About this creation
Sorry I was so late with this one, guys! I've been on vacation at the beach! :)
Well, here it is! Not too much action with this one though.
Previously: Matt and Peter helped stop a robbery at the market and are returning to the horse to give him an apple.
Matt: "Well, here we are! Hope you're hungry, horsey!"
Peter: "Here ya go, horsey! A nice, juicy apple!"
Horse: *munch munch munch*
Matt: "I think he likes it!"
Peter: "I know he likes it, he just told me so!"
Matt: "He told you so?"
Peter: "Er..NO! Of course not! Horses can't talk! That's silly! I meant to say he looks like he likes it..."
(The horse looks at Peter angrily)
Matt: "Oh, ok."
Peter (to himself): "Whew..that was close!"
Suddenly, a great cheer can be heard from up the road. The two turn to see the King riding by in his carriage!
Peter: "Who is that?"
Matt: "'Who is that?' That is only the ruler of the whole kingdom! King Duncan!"
Peter: "Oh"
Matt: "How can you not recognise King Duncan?!?"
Peter: "I've never seen him before. I live on a farm outside the walls of the City. This is one of the only times I've been in the City."
Matt: "Oh! I wondered how you didn't know the way to the market! That makes more sense..."
Peter: "Yeah, I think it's time we head off to the Castle. Don't want to be late!"
Matt: "Yep! Bye bye, horsey!"
Peter: "So long, horsey!"
So the two recruits walk to the Castle to begin their training...
Guard: "More recruits, have we?"
Matt: "Yes sir!"
Peter: "We've got our papers right here!"
Guard: "Good! You can wait around with the other recruits until the Patrol comes to take you to Boot Camp."
Matt: "Patrol? But the Castle's right here!"
Guard: "You're not staying in the Castle! Boot Camp's outside the City!"
Peter: "Aw... I was looking forward to staying in the Castle..."
Guard: "Sorry, only the more experienced soldiers can stay in the Castle. We don't trust most of the new recruits that join. Some of these kids are not the most trustworthy people around..."
Matt: "Well, ya don't have to worry about us!"
Peter: "Yep, that's right!"
Guard: "Well, good! Now go wait for the Patrol, I've got some business to take care of."
Matt: "Yes, sir!"
So Matt and Peter wait for the Patrol that is to take them to Boot Camp. Soon they'll meet some of the other recruits they will be training with...
Thanks for reading guys! Sorry for the lack of action in this one!
Comments
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January 15, 2010 |
Yeah, Peter has some secrets, maybe he is somekind of biestmaster or an evil mage or something different? I don't trust him. |
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I like it |
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August 11, 2009 |
i really like it so far, cant wait to see the next one.
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I like it |
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August 9, 2009 |
Ausome!!! |
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I like it |
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August 8, 2009 |
I can't wait for next one! :D |
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I like it |
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August 6, 2009 |
I also think that Peter is a bit suspicous. But, ummm.. person below me? Death Eaters are from Harry Potter. And this... isn't Harry Potter. Good comic, Bryan. |
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I like it |
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August 6, 2009 |
I think this "peter" guy is a deatheater.
He can talk to horses ( at least I think so).
Voldy can talk to snakes.
There's a link or something.
Also, I like the name "boot camp". |
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August 6, 2009 |
Cool! |
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I like it |
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August 6, 2009 |
Ok, somethings definately up with Peter. Spy? Outsider? Enemy? Not even human? I'm just making guesses. Be sure to keep up with my comics :P |
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I like it |
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August 6, 2009 |
cool |
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