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Severed: Part 13- Tainted
Previously: After learning more of his past, Jin'Tak returned to the Manor only to find it destroyed and Arralek killed. He swore vengeance on the troll raiders responsible.
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Jin'Tak returned to his house and started preparing his things for the journey east. He sensed others approaching.

Jin'Tak: You're not coming.

Tyberious: You dont need to do this alone. That's why you have brothers, to help you.

Jin'Tak: You're wrong. Arralek raised me as his own. He was like a father to me. I need to be the one who brings justice to his murderers. I need to discover the secrets of my past.

I'm entrusting you four to watch over the kingdom.

Brik, I am entrusting the security of the Eastern Settlement to you.

Gyfford, you will take the Western Settlement.

Cadfael, you shall watch the Northern Settlement.

Tyberious, you will gaurd the Southern Settlement.

Good luck to you all. Fairwell.

Jin'Tak traveled through the mountain pass and headed east, into a forest.

Bodies and arrows littered the ground.

He dismounted to examine the arrows.



Something started moving behind him.



His horse reered into the air from the arrow.

Jin'Tak turned around just in time to get a glimpse of one of his attackers swinging a mace... Everything went black.



When he came to, strange creatures were surrounding him.

What appeared to be the cheif gave an order in a strange language.

The creatures removed their masks.





The cheif began talking to Jin'Tak.

He raised his staff toward him. Jin'Tak felt the energy of the crystal heating his skin. It felt like an entity was merging with his body. He was suddenly filled with rage, unable to fully control himself. His skin began to change.

Jin'Tak: Enough!

Jin'Tak fell to the ground, back to normal and light headed.





The mysteries keep on coming! Please feel free to speculate.




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 I like it 
  August 13, 2009
Something tells me that these creatures are somehow involved with the ancients.
 I made it 
  August 13, 2009
Quoting Christian Schlichting These creatures are simple and just very cool. Best surprise in this story yet. May i ask to be allowed to use them in my own Legonia-world too? (with credit to you, of course) I need some races for the second continent.
Sure. Just try to keep them as a tribal society: Small camps/families scattered throughout forests, mainly living in caves and primitive tents. Oh, and the crystals are a big part of their culture,too.
 I like it 
  August 11, 2009
These creatures are simple and just very cool. Best surprise in this story yet. May i ask to be allowed to use them in my own Legonia-world too? (with credit to you, of course) I need some races for the second continent.
 I made it 
  July 25, 2009
Quoting Master Emerald Phoenix All Right!! Finally some custom brick-built heads! Dear Sir, I have enjoyed the watching and reading of your most engaging series LEGACIES, and have become an avid fan of your work. Maybe not so much the building, but the story and generalized propping of each scene makes a much better impact upon my mind then simply posting a story without much other than dialouge. Keep the story running, Master Emerald Phoenix
Thanks. Its good to hear some feedback on the story as a whole. I'm in the proccess of making it into a novel, thought the progression is slow.
  July 22, 2009
All Right!! Finally some custom brick-built heads! Dear Sir, I have enjoyed the watching and reading of your most engaging series LEGACIES, and have become an avid fan of your work. Maybe not so much the building, but the story and generalized propping of each scene makes a much better impact upon my mind then simply posting a story without much other than dialouge. Keep the story running, Master Emerald Phoenix
 I like it 
  July 22, 2009
Trippy.
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  July 22, 2009
keep them coming that was cool,i like the creatures,they looked cool
 I like it 
  July 22, 2009
nice man
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  July 21, 2009
Cool, I like the creatures' masks!
 I like it 
  July 21, 2009
This was weird. I love it.
 I like it 
  July 21, 2009
Very nice, and I'm excited to see more of this. Keep it up!
 
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