buy it.
 I like it 
  December 29, 2009
omg its jin'tak
  December 3, 2009
hey, what happens next
 I made it 
  October 21, 2009
Quoting Christian Schlichting I read all again because i'm getting confused in Risen. On second look this is great material for your book, but keep in mind, writing a novel or similiar is different than a comic. Just tips: Descripe the characters more with background. Irrek/Ache is a good way, maybe they had a further backstory as children or so. Also their feelings are important for a bigger story so choose you telling perspective wisely. And of course, descripe landscape, battles and details good. But i think, you have the basic talent and will make something good. Maybe it can be sold in a huge style some day.
Ya, Im hoping. As of right now, I could still use some practice with writing out everything (descriptions, emotions, etc). But thats all I need, practice.
 I like it 
  October 21, 2009
I read all again because i'm getting confused in Risen. On second look this is great material for your book, but keep in mind, writing a novel or similiar is different than a comic. Just tips: Descripe the characters more with background. Irrek/Ache is a good way, maybe they had a further backstory as children or so. Also their feelings are important for a bigger story so choose you telling perspective wisely. And of course, descripe landscape, battles and details good. But i think, you have the basic talent and will make something good. Maybe it can be sold in a huge style some day.
 I like it 
  September 9, 2009
Hey Nufalak, I finished reading your whole legacies series. It was awesome. You did a great job and I'm going to go read severed now. The whole concept was great. Keep up the great work!
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  August 31, 2009
Quoting Lord Lego 436 I still like this series better. Is the third series going to be more like Severed, or more like Legacies? I hope it's going to be like Legacies!
Im going to try to combine the best elements from both. Like the huge scale and epicness of Legacies with the mystery, linking, and character depth of Severed.
 I like it 
  August 30, 2009
I still like this series better. Is the third series going to be more like Severed, or more like Legacies? I hope it's going to be like Legacies!
 I like it 
  May 3, 2009
I can't believe you actually finished it. Are you going to make a second season.
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  May 3, 2009
that person on the end is ache's brother right.
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  May 2, 2009
Quoting Lord Lego 436 Awesome. You do know, that it would be a pleasure to write this story FOR you. If you want, I can type it all up, even add in some events to make it longer, if you want. I'll stay true to the quotes, and all of the names, and I'll type it. I can send you a sample of my writing if you want, just e-mail me at 'bobafett.436@gmail.com'. If you don't want me to, then I don't have to, but I love writing stories, and this seems to look like a pleasure to write.
Thanks for your offer, but I think I'd like to write it up myself. No offense, it's just that a lot of detail (dialogue, scenery, events) were left out in this version, so having someone else write it would leave out some of the stuff I had in mind. Thanks again, though. Maybe I'll send you parts when they're finished, and you can give me advise/ edit and revise them.
 I like it 
  May 2, 2009
*claps* Huzzah for happy endings! ...or beginnings.
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  May 1, 2009
Quoting Tyberious Ericson Actually, I did, and that was one of the greatest elements of the story, and that is what made it stand out. Yet again, great job.
Sweet! Someone actually did listen to the music! That might have been the hardest part for me because I tried to find music that would really bring out the feeling I wanted for each chapter.
 I like it 
  May 1, 2009
Actually, I did, and that was one of the greatest elements of the story, and that is what made it stand out. Yet again, great job.
 I like it 
  April 30, 2009
Good job! I really liked this comic!
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  April 30, 2009
Quoting Tyberious Ericson Great story! I loved the end.
Thanks. I can't beleive I finally finished a story. By the way, did you happen to listen to any of the music? It adds and amazing effect if you read it slow enough for the music to match, especially this one.
 I like it 
  April 29, 2009
Great story! I loved the end.
 
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