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LOCG Episode 1: Training
This is my comic series. There is 1 person on mocpages that I want to give a special thanks to... and it's COMMANDER FED. He inspired me to create this comic series.
About this creation
Opening Note: Thankyou to COMMANDER FED for inspiring me to create this comic series. Please enjoy.

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Prologue:
It was a time of war, and loss. The Jedi were losing numbers. The Jedi were far out-numbered by thousands of battle droids. It had been an attempted rescue gone wrong. It was at this moment that the Clone Army had appeared and rescued the Jedi in a desperate retreat.

It was on this planet, Geonosis, that started the clone wars. Little did anybody know, it was a plot engineered by the Sith, that this battle would take place.

The Jedi fought beside the clone army for the first time. Behind the scenes of this bloody battle, were special op squads, trying to tip the war in their favour. The Commando’s were destroying droid factories. The Freedom Fighter Squad was trying hard to prevent 2 battalions of droids from getting to the battlefield.

This is the story of one very gifted clone trooper of the Freedom Fighter Squad. A clone by the name of Gray.


Kamino, Tipoca city
2 hours before Geonosis



Gray: Gunship holding at a safe distance.
Darman: (To himself) What gunship?
Gray: Droid defence is holding position.
Slag: (To himself) They’re holograms.
Gray: I can hear you on the helmet comlink you know. I’m just trying to keep it realistic.
Ordo: He’s right. You to will get yourselves killed if you don’t take these things seriously.


Gray: We may have been camping out for a week-
Darman: 2 hours.
Ordo: Darman. Stop it.
Gray: The point is, I don’t want to lose you. You guys are my best friends.
Ordo: Lets get on with the mission.


Gray: Go, go, go!
Ordo: Open fire!


Gray: Codes downloaded.
Ordo: This one’s dead.
Computer voice: Mission Accomplished. Simulation Terminated.


Darman: Same test, same result.
Slag: They need to come up with new missions.
Gray: Just wait until the real thing. That’s when you’ll have to take it seriously.
Ordo: That time is in 1 and a half hours.
Clone: Private Gray? Sergeant Kal Skirata needs to talk to you.
[The Clone hands Gray a comlink hologram]


Kal Skirata(hologram): Gray. I saw your training mission. Great work.
Darman: Thanks.
Kal((hologram): You 2 need to take it more seriously. Hi Ordo. How’d it go?
Ordo: These guys were great, other than the not taking it seriously.
Gray: What’d you want to say?


Kal: Oh, yes. Gray, I you’re now a Clone Commando. Your test scores have been so high, they’ve decided to give you a chance. Private Dak has your suit. You have 1 last chance to test out the armour before you get deployed.
Gray(hologram): Are you serious?
Kal: 110%. Hurry up. Go. Now!


Gray: This armour’s great.
Kal(helmet comlink): We’ve got to end the simulation. You’re being deployed in 2 minutes. Make your way to the gunship “Freedom Fighter”.
Darman (helmet comlink): We’re coming with you.
Ordo (helmet comlink): Gray. I won’t be with you for this mission.


Kal: I’m sorry I couldn’t be their in person to see you off on your mission. Boys, It’s been an honour.
Gray: We’ll make you proud, kal’buir. Won’t we boys?
Darman: You know it.
Slag: We’ll all come back alive. I promise.
Kal: I know you will, boys. Goodbye my sons.


Kal: While you’re being sent off to fight…


Kal: …I’m stuck in a room with a comlink!!!

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  • Well, this is the first episode in my series. Hope you like it
  • Special thanks to Commander Fed for inspiring me to make this comic in the first place. So thank you, Fed
  • Please leave a commment "Thank you"

    Here are some of the contest winners` characters: Commander Slag and
    Commander Darman

    Check out the Premiere, hosted by Han Solo and Criss Angel.

    Here is my thanks to Commander Fed.
    Well, here it is.
    Commander Fed, I would just like to say Thank you for inspiring me to create this comic series. I know I've said Thank you so many times, but thats how thankful I am. You are my #1 fave builder. Thank you for joining MOCpages, and for making your comic seires`.

    You're the best.



Comments

 I made it 
  July 3, 2010
Quoting Random Dan I'm sorry I didn't comment when this first came out, but I did now. It was wonderful. Also nice to see you back. Will I be in the next episode and i'd like to know if you want to be in my newest comic series?
Sorry to keep you waiting, but I've been busy. Yeah, sure, I'd love to be in it. And I'm not sure about when I'll be able to complete the series. It seems I'm just too busy, but I'm trying
Trent Colledge (95)
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Random Dan
  May 27, 2010
I'm sorry I didn't comment when this first came out, but I did now. It was wonderful. Also nice to see you back. Will I be in the next episode and i'd like to know if you want to be in my newest comic series?
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  February 27, 2010
sweet suits send me some but check spelling
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  February 27, 2010
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  February 9, 2010
imm also macking a comic series so enter now im hosting a comic contest your alredy goma be in my comic
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  December 22, 2009
cool, I am glad to see that you are back. -Matt Shack
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  December 22, 2009
Coolio! I like it! :D Would you mind commenting on this: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/173930
 I made it 
  August 21, 2009
Quoting Keir Naboo where"d you get the visor??
The visor is custom made. All credit to Darman Skirata.
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  August 20, 2009
where"d you get the visor??
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  August 19, 2009
howd you make grays visor thing?
 I made it 
  July 13, 2009
Quoting Aiden Faulconer great comic.can you paint my clone insted of barly seeing the gray on him
I will as soon as my wrist heals.
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  July 12, 2009
great comic.can you paint my clone insted of barly seeing the gray on him
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  June 19, 2009
Thats awesome!! could I be in a comic? maybe? please?
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  June 15, 2009
i need to read more !!! awsome comic
 I made it 
  June 4, 2009
Quoting GAR Commander Marshal Fang/ can i be in one?
Sure. Come to the LOCG group, and I'll talk to you about it.
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  June 3, 2009
can i be in one?
 I made it 
  May 28, 2009
Quoting Commander Fed Awesome episode!!! I love your Commando allot!!! Anyways thanks and I am glad to be such a huge inspiration to you my friend!!!
Thank you, Fed. I'll be posting episode 2 soon.
 I made it 
  May 26, 2009
Quoting Aiden Faulconer cool,i have made a buddy icon for you i can e-mail it to you if i can get your e-mail address
tmbs92@bigpond.com or commandergray@gmail.com
 I like it 
  May 26, 2009
cool,i have made a buddy icon for you i can e-mail it to you if i can get your e-mail address
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  May 25, 2009
cool
Trent Colledge (95)
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Commander Striker
  May 22, 2009
sick cant wait for more
 I made it 
  May 22, 2009
Quoting Commander Striker sick cant wait for more
btw, thanks for the icon
 I made it 
  May 22, 2009
Quoting Captain Lawrence Awesome! Great story and clones! Great commando! Did you paint him?
Yep. Every clone, except Dak, is custom painted.
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  May 22, 2009
Awesome! Great story and clones! Great commando! Did you paint him?
Trent Colledge (95)
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Darman Skirata
  May 19, 2009
I love it!! Very exciting! I like my guy's attitude. When will Ep. 2 be up?
 I made it 
  May 19, 2009
Quoting Darman Skirata I love it!! Very exciting! I like my guy's attitude. When will Ep. 2 be up?
Ep 2 could take up to 2 months. BTW, Where have you been? I haven't seen you in the group much.
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  May 19, 2009
Cool!I really like this!Cant wait till im in it!And Faelo!
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  May 19, 2009
Wow! One of the best comics I've ever seen! That whole simulation thing was my favorite part. That commando helmet was VERY nice as well. Keep it up. I can't wait for episode II.
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  May 19, 2009
I love it! When will ep 2 be up? And will I be in it?
 
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