Much better. I'm glad you didn't change the design, though. I've just recently joined NE.O.S., BTW, and I perceive that the color scheme is red and white? I can defintely live with those colors if it is. I'm bringing in a bunch called the Trelassi, followers of an exiled prince, Bosk of Trelask. Their battle colors are black and green, but I can get them to add red and white detailing along the hulls of their ships. Your Mocs give me a good idea of what to build for. No direct copies, of course, since I've got my own design parameters pretty well worked out. I don't do that anyway. Anyway, I tend to ramble, so, keep up the good work!