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701st adventures:comic 4-part 1-Fang's origins(brothers for ever)
This is my 4th comic in the series. It introduces a new ally and a new antagonist. There will be 2 more special comics following it. It also takes place in the past just in case you guys didn't get it. Cal one of the jet troopers is my friend and his old nickname had jet trooper in it.
About this creation
Two jet troopers who never know each other till they stepped(flied) on the soil of an old geonosis's mining field. Together they escape from 2 different droid scouting parties. one is a new weapon.


"SSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!",you could here two jet packs hovering.

Two clones land on what looks like an old carrier ship.

"fang we have to get out of here!",announcing the jet trooper on the left."i know, i know Cal, but were running low on fuel",says the clone on the right.

Cal: Look! Run Fang!
Fang: Hu?! What?

A new separatist tank appears. it looks like a slug, but the clones know better. It is a tank..........

Cal: Clankers on the right!!!

Droids are marching through the ragged and burnt sand.

The clones get hit.

Later they are imprisoned on a chain.

Droid 1: Sir! the clones are waking. what shall we do?

Fang: I know. come closer.
Droid:okay.................

Fang punches the droid and shuts it down.

Cal: They never took our bombs! Stupid clankers.
Fang: lets blow this place to hell!

They accurately throw there bombs at the droids near by.

The take the last bomb and blow the chain off the energy pole. Than they took a rocket droids fusion cutter to cut the remaining chain of them.

The clones get there armor,
Cal: Fang you think we can make it to a safe zone with the jet packs?
Fang:No, i don't, but we could hot wire that sep tank, if we don't set it on first.
Cal: O.k.

While Cal hot wires it fang waits(he is not very good at hot wiring)

They take off in the tank.




The clones will meat again in the next comic being trained as Marshal commanders with ARC training added to. Both were captains who survived there first attack but there team didn't. they would meet up a day later. When they got back they both were promoted to marshal commander for such dedication, finishing there missions even though every one else was dead, and taking out the droid scout party. They got awarded with corps, instead of legions because they brought back the separatist(sep) tank. Corps are bigger than legions by the way. At first jet troopers they both continued to to use jet packs but ran more with there brothers. There training begins in the next comic.



PLEASE COMMENT AND Rate!



Comments

Spartan Fang-BS96 lieutenant commander
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Padfoot; ¾ Of a MOCer™
  September 18, 2009
Love it. Great storyline, cool troop personalitys! Could you have a look at this? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/153265#reviews Thanks!
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  September 17, 2009
Nice job fang great story.
  September 17, 2009
ok, I will
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  September 16, 2009
Quoting Commando Blaize of Oblivion Squad Fang! r u leaving MOCpages??!!??
ya i will explain soon. just go to 701st high council.
  September 16, 2009
Fang! r u leaving MOCpages??!!??
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  September 15, 2009
Quoting MOCrazy ! OMG!!! I was looking at your page and you have the same bday as me! (one year apart, 1997)
nice.
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  September 15, 2009
OMG!!! I was looking at your page and you have the same bday as me! (one year apart, 1997)
Spartan Fang-BS96 lieutenant commander
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Padfoot's Custom Works -(PCW)-
  September 12, 2009
Ignore Phaze'orz' or whatever. I realy liked this, espesily the scenery. Who cares if the gramers a bit off? At least we know what it says. I give it 5/5 to make up for Phaze's rating. Just delete his comment and ignore him.
  September 9, 2009
I there is a new mission for u go to the snowtrooper group
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  September 8, 2009
not bad ceck out my new horror of rhen var comics only 27 days left
  September 8, 2009
Please take a look at this and comment. Thanks. http://mocpages.com/moc.php/151321
Spartan Fang-BS96 lieutenant commander
Phazezorz .
  September 7, 2009
Meh. Story and spelling flaws here and there, dialogue is very bland (And redundant) The Set pieces are just a few plates and some sets, and the comic overall just lacks. Clones shouldn't always be portrayed as these super-soilders that outsmart anything, like the CW Portrays them. So, Work on those, and we'll see how well it improves.
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  September 5, 2009
sweet i'm going to have to see the others,as in your other comics.
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  September 3, 2009
oh i guess not. we set up our own geocaching sites sometimes.
  September 3, 2009
hye dude i read that you like geocaching and i thought i was the only one who liked geocaching on mocpages
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  August 23, 2009
Quoting erdelyi balazs Nice work!! I also bought that set, really worth its price. I like that you made it in real terrain (in your garden?). Also please check out my new MTT when you have the time (I also used some parts from the CATD set)thanks!
i did. no it is my backyard. were redoing it so.....
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  August 13, 2009
Nice work!! I also bought that set, really worth its price. I like that you made it in real terrain (in your garden?). Also please check out my new MTT when you have the time (I also used some parts from the CATD set)thanks!
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  August 5, 2009
Quoting Spartan*Zer0* (Thorn) you don't have to but perhaps you could include me in? hahahah you kicked marks out?haha
i might. no marks is still in. unless he quit because he was not an admin. i would give it to him but i found another kid.
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  August 5, 2009
you don't have to but perhaps you could include me in? hahahah you kicked marks out?haha
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  August 5, 2009
Quoting Elite Commander Marks Abraham grrrr fang let me in! and while your being nice can i be a admin?
sorry no
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  August 5, 2009
Quoting Elite Commander Marks Abraham grrrr fang let me in! and while your being nice can i be a admin?
sorry no
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  August 5, 2009
Quoting Elite Commander Marks Abraham just let me in fang! just think it will be another member!
o.k????
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  August 5, 2009
Quoting Elite Commander Marks Abraham sorry but coould you let me into the 701st. its me marks!
why you need two guys to join?
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  August 4, 2009
Cool!
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  August 3, 2009
Quoting marshal commander Cal / Great job! I'm trying to save up for the tank droid.
thanks! it is okay if i use you in my comic right???
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  August 3, 2009
Great job! I'm trying to save up for the tank droid.
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  August 3, 2009
good job and i like the beginning... great and cant wait to see the next one!!!
 
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