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MocOlympics R3 G2 - 2x4 vs. Dr. Alternative
Round 3 of the MocOlympics, category is Short Story, good luck to you Dr. Alternative.
About this creation
Here is my opponent: Dr. Alternative


Where there was fertile and vibrant country once, now there is only a dead, black, dark wasteland where no life thrives.


The Lord of Darkness has come to destroy light and all life.


Only one can defeat the dark lord, a true hero!


Many have already tried and failed.


So our hero, the last hope of the light is on his way...


... on the arduous journey into the darkness.


Many battles must be fought by the hero on his way to Lord Black.


But no opponent is equal to him.


Finally! The Black Lord - they fight for 3 days and 3 nights.


But in the end the hero wins and the Lord of Darkness is destroyed.


End



Comments

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  October 20, 2011
This is VERY cool!
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  August 3, 2010
I looked at this creation and said, "Hey! It's the crazy guy who attacked the spaceship." Heh, good job. On a side note, though, I personally think the Lord of Darkness would have looked better if you had placed the eyes on top of the octopus instead of on the sides.
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  March 14, 2010
It's kinda like drawn to life!
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  February 17, 2010
Heroes and darkness go together so perfectly...
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  December 1, 2009
Awesome story and huge diorama!
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  October 9, 2009
that is pretty sweet please come comment on this http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/157606
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  October 7, 2009
Ok! You just brought me to a new place seeing this!
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  September 29, 2009
Reminds me of "The Odyssey"...
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  September 27, 2009
Wunderbar! Bis auf den Fluss :D Irgendwer muss ja den Mund aufmachen, bei dem ganzen Lob, den du immer bekommst *lach*
2x4 .
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The Incinerator
  September 21, 2009
really nice job a nice landscape and a nice story congrats that you've moved on if you keep going like this you might even win the olympics ;)
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  September 21, 2009
Thank you
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  September 21, 2009
Another of your fantasic creations! Your a god at this! Hats of! I wish I had a tiny bit of your imagination!
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  September 21, 2009
Heck! This is short story? This could easily win "whateverscape" too!!!what a great build! You have my vote, welcome to round four!
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  September 21, 2009
Impressive, very impressive!
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  September 21, 2009
Solid concept for the storyline, and really well built. Congrats, you're moving on up! Well done!
2x4 .
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Dave Shaddix
  September 20, 2009
Can I get instructions for this one too? Great work, you have my vote yet again! ~dave
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  September 20, 2009
cool,nice story
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  September 20, 2009
No darkness without light right? This looks excellent! I'm not a big fan of the light you used though. It's usefull to see what black parts you've used, but I think it would look better with less light. ~M
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  September 20, 2009
Awesome! I love the use of the black octopus!
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  September 19, 2009
Just looking at it makes my brain hurt! Too awesome!
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  September 18, 2009
Cool vignette! The is ok, but the build itself is awesome! Kudos!
  September 18, 2009
oh, just great! i actually thought i had a chance, and then you comes along with this amazing little (huge) vig and makes my entry seem like a fart in outer space. well, atleast i made it to round 3 :P so dont stop me now! im having such a good time!
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  September 18, 2009
nice job! the vignette is amazing!
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  September 17, 2009
I will admit the story isn't the best, but the build is jaw dropping. It doesn't even need the written words to tell the story. Amazing contrast between life and death. Best of luck with the judges. Lee.
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  September 17, 2009
Amazing landscaping and great figs... And wow! such an original story... ;)
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  September 17, 2009
This is a massive hot piece o work my friend, great ideas and techniques all around, just another high quality stuff from you, keep it up >>> peace.. Firas
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  September 16, 2009
That is nice, love the detail of the darkness area
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  September 16, 2009
The story... yeah, a little lacking, but that BUILD! MAN! More than makes up for it! And don't get us wrong, the story's not "bad" just could use a bit of fleshing out... like that dude's chest hehehe. Great entry and Doc A has got his work cut out for him! ~ Chris.
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  September 16, 2009
Despite all the blackness I have to say a VERY beautiful creation. Epic story, horrific agents of Darkness and a true hero, what more can you ask for? A nice touch with the plant in the final scene. Best of luck to you!
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  September 16, 2009
Thank you all for the nice comments.
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  September 16, 2009
Ho true hero, you forgot to put your shirt on! Really nice build (that's an awful lot of black tiles on that landscaping)with lovely details like the first shoots of life returning to the blackened landscape at the end. Good luck.
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  September 16, 2009
Beautiful!
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  September 16, 2009
Short story, yes, but it's good and the builds are awesome ! Good luck !
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  September 16, 2009
Oh yeah, just makes me want to break out the D 20's and get back into D&D. The dark lord/cthulu dude rocks also. Landscape is amazing. True art on dosplay here, congrats.
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  September 16, 2009
A master piece indeed, great job and good luck
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  September 16, 2009
Wieder mal ein Meisterstück.Hoffe ja,das wir uns auf irgendeiner Messe mal austauschen können.;-)
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  September 15, 2009
Black fantasy tackles LOTR. I love it.
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  September 15, 2009
Cool, I like the transition from the green and vegitated to the black, dead wasteland. I like the hero a lot too (hes got nice muscles) and the black lord is pretty cool too. Could you check out my scorpion tank sometime, please?
  September 15, 2009
Amazing build, and while the story could be expanded a little more, it's still pretty awesome! Great job =)
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  September 15, 2009
Sweet build. Love the transition. Good luck to you and your opponent.
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  September 15, 2009
I agree, although concise and well put together the "story" is a bit lacking, but the build is more than enough to make up for this. You're proving a force to be reckoned with in these games!!!
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  September 15, 2009
This is cool. It caught my attention. It was hard to look at without comparing it to Aliencat's The Reality Dysfunction. You did a nice job with the landscape, and that tree really added a nice (creepy) touch. A strong entry, for sure.
  September 15, 2009
OMG, iz teh C'thulhu! Phew, feels good to get that out of my system. Anywho, the build you have here is fantastic, but the story could use some work. It seems a bit too short of a short story. I'd suggest just beefing it up a little by adding some details of the fights.
 
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