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On In A Million: The Story of Commander Reek Part 2: Kamino
2nd part of my comic!
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(Commanders shuffle through hall)

(As troops fall in)
Alpha-17: You are the best, the elite. You have passed intense training and and I'm proud of you. Congradulations.


(After naming the others)Alpha-17: You will be called, Reek, for you gallantry at the Battle of Geonosis.
Reek: Thank you sir.
Alpha-17: I expect you to see great things from you.

Alpha-17: You will be, hmm, Faelo. It sounds cool.
Faelo: Thank you sir!

(In the eating area)
Reek: That was interesting.
Faelo: Yeah, I got a cool name!

(Clones getting drinks)

Reek: Yummy chicken!

Clone Commander: We are to go to the training room to receive blasters!
All: Yes sir!

Commander: Cool gun!!!!!

Alpha 17: These, men, are the most common blasters you will use and maintain. They are your life, so take good care of them.

Reek: Sir, but why are these blasters set to kill? Aren't we training?

Alpha-17: This is no normal training exercise, Reek. So make no mistakes.

(Clones take position, with Reek and Faelo on opposite teams)
Alpha-17: Ready, set, FIGHT!

(Clones fire)

(Reek's teammate hits Faelo)

Reek: FAELO!!!!!(Jumps wall to help him)

Alpha-17: CONTINUE THE EXERCISE!

(Faelo's teamate shoots Reek in the neck)
Reek: Ahhh!!!!!

(Thump)

Read this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This is my second comic, the third, I'll start on it.

Please:

RATE AND COMMENT!

Set pics:

Food area.

Training area.

Room.



Comments

 I like it 
  August 18, 2009
Alright, Commander Reek, it looks like you're my opponent for Round 1 of the MocOlympics, category: Steampunk. Let's see what you can bring! Good luck.
 I like it 
  August 8, 2009
Great story Reek! I see you got the Tank droid set after all.
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  August 6, 2009
Woah. "I got a cool name!" Lol. *Sniff* You.. DO care about me! *Sniff* Seriousyl, sweet comic. But it all happens too fast. But I like it regardless. :D
 I like it 
  August 4, 2009
hey thaks for the comment and yes yellow spartan armor is great!
 I like it 
  August 3, 2009
Nice storyline! I like the frame by frame, I need to do more of that.
 I like it 
  August 2, 2009
Cool, I'm glad you didn't ditch my storyline. Nice job.
 I like it 
  July 31, 2009
Nice story! The eating room, place, is excellent! Great work!
 I made it 
  July 29, 2009
Quoting CC-1792 Commander Trixe Awesome but why do the clones have to kill each other for their training I mean that's kind of cruel. But cool story 5/5!
They're not SUPPOSED to get hurt.
 I like it 
  July 29, 2009
Awesome but why do the clones have to kill each other for their training I mean that's kind of cruel. But cool story 5/5!
 I like it 
  July 29, 2009
When will #3 be out????
 I like it 
  July 29, 2009
Cool comic!Im gonna post my second episode tommorow,if im not buisy.Like what swash said,needs more detail.But still good.
 I like it 
  July 29, 2009
Wow, just wow.
 I like it 
  July 29, 2009
Good -needs details though- please check out my new too :)
 I made it 
  July 28, 2009
Quoting Commander Flare awesome dude!!! i cant wait until the next one! do you think that you could put Commander Flare in the next one? ;)
Hmm. Sure. I just finished the set, it'll be a battle, so ya you can!
 I like it 
  July 28, 2009
awesome dude!!! i cant wait until the next one! do you think that you could put Commander Flare in the next one? ;)
 I like it 
  July 28, 2009
cool comic.
 I like it 
  July 28, 2009
Wow this is sooooo good!!! I can't even wait for the next one! man I wish I could be in it but you barely know me, ohwell:)
  July 27, 2009
just switch the arms with some other Minifigs.
 I made it 
  July 27, 2009
Quoting Trent Colledge (95) Wow. Good story. Can't wait for number 3. When's it out?
When I make the set. What should it be about?
 I like it 
  July 27, 2009
THANKS MAN! :D
 I like it 
  July 27, 2009
Wow. Good story. Can't wait for number 3. When's it out?
 I like it 
  July 27, 2009
OMG WHAT KIND OF TRAINING IS THIS?
 I made it 
  July 27, 2009
Quoting Spartan 116 Dibo AWSOME!!!! can i be in it pal? you could just use dry erase. :]
Down the road, sure.
 I like it 
  July 27, 2009
AWSOME!!!! can i be in it pal? you could just use dry erase. :]
 I made it 
  July 27, 2009
Quoting Spartan Crusader Matt Shack sounds good, just moddify it 2 look like me!
How? I will not paint him.
 I like it 
  July 27, 2009
sounds good, just moddify it 2 look like me!
 I made it 
  July 27, 2009
Quoting Spartan Crusader Matt Shack nice man, when will I be in it?!
Hmm, as who? I met let you be in, I have a Boba fig to use as you.
 I like it 
  July 27, 2009
nice man, when will I be in it?!
 
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