hered the first installment of the series gladius felix!
About this creation
here we go!
we start out with Felix. his family is not doing to well. because of the Ceasars taxes, his family is starving. forced, even, to steal. at the moment, Felix is making one of his rounds to the apple stand. he plans to steal three apples, one for him, his mom, and his younger brother. his dad is currently fighting across the continent, in Germania, fighting the "Savages".
as he picks it up, the owner turns around and calls the guard.
Owner: thief! theif! guards, theif!
a guard ran up and knocked Felix unconscious.
he was taken to the court of the ceasar.
Ceasar: You know theivery is against the law in Rome.
Felix: Yes.
Ceasar: Then, since i have the arena set up already, for the Games, instead of a death sentence, you shall be put into the arena. practically a death sentence itself. but who knows, you may be the survivor out of all of those unfortunates who fight as well.
Felix, his hair now ratty, and with a black eye from the scuffle with the guard, opened his mouth. it WAS a death sentence. the ceasar planned to kill him.
well, taht was it. hope you stick around, its going to be short, but wild!
Quoting Caleb Cutlass-Crocodile Blanchet
It is good, perhaps you could put a background in and some speech bubbles would be nice, but otherwise, nice job!
i dont have photoshop, and besides, i like the script format.