This is my entry for Nightmare King's Ultimate Toa Hero Contest. I'm going to say this right away, i am NOT a toa builder! I tend to build bionicles about 10" or larger, so building toas is actually challenging for me. Anyway, i gave it my best and this is what i came up with. If you want more info about him just let me know and i'll write a bit about him. hope you like him! I know this is kinda cheating but Ben~ brought up the issue of me forgetting to put a story so here we go!
Toa Yaru is the toa of heat on Zola Island. He was involved in the banishment of Sir Arrifu. All six toa were ordered by king Zolmium, to escort Sir Arrifu off the island. When they returned to the island, it was under attack by Arrifu's brother and his army. All of the toa were killed except Yaru. He fought tirelessly for three day until he finally colapsed. The soldiers captured him and brought him to Arrifu's brother. He order his soldiers to kill Yaru. Suddenly a large beast broke into the camp and began attacking the soldiers. Moments later Sir Arrifu ran into the camp and engaged his brother. Arrifu killed his brother and freed Yaru. He is now the only toa on Zola Island and is good friends with Sir Arrifu and his steed, Renlek.
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April 11, 2010 |
Excellent |
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October 27, 2009 |
It looks awesome. I just don't like the feet. There a little too big. perhaps inika jaller feet would work. |
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October 24, 2009 |
where do u get the yellow piraka torso... 5/5 |
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October 7, 2009 |
Again, a very nice toa indeed.Great pictures and poses of your moc!
You have the skills! Please accept our invitation to join Bionicle Display, one of the largest and best bionicle group (founded by Sean Kenney himself).
Also, I am personally inviting you to join in the Bionicle Flagship 2nd Triathalon Contest where you will be challenge to test your skills and creativity in bio mocing in three very distinct categories. For rules, please visit Bionicle display
http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=28&topicid=32685
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October 4, 2009 |
I'm not really a big Bionicle fan, but this guy looks pretty cool and very tough! Nice! |
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September 30, 2009 |
Quoting Ben ~
MUCh better with story but you still get my oringinal judging. Sorry :/
i figured you'd say that. oh well, i guess i'll just have to wait and see what the other judges say. :) |
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September 30, 2009 |
MUCh better with story but you still get my oringinal judging. Sorry :/ |
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Overall a good MOC, but i have to be all judgish about it so: I like the style of the body but i have few minor issues with the color scheme (mainly bias, since i don't like orange!). I really like the upper body and the tube-thing for the arm is good but your missing one of the largest req. A GOOD STORY.
I'd say 3 for weapon, 4pts armor, and a 1 for story since you have SOME commentary on him. Total: 8/14 |
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September 29, 2009 |
congratulation!!! its very cool!!! |
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September 29, 2009 |
congratulation!!! its very cool!!! |
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September 29, 2009 |
sweet man pretty cool. good luck on the contest! :) |
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September 29, 2009 |
exceptional toa worthy of winning the contest |
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September 28, 2009 |
Nice job! I don't really like bionicle, but this is cool! |
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September 28, 2009 |
Nice job! I don't really like bionicle, but this is cool! |
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September 28, 2009 |
Wow, I am impresed! I love all the detail you put into him I could never make a good custom Bionicle so that makes me like yours even more. The weapons are perfect, I like how you used the Piraka claws on his back, the feet are awesome too. |
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September 28, 2009 |
Coolness, I'm not all that into bio-mocs but hey... FIRST POST |
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