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Severed: Part 22- Corruption
Previously: Jin'Tak and Demel entered the troll kingdom and overheard the trolls plans. Demel stabbed Jin'Tak with a poisoned dagger and handed him in to his master.
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When Jin'Tak awoke, he was chained into a stone chair. Demel stood in front of him.

Jin'Tak: Liar! You betrayed me! You told me you turned against them! I trust-

Demel: And that was your mistake. Not everything was a lie though. I knew your father. I was with the Brotherhood. I was a Seeker.

Jin'Tak: So now what?

Demel stepped aside and his master walked toward Jin'Tak holding a crystal.

Master: I know who you are, Jin'Tak of the Brotherhood, student of Arralek. Your time as a free man has come to an end.

The man pressed the crystal toward Jin'Taks face. Jin'Tak tried to turn away, but it didn't work.

Jin'Tak changed into his half troll state. He tried to break free of the chains, but failed.
Master: Now that you are half troll, you are sucseptible.

The man placed his hand in front of Jin'Taks chest. A green glow shone from his hand.
Master: You serve me now. Let go of all your emotions, all your memories, all your desires. Obey me without question. Attend to my whim.

The hooded man walked away and Jin'Tak returned to his human state.
Master: Release him.

Demel unshackled Jin'Tak.

He rose and walked to the master.

Jin'Tak: What is your will, my lord?

Master: There are two men to the south that I've had my eye on for a long time. They are powerful warriors and a possible threat to my future reign. They managed to kill one of my kin, a dark prince named Arsem. I want you to find these men and eliminate them. Only then will my victory be gauranteed.

Jin'Tak: It will be done, my lord.
Master: Exccelent. Now, go.



Jin'Tak Left the city, lost in his new self.

He walked south, past the Caverns of the Ancients.

He walked through the mountain pass into the southern kingdoms.



He finally arrived at his goal, the city of Mirum.




THE END!
I told you this series led up to the end of Legacies. Now you know the story of why Jin'Tak is there.
Time for credits:

Severed
Written by Jacob Giles
Pictures by Jacob Giles
Music used (in order of appearance):
X-Ray Dog, Epic Score, Transformers, Lord of the Rings The Two Towers, Warcraft 3, Metal Gear Solid 3, The Last Samurai, King Arthur, 615 Music, Batman Begins, Halo, World of Warcraft Wrath of the Lich King, Transformers Revenge of the Fallen, Brand X Music, Avatar The Last Airbender, Halo 3 ODST, Assassins Creed, Prototype.

Hope you all enjoyed it!



Comments

  December 24, 2010
I love it but it sucks that he's corrupt. Nice job!
Nufalak of Mythada
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  August 27, 2009
:O I CANT BELIVE IT!!! Jin'Tak is evil now???? (or corrupt is probably a better word) Now that is a great plot twister!!!!! I can't wait until then next series!!!! ps. I'm gonna be posting my BoTB sig fig as soon as I fix my camera....It fell in a puddle....
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  August 26, 2009
Wow! This was even better than your first series! It's great how they link up and everything. The music for this one was good as well. Great job on the comic! I can't wait till the next season!
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  August 26, 2009
I have to admit your story is great! Though your sets may not be prize worthy they really were solid and got the job done. Your ear for music is great as well. I can't wait for the next series.
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  August 25, 2009
I can;t belive u turned Bad.
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  August 24, 2009
Awesome! I have to say, I personally liked the first one more, as it was more... epic. Still, it's nice how it all links up, I've never seen that done before.
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  August 24, 2009
it just can't end ,what happens next please make more!
  August 23, 2009
check out my newest moc!its got good pictures and plenty of sword fighting action!
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  August 22, 2009
Quoting liam kirwan Amazing stuff Nufalak! Truly epic. Probably one of the best comics on MOCpages. The plot was fantastic.
Best on mocpages, huh?... NEAT!
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  August 22, 2009
Quoting liam ross No! Why does it have to come to the end, is there more, does jintak kill the men, i want to know more. If it is finnished i would like to say... THAT WAS THE MOST THRILLING AND EXITING COMIC I HAVE EVER READ, IT HAD TWISTS IN IT YOU NEVER KNEW WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT, THE BUILDING STRUCTURES WERE GREAT, EVERYTHING WAS TRUELY AMAZING! Over all a great comic.
Did you read my first comic series, Legacies? Its whats going on in another part of the continent at the same time. There will be more, and it will tie both series together.
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  August 22, 2009
Amazing stuff Nufalak! Truly epic. Probably one of the best comics on MOCpages. The plot was fantastic.
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  August 22, 2009
No! Why does it have to come to the end, is there more, does jintak kill the men, i want to know more. If it is finnished i would like to say... THAT WAS THE MOST THRILLING AND EXITING COMIC I HAVE EVER READ, IT HAD TWISTS IN IT YOU NEVER KNEW WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT, THE BUILDING STRUCTURES WERE GREAT, EVERYTHING WAS TRUELY AMAZING! Over all a great comic.
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  August 22, 2009
Quoting Christian Schlichting Nice twist and very good music choice.
Thanks, I thought it was fitting music. As for the twist, I hoped people would be shocked by it, and judging by MEPs reaction, I say they were. But there are still plenty of "twists" to come.
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  August 22, 2009
Quoting Master Emerald Phoenix The Last two episodes have seared my Mind!! Absolutely fantastic! You have completely turned my views on the subject upside down! Was this always how you were intending the meeting of Jin Tak with Ache to be based around? In Legacies, the brothers finding each other seems to make it look like a happy ending. Now, after reading Severed, it seems the ending may turn into an all out fight between the brothers. Will the next series feature a cast of both parts in it? (Legacies and Severed characters I mean) The trust of Demel leading to his downfall was excellent, and I love how Demel was smart enough to be able to use his wits to manipulate Jin Tak into first sparing his life, and later following him alone to his own doom. The use of all of the earlier MOC's at the end of the 2nd season was a fabulous ploy, giving a sense of reality to the story that I haven't seen in many others. The third season is coming soon I hope. Keep up the FANTASTIC work! Master Emerald Phoenix
Thanks. When I finished Legacies, I wanted the encounter to be hostile, but up until recently, I didn't know how. The whole thing with Demel just sort of fell in place. I intentionally left a lot of questions that even I didn't have the answer to when making the series. I lat things progress naturally, that is, I made up what happened as I went, but left holes. As the series went farther, I considered everything I had done, and found ways to link the holes together, making it feel like there was a lot of behind the scenes stuff that all comes into play. As for the third series, yes it will have both casts. I also plan on making it go through both regions and beyond. It is the final story afterall, and I want it to be the best. Thanks for reading this series and all your great feedback.
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  August 22, 2009
The Last two episodes have seared my Mind!! Absolutely fantastic! You have completely turned my views on the subject upside down! Was this always how you were intending the meeting of Jin Tak with Ache to be based around? In Legacies, the brothers finding each other seems to make it look like a happy ending. Now, after reading Severed, it seems the ending may turn into an all out fight between the brothers. Will the next series feature a cast of both parts in it? (Legacies and Severed characters I mean) The trust of Demel leading to his downfall was excellent, and I love how Demel was smart enough to be able to use his wits to manipulate Jin Tak into first sparing his life, and later following him alone to his own doom. The use of all of the earlier MOC's at the end of the 2nd season was a fabulous ploy, giving a sense of reality to the story that I haven't seen in many others. The third season is coming soon I hope. Keep up the FANTASTIC work! Master Emerald Phoenix
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  August 22, 2009
Nice twist and very good music choice.
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  August 22, 2009
Cool! Can't wait for what happens next!
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  August 22, 2009
Quoting Daniel Roth wait, what about deadlands revisited?
That may take some time. if you read what my plan for it was, then you will see I need some time to read Revelations in the Bible to make it work.
  August 22, 2009
wait, what about deadlands revisited?
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  August 22, 2009
Quoting Daniel Roth oooh, what happens next? are you going to make another series? at first i thought that severed being the title meatn that the brothers were being severed from each other.
Thats another meaning to the title. Glad someone caught it. "Severed" can refer to the brothers being split, the trolls cutting themselves off from the humans, Jin'Tak leaving the Brotherhood to search for answers, and of course the actual Severed. And yes, there will be another series.
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  August 22, 2009
oooh, what happens next? are you going to make another series? at first i thought that severed being the title meatn that the brothers were being severed from each other.
 
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