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Siege of separatist city
my moc-off against Fero
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My moc-off entry against Commander Fero- Republic troops are attacking against walled city on Deko Neimoidia (That planet is never seen -only mentioned in canonical sources so i improvised the landscape myself). Jedi General Roan Shryne (canonical character) is leading attack- but bridge to the city has been destroyed and entrances are protected by powerful lasergates and droidarmy- so only way to get city and capture the neimoidian general Kalat Durd (cousin of Lok Durd- and my own creation XD) is to blow hole to the floodgate -which is used by neimoidians to get cheap electricity from the watercurrent during the floodseason. Clone commander Forn’s (one with darktan/gold hands- don't ask me about the name i just came up with that but it is one of Aurebesh-letters also =f) engineer team is swimming towards floodgate ready to detonate it open and attack the generals bunker that happens to be just behind the wall
(well that's strange but i wanted to build it - and i couldn't build it farther)…

some background music:




Different view

Explosion caused by droid's artilleryfire- that poor clone may survive with his armor but probably get injured pretty bad...

Droids sniping atop the dam
Destroyed bridge- all credit for that idea of using net as base to build broken bridge goes to Sebeus I -i just used it because it looks good and it's still intact and movable- but flexible legopanel- very creative but not my idea originally...

Clones swimming to their target

Behind Forn there is engineerclone with Detpack and custom Shotgun (inspired by Battlefront2)

This droid uses rocket launcher- also inspired by the battlefront...

From back...

Droids are guarding the entrance to the city which is also protected by Lasergate (those clearorangepieces are not so clear as i would have wanted but will do...)

Clonemedic goes to give bacta to the injured clonesoldier...

General Durd watches his holotable and looks worried (looks Viceroy gunray also :O) I customized neimoidian guard but his head looks bad in this lighting- too clearly decal- i'm sorry- but i think that conquistadorhelmet suits to neimoidian guards pretty well- what do you think?

Only canonical character in this dio- Senior Jedi General Roan Shryne (he looks like Harrison Ford though XD)

Droids and heavy anti-infantry cannon in the background


Kalat Durd in his bunker- sorry about dark pic...



Comments

  October 25, 2009
Nicely done, I missed this I think, wow, my net bending technique became very famous, I'm checking out all pages with my name on it (I just looked up my name in mocpages browser) and I've seen a lot creations featuring my technique, really awesome, especially because I get the credit for it, unlike my canon fire technique :( Anyway, great job and keep it up
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  October 17, 2009
Awesome moc i love the broken bridge
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  August 28, 2009
Really great! I see you used Roan Shryne, he is a cool Jedi. Would you mind checking this out? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/148320 I made up a character, Natalia Shryne, his sister.
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  August 2, 2009
Quoting Commander Fero wow I FORGOT to comment on this! and man I love that bridge effect swash this is a really good dio! and I love hat building!
Thanks- this is my moc-off against yours Aargonar and i think our moc-off is stuck- Sloper wanted be judge but he didn't join our group...
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  August 1, 2009
Cool! As always, nice amount of detail. I love the explosions and the clones wading through the water. Please check out my new mech: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/140870
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Michael Sloper
  July 26, 2009
Um, this is great and all with good detail but how do I judge this bye?
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  July 26, 2009
Quoting Michael Sloper Um, this is great and all with good detail but how do I judge this bye?
So you would like to judge- if so i invite you to the group founded for this moc-off you can find grading scale from there...
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  July 24, 2009
Quoting Rayce Gunnar I like the idea of the broken bridge. Really well-built. Now why it isn't perfect. The inclusion of assassin droids wasn't the best idea because they do more of undercover missions. Also, I like everything in pairs so two artillery guns would be better. Sorry for the heavy criticism, it was just details that were wrong. But over all a really nice MOC!
Good that someone writes more than just "awesome" or "cool" -fun to get comments like this -but must say that i think you do this because i commented yours vig too heavily- anyway you were right with ig-droids but not what you said about dual sabers in my jedi purge vig- watch my reply please...
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  July 24, 2009
I like the idea of the broken bridge. Really well-built. Now why it isn't perfect. The inclusion of assassin droids wasn't the best idea because they do more of undercover missions. Also, I like everything in pairs so two artillery guns would be better. Sorry for the heavy criticism, it was just details that were wrong. But over all a really nice MOC!
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  July 24, 2009
Quoting J Knabe thats just wow really good work awesome!!!!!
Rating please...:)
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Kir Kanos Kalinka
  July 23, 2009
Spiffy and thats all. Nothing too amazing or original. 4/5.
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Kir Kanos Kalinka
  July 23, 2009
also you pump out mocs at an abnormally high speed. How old are you?
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Sander Van Lembergen
  July 23, 2009
Could you check out my newest MOC its Sev a clone commando .
  July 23, 2009
thats just wow really good work awesome!!!!!
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  July 23, 2009
Quoting Kir Kanos Kalinka also you pump out mocs at an abnormally high speed. How old are you?
older than most but -not not as old as many of the best- also i don't always post every moc after i made them- sometimes i can be weeks without doing anything and then i post many mocs at once -weeks after i made them so it creates feeling like i would do new all the time...
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  July 23, 2009
Cool i like the bridge could you check my new moc http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/138130
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Sander Van Lembergen
  July 22, 2009
JET 1 STAR WARS CREATION AND you have 100 , for that i'm gonna make something
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Sander Van Lembergen
  July 22, 2009
Well i will make on the Day that you made your 100th sw creation post the third episode of my Clone Wars Series !
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  July 22, 2009
Awsome! Love the detail! could you look at my newest moc? Thanks - Cody
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  July 22, 2009
Quoting Sander Van Lembergen JET 1 STAR WARS CREATION AND you have 100 , for that i'm gonna make something
Lolz there is something special coming for my 100th sw-moc- i have more than hundered mocs already but "only 99" sw-mocs...
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  July 22, 2009
Thank you for the comments and advice you gave me on my new MOC. I appreciate it a lot!
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  July 22, 2009
Very nice. I love the explosion effect and the bridge (isn't that piece shifting idea wonderful!). However, I think the seppie base could've been a bit better. Nonetheless, good work. I'll judge later today, too tired right now. BTW I left you a comment on your Youtube channel, can you respond?
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George Kemper
  July 21, 2009
Not bad but it could use some work. 4/5-George
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Sander Van Lembergen
  July 21, 2009
THIS IS AwESOME !!!!! the bridge is very cool ! (do you know where i can get a Commando Sev Decals ?)
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  July 21, 2009
Would you mind checking out my latest MOC please : http://mocpages.com/moc.php/137735
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  July 21, 2009
Great job! The fort and bridge are great, and I like the clone with detpack. BTW, the sequel to "Beginning..." is out if your interested.
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  July 21, 2009
I love the bridge, the design, and especially the minifigs. The MOCoff should be fun one!
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  July 21, 2009
This is epic. Detailed, accurate and exciting to watch! I'm sure you'll win...perhaps I should check out Fero's entry...=)
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  July 21, 2009
Quoting Felix Schloendorff cool!! Where did you get the guard's face decal? was it fine cloneir .com?
Nope- it was originally from brickshelf -but i modified quite a lot so you can't find it from the net as similar...
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  July 21, 2009
cool!! Where did you get the guard's face decal? was it fine cloneir .com?
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  July 21, 2009
awesome man, that has lots of detail, i really like the bridge and the swimming clones, they look epic
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  July 21, 2009
awesome man, that has lots of detail, i really like the bridge and the swimming clones, they look epic
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  July 21, 2009
Cool nice battle and I like the broken bridge effect!
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  July 21, 2009
That is so cool. I like all the blaster effects. Could you please check this out: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/137269
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Sander Van Lembergen
  July 20, 2009
Just a new Creation and already 2 i like it-ers !?!? How do you do That ?!?!?!
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  July 20, 2009
awsome job
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  July 20, 2009
Great job! I like the details! If you get a chance, please take a look at my newest creations.
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  July 20, 2009
cool, looks pretty realistic. ~moses '.
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  July 20, 2009
nice greenery, and that broken bridge is sweet!
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  July 20, 2009
Great job! I love the explosion effects you created, and the bridge is full of detail! Greatest work so far, and keep it up! You're doing great!
 
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