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About this creation
My dreams are now as nightmares,
as I wander through and through,
My mind is now corrupted,
as wander through the new,
New doors have opened to me,
and I've paused then to step in,
wondering, and puzzling,
at all that lies within,
I step then through the blackness
of the open portal there,
and I step out into wonder,
that I never then could share,
I meet then a real new sight,
as the colors swirl by,
I see a field,a whole new world,
and I step forth now, but nigh!
What are these things that dwell here,
oh black creatures of the night,
these skeletons and wanderers,
who blunder in the blight.
A road now falls before me,
going down into the field,
I see bright blooms around me,
and I hope they are my shield,
A shield now from the danger,
that now dwells within my mind,
among the red, and white, and pink,
I know not what I'll find.
Things rise up from the ocean;
sea of Red, and pink, and black,
and I wander on the road there,
looking now for what I lack,
my dreams have drawn me to here,
to this field ever bright,
And carry ever onward,
though my mind's not always right.
I walk now through the meadow,
and I wonder what it means
to ever, ever wander,
in this endless Field of Dreams.
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March 30, 2010 |
Woah, great poem... |
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March 6, 2010 |
Yikes! |
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July 24, 2009 |
Whoa, creepy! |
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July 18, 2009 |
Top creation there mate and by all means great poetry. Awesome work overall. Keep 'em snappin' together :) |
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July 14, 2009 |
I thought this was a creation by Nannan when I saw the main pic! Great job! ~M |
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July 14, 2009 |
Somebody's into Gothic Horror... Very Lovecraft/Poe - Love it and the dark poetry... Top stuff - I may need to make a san check! |
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July 13, 2009 |
Wow! |
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July 11, 2009 |
crazy poetry in a good way. |
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July 11, 2009 |
Deceptively beautiful. |
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July 11, 2009 |
How, ominous... |
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July 10, 2009 |
Garth went and took that joke, but I'm tired so I'll go with it anyway. If you build it, they will comment. Nice one Kevin and congrats on the Brothers Brick blog! ~ Chris. |
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Tristan Amaya July 9, 2009 |
Hmmm Kind of creepy :l |
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July 9, 2009 |
NICE! Lovin' the foliage and cobble stone path. |
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July 9, 2009 |
I'm all for the foliage and red magnifying lens! |
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July 9, 2009 |
Awesome! You've been blogged on The Brothers Brick! The poem is fantastic! |
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July 9, 2009 |
If you build it, they will come. And eat your soul! |
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July 9, 2009 |
fantastic work |
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July 9, 2009 |
Wow, that is a great scene to read the poem to. |
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July 9, 2009 |
Excellent! Looks kind of like he's stepping out of an Oblivion gate :) |
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July 9, 2009 |
Awesome yet creepy...Did you write the poem? You have LOT'S of flowers...Pick-A-Brick time... ;-) |
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July 9, 2009 |
Very nice! |
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July 9, 2009 |
Well Kevin, you built it. They're comin'. |
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July 9, 2009 |
Nice poem...kinda creepy somehow...but makes you think. I like the landscape as well. |
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July 9, 2009 |
that's kinda disturbing... I love it! |
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July 9, 2009 |
Wow! You have an excellent collection of flowers. |
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