The 3rd and Final episode of my sereis Banza!. Sgt.Pelko and Com.Daniels preapare for the biggest fight of thier lives.
About this creation
We waited for hours not one Nazi apperead.
Com.Davis: Brown get down!
Lt.Brown: Sir we havent seen one sniper they must have gotten lost or maybe...
Com.Daniels: OPEN FIRE!
Com.Davis: Fall back fall back!
Pvt.Smith AGHH! Im hit sir!
Com.Davis: Com on!
Pvt.Lenny: Covering fire!
Sgt.Pelko Keep Firing!
Nazi Soldier: I vill kill you
Pvt.Lenny: Thats it!
Com.Davis: Lenny get back here!
Pvt.Lenny: Get back you Nazi Bitc*es!
Officer: Da! I vill kil you!
Com:Daniels: Lenny is that Oil?
Pvt.Lenny: What? *sighs* Son of a..
Pvt.Lenny: AHH! AHHH!! Fu*k Ahhh!
Com.Davis: Hang on!
Sgt.Pelko: Da*m what now sir?
Com.Daniels:... we fight!
Then bombs fell form the sky..
I took to Commander outside to see if Medics could help. It was too late.
40 YEARS LATER..
Today is the same day we fought here to me nothing has cahnged but it has..
Even though i lost a dear friend im glad we fought this was the enemey`s last stand.. This was my last stand.
NIce one!! I think I'll use that sniper thing for one of my movies. And one thing; no need to censor your words in you creations, only comments go through the filter, Have you evre read the whole rules????
Quoting Tyler Saplan
This si great but the title doenst go with the battle. you say it's "Banzai!" and Banzai means Charge in Japanese yet, there are germans...?? just saying. otherwise its great. 9.5/10