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Great Warriors 1- The Mission
This is my first comic, It is about some clones that are forced to fight a rageing war. I hope you like my new series!!!
About this creation
Along time ago in a Galaxy far, far away... On the Hostile planet of Teth is a communication center in the heart of the lush planet. The 23rd legion watches this station with the senior Jedi Galvan and his young apprentice, Den-Var'. Yoda shows up to pay a visit to his good Jedi friend Galvan and talk about the war of Mygeeto. The battle for Mygeeto has been on for 12 years now and the Seperatist still gain control. Now Mygeeto is a Hostile planet and the people of Mygeeto have little help now. Many People have been killed by Crossfire,sickness,CIS brutality and much more. Wat Tombars brother is leading the invasion and plans on taking all the gold from the Torn apart planet. The Republic is doing its best to resist these Sep.s but the battle gets hard. The Grand Army of the Republic is being crushed by this enemy. Now since the clone numbers are few, many unexperienced clones are thrust into combat. The war is great and long but not all will survive, the 23rd legion won't always be at the outpost, someday they'll be in the frontlines.






(Sean and Core playing a Strategy game)
Core: "Your Acklay ain't going to beat this!"
(Core's Rancor crushes Sean's Acklay)
Core: "Yaaaa, I can't believe I won!"
Sean: "I can't believe it either, how the...
(Fealo' walks in)
Fealo': "Settle down you two, hey don't you two have to give Den-Var' a report on the battle of Mygeeto?"
Core: "Yes Sir!"




(Core and Sean walk out)
Sean: "Come on Core we'll be late!"
Core: "I'm coming!!!"
(Core and Sean have left)
Fealo': "So how are my other boys doing?"
Tee: "Doing fine, but Mone' found something on the scanner."
Mone': "Ya, there's an Acklay moving into a clone camp to the west, I was wondering..."
Fealo': "Yes you can use the War Room to warn them, if Galvan lets you."


Mone': "Thanks Sir!"
Fealo': "Go before your late!"
Mone': "Yes sir


(Mone' walks out of the Room)
Fealo': "Since there all out of here, do you want to play me in that game that Core just loves?"
Tee: "Yes sir."
Fealo': "You'll lose I hope you know that!"
Tee: "Whatever!?!?"


(While Tee and Fealo' are in the communication Room, Yoda and Galvan talk about the battle of mygeeto and the fear of losing it)
Galvan: "Yoda, we must send more troops to Mygeeto, otherwise the fate of losing the war will happen."
Yoda: "Yes,hmmmmm,I believe so,hmmmm,but who must we send,hmm.
Galvan: "I don't know, hey, how about the 23rd legion! These guys would surely do a good job, I could go with them. Den-Var could watch the place."
Yoda: "We must send them,hmmmm, this is a dark day for the republic."


(Mone' rushes up to Galvan)
Mone': "Galvan, theres an Acklay moving into a camp to the west of here, I need to conntact them to..."
Galvan: "Yes you can use the War Room to contact them, it should be avaible for you."
Mone': "Thank you sir."
(Mone' runs off)
Galvan: "I'll go tell Fealo' about the mission the shall have."


Tee: "Yes, I win for the third time, Yaaa!!!
Fealo: "Hey, I only had a famba and a gornt left!"
Galvan: "Hello Fealo'."
Fealo: "Hello Galvan, how nice to see ya."
Galvan: "You to, hey could you do something for me Fealo?"
Fealo: "Sure, what though?"
Galvan: "I was wondering if you could, well go to Mygeeto and help fight the war there. You see, we're running out of troops and your kind of our last resort.
Fealo':Um... Yes we could.
Galvan: Good, I need you ready by tomorrow."
Tee: "by tomorrow!"
Galvan: "Yes, I shall asist you, but you might need someone to stay back though, I'll let you make that option, okay.
(Galvan walks away)


(The Rest of the troops get back)
Fealo': "I have some important news. Listen up, we will be going to fight on Mygeeto, we must be ready to leave by tomorrow okay, so sleep well. Mone' will be staying behind on this mission because we need some one to keep in touch with us, understood?"
Everyone: "YES SIR!"






Thanks for READING and Pleas leave a COMMENT!!!

Thank you and HAPPY BUIDING
Noah F. Nei













Comments

 I like it 
  March 11, 2010
great! one of the best I've seen!
 I like it 
  January 12, 2010
Very Good... but wheres the second?!?!?!?
 I like it 
  December 13, 2009
AWESOME COMIC!!!!!
Noah Nei
 I like it 
kameron schollmeyer
  September 24, 2009
yay!!!!! oh and why havent you been on latley
 I like it 
  August 21, 2009
The best comic that I have ever seen!!!! awsome!!!!! 5/5 rating
 I made it 
  August 12, 2009
Quoting kameron schollmeyer come on noah dont quit making comics
Now that I've seen more interest I might make another!
Noah Nei
kameron schollmeyer
  July 28, 2009
come on noah dont quit making comics
 I like it 
  July 6, 2009
nice comic
 I like it 
  May 29, 2009
Great comic! Hey, could you check out some of my new mocs?
 I like it 
  May 28, 2009
Hi Noah its Nick. I left a bigger comment on "breach on secter 12'. really cool legos.
 I like it 
  May 19, 2009
nice war room
Noah Nei
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kameron schollmeyer
  May 15, 2009
i love it
 I made it 
  May 15, 2009
Oh by the way everyone, if you want updates on when the next comics come out look on my homepage and I can promise you it will show if it is coming out, just look on the bottom and it will say finished on that episode. Please comment my other stuff will your at it. I can Promise you the next one will be more intense!!! HAPPY BUILDING :)
 I made it 
  May 15, 2009
Quoting Galvan . cool! thanks for putting me in there
Dude, I didn't even Remember that was your name on moc!!! I just made it up, but thats really cool its you (giggle, giggle, giggle)
 
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