Well, this is my 2nd "War's Legacies" comic. Enjoy!
About this creation
EOS War’s Legacies
We join our brave heroes as they fight for their planet. During the last episode, they cleared Sector 14A and tried to call back to their base, only to be answered by static. Captain Mark and his small squad hurry back to where their base is located. Now they have come to their destination and are nervous to as what happened.
Sergeant Paul: …And that’s when she told her cousin’s aunt that…
Capt. Mark: Shut up, we’re almost there.
(Mark’s squad cautiously approaches the entrance.)
Capt. Mark: You two go around the perimeter and clear it. Paul, you come with me.
Mark’s squad: Yes sir!
(Capt. Mark and Sergeant Paul slowly walk into the room.)
Sergeant Paul: They’re all gone, the place is empty. Are you sure this is the right place?
Capt. Mark: Yes, I’m sure. The relics that we collected earlier are still here. Ah, there is the radio.
Sergeant Paul: The radio’s circuits are screwed up, which is why all we heard was static. However, the play back system seems to be OK. Permission to turn it on sir?
Captain Mark: Ya, go ahead.
(Sergeant Paul hits the play back button.)
EOS Radar Operator: Sir, there is an object on the radar that’s heading this way.
EOS General: What is it?
EOS Radar Operator: I don’t know, but its coming closer.
EOS General: Don’t shoot until you see it, it could be one of our Scaborrs.
EOS Soldier: AAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!
EOS General: What was that!?
(More screams are heard and the play back system stops.)
Sergeant Paul: What do you think that was?
Capt. Mark: I don’t know, and I sure don’t like it…
Robotic Voice: I’VE FOUND THE SURVIVERS.
(With that the mysterious figure shoots the two with tranquilizer darts.)
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- Well, thats the end of my second comic for "War's Legacies".
- If you missed the first one, please go check it out.
Please rate and comment!
Comments
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I made it |
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June 9, 2009 |
Quoting Hunterkiller 33
when is three coming out dude
Hopefully soon. |
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when is three coming out dude |
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I made it |
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May 10, 2009 |
Are there any VF-S 2s? |
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I like it |
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May 10, 2009 |
Mmmm... I like this, the scenery is good and the storyline is even better! 5/5, again! |
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I like it |
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May 10, 2009 |
Nice wrok with detailed ruins! Also the story is really nice! |
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I like it |
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May 10, 2009 |
I know that voice... But you know there is only one VF-S? Well, it probably isn't him, considering how his eye is red and lacks several defining features of VF-S 1... |
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I like it |
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May 9, 2009 |
First comment! nice comic man! |
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