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Risen: Chapter 04- Conflict
Previously: Jin'Tak has been given a new mission. Irrek and Ache come to the mountain pass to find him waiting for them.
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Irrek and Ache dismounted and walked toward the assassin.

Irrek: You... Why did you try to kill us? Who are you? Who sent you? I want answers before I take your life.

Jin'Tak stepped back, surprised to see Irrek alive.

Irrek: Speak! Or so help me I will rip the words from your throat myself.

Jin'Tak: My master cannot complete his quest if you are alive. I must finish my duties...

Jin'Tak charged at Irrek. Ache drew his daggers and entered the fight.

As the conflict began, the two horses were frightened by an unseen force and fled.

As Irrek parried Jin'Taks blow, Ache threw his daggers forward...

But Jin'Tak avoided them with ease.

Irrek charged again...

but was kicked into the air.

Ache jumped at Jin'Tak...

Who pushed himself into the air.

He landed on top of one of the trees in the pass.

Irrek was enraged.
Irrek: Coward! Devil! You will pay for the life you stole from us!
Jin'Tak spoke, but a deeper, malicious voice echoed over his own.
Jin'Tak: Don't be fooled, boy. He is under my control now and more powerful than you can hope to overcome... The warrior Jin'Tak is no more, lost to the devil within himself.

Jin'Tak jumped off the tree toward Irrek, almost gliding. It was clear this man was not human.



Ache intercepted him...

and thrust him to the ground.
Ache: You mentioned my brothers name. What have you done with him? Who are you?

Ache removed Jin'Taks hood and mask and, for the first time in fifteen years, looked into his brothers eyes.

He fell backwards, shocked.
Ache: No... it can't be.

Just then, Jin'Tak stood up. His face changed and his swords began to glow.

He charged at Irrek, who barely had time to avoid the attack.

Jin'Taks swords hit the tree, cutting it in half.

Irrek: Ache! Snap out of it!
Ache: What?

Jin'Tak charged again...

but missed hitting anything but another tree. He was breathing heavily now, like a rampaging beast.

Ache: Irrek, we can't kill him.

Irrek: Why not? The world must be rid of this monster.

Ache: Hes not the monster. Hes been corrupted. We need knock him out and find help.

Jin'Tak charged at Irrek for a third time, who dodged it yet again.

Irrek watched as the tree began to fall toward him...

but pushed it the other way.








Comments

 I like it 
  September 28, 2009
Awesome! The music was great. I like the glowing swords!!
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  September 26, 2009
Great action! I can't wait to read the next comic!
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  September 26, 2009
The music was abosolutely perfect! I loved the action in each pictrue too.
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  September 25, 2009
cool!
 I made it 
  September 22, 2009
Quoting Brik Masta Great comic, the whole hitting trees thing reminded me of a classic boss battle, where you gotta figure out the pattern and use it against the boss. (aka, pushing the tree on him :P )
Ya, I got the same feeling. Although it still fits seeing that he is in his altered state so he doesnt have as much control, like a wild animal.
  September 22, 2009
Super! Both brothers who meet themselves apres fifteen years, another super chapitre !
Nufalak of Mythada
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Stuff Plutark
  September 21, 2009
Once again, when I thought you couldn't surprize me with more awesomeness, you go and do it again! The brother vs. brother fight was amazing!
Nufalak of Mythada
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Stuff Plutark
  September 21, 2009
Once again, when I thought you couldn't surprize me with more awesomeness, you go and do it again! The brother vs. brother fight was amazing!
Nufalak of Mythada
 I like it 
Stuff Plutark
  September 21, 2009
Once again, when I thought you couldn't surprize me with more awesomeness, you go and do it again! The brother vs. brother fight was amazing!
 I like it 
  September 21, 2009
Great comic, the whole hitting trees thing reminded me of a classic boss battle, where you gotta figure out the pattern and use it against the boss. (aka, pushing the tree on him :P )
 I like it 
  September 21, 2009
That chapter was defiantly the best one so far! I can't wait to see what will happen next! Great job!
 I like it 
  September 21, 2009
Sweet, I smell a Plot twist.
 I like it 
  September 21, 2009
Sweet, I smell a Plot twist.
 I made it 
  September 21, 2009
Quoting Christian Schlichting Sweet fight and magic effects like the glowing swords. By the way, where's the corrupted head from?
The first Harry Potter series. Theyre both the same head actually.
 I like it 
  September 21, 2009
Sweet fight and magic effects like the glowing swords. By the way, where's the corrupted head from?
  September 21, 2009
Sweet! Can't wait for chapter five!
 I made it 
  September 21, 2009
Quoting Bly commander Super! Both brothers who meet themselves apres fifteen years, another high-octane gasoline episode, deeply the fellow man!!
What? Im confused. :P
 
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