MOCpages : Share your LEGO® creations
LEGO models my own creation MOCpages toys shop We're Not Alone - Ep 1 - The BeginningSpace and science fiction
Welcome to the world's greatest LEGO fan community!
Explore cool creations, share your own, and have lots of fun together.  ~  It's all free!
We're Not Alone - Ep 1 - The Beginning
The first comic in my beta series. I hope you enjoy and give me some feedback.
About this creation
In the year of 2274, World war 3 broke out. And after 10 long years of nuclear destruction, it finally ceased. New York was decimated; London was nothing but rubble, and Tokyo lay in ashes. But, a new country, a new nation, a new sovereignty, emerged from the remains of the war, Earth. People of the Earth finally came under one banner and decided to live in peace. Although most of the population lived on earth, a couple million live on the moon. It was decided that they should be ruled by a president, and the form of government shall be a democracy. The president has created one police and army force, to help keep piece. Although terrorism is still alive in many forms, it is none the less, disintegrating. Now that you know this, we can begin the story, chapter one, the beginning.

Music for the chapter:


International Moon Army Base, Year 2284 A.D. 12:25 P.M Eastern Standard Time.

"Attention Omega Squadron. Attention Omega Squad. General Smith requests your presence in briefing room 3A. Suit up and report their immediately."

(Squad member on the left)"Ah man! I was about to eat!" he comlpained, "Eh, it's alright mate," (The squad member on the right replied),"We'll get our food afterwards."

"A mission? Haven't one in a while."







In less than ten minutes, the commandos came running in the room.

"We're here General."

"Where's your commander?"

"I'm here."

"Good. Now we can get started."



The commander walked around to the center of the room.



"Now, as you know, about a month ago, a group of scientists, civilians, and police all set up a bio-dome and encampment on Mars which made history. Many of you have all heard this before. Well, about two days ago we received a mysterious transmission from their command center, and then after we lost all communication. Let's take a listen."

The small device on the floor began to glow and played a message,

"Help! Help! Mayday, mayday. They've killed everyone...I don't think anyone will get out of here alive. You have to se--ahhhhh! They're com-!!!AUGHGUAGAHAG!..."

The transmission ended with screams and sounds of pain.

"We sent Delta Squad yesterday, but we lost communication with them too. Here's your mission: Fly close to the bio-dome and go on foot, once inside, make sure you can preserve the biodome. Next, send us all the data you can get your hands on, and get out of there fast."

"Do we have a shuttle ready for us?"

"Yes."

"What are we waiting for? Let's go."

The commandos sprinted out of the room and thanked the General.

"Good luck gentlemen."

"Come on."

The General walked out of the room and the troopers followed.

They turned and exited the room.

Notes:

I hope you guys liked it. For some reason it wouldn't let me upload more photos for this chapter, but I can save them for the next one. I would love feedback on this, I kinda made a some-what halo/star wars/post-apocalyptic/star trek/sci-fi thing, so yeah.

Please add me as your favorite builder, comment, rate, and look at the rest of my creations.

~Casey~



Comments

 I like it 
  January 23, 2010
Very good, I'm going to read the rest and follow this series!
 I like it 
  January 23, 2010
Very good, I'm going to read the rest and follow this series!
 I like it 
  January 22, 2010
Good work keep it up!
 I like it 
  December 11, 2009
Awesome minifigures!!! KeEp BuIlDiNg!1!1
 I like it 
  November 3, 2009
love those commandos! i use the same color sheme on my ships ^^
 I like it 
  October 23, 2009
Hi. Good start on your comic. I like the bricks sideways for walls, adds nice texture with the brick bottoms. I'd try adding more detail to each scene. You don't need much. I'll keep an eye out for part 2. see ya. garth
 I made it 
  October 22, 2009
Quoting Philip Bernston My honest opinion..... well the briefieng room needs more recognizable objects and i think you should make it clear to who these commandos are. other than that... great job on the story.
Actually, the first episode is purposefully done so you will not know the commandos names. The second episode will introduce their names, personalities, and backgrounds. That's as much info that I will give you at the time.
  October 22, 2009
My honest opinion..... well the briefieng room needs more recognizable objects and i think you should make it clear to who these commandos are. other than that... great job on the story.
 I made it 
  October 21, 2009
Quoting Cole Hartfiel Great set up for a good sci-fi comic! I really like the trooper and we all get a feel they will be really important to saving the Mars colonies. I was just wondering, did you get logged out while uploading photos? If you did, I noticed that it doesn't upload the photos and you have upload a photo (which won't actually get uploaded) press continue, and then upload the photos you wanted and they will go that time. I always save all the text in notepad just in case I lose the info or accidentally close the page. Hope this helps. Great work!
Thanks, that helps a lot!
 I like it 
  October 21, 2009
Great set up for a good sci-fi comic! I really like the trooper and we all get a feel they will be really important to saving the Mars colonies. I was just wondering, did you get logged out while uploading photos? If you did, I noticed that it doesn't upload the photos and you have upload a photo (which won't actually get uploaded) press continue, and then upload the photos you wanted and they will go that time. I always save all the text in notepad just in case I lose the info or accidentally close the page. Hope this helps. Great work!
 I made it 
  October 17, 2009
Quoting JOSEPH TOMS how do you put the shade on his shoulder
What I do is, take this piece http://cache.lego.com/images/factory/pab/bricks/4210469_8.jpg and then attach one end of the visor to the back of it and then slide the other side to the front. It makes it look like awesome shoulder armor. I wondered about how to make it too before I finally figured out how.
 I made it 
  October 17, 2009
Quoting Justin R. To answer the question you asked, I just put him together from four different sets. The torso and pants are from 10039 Black Falcon fortress, and the head is, of course, from the adventurers line, the shield is from 6030 Catapult, and the helmet is from King Leo's castle.
Oh ok, thanks! That helped me out a lot.
 I like it 
  October 17, 2009
Looking good so far!
 I like it 
  October 17, 2009
how do you put the shade on his shoulder
 I like it 
  October 17, 2009
Make another one, for sure!
 I like it 
  October 17, 2009
This is great, I love the comic and detail. You make me hungry to see more so keep it up!
 I like it 
  October 17, 2009
Awesome! The story is great, can't wait for the next chapter. I liked the food trays, and I like the use of the star war torsos. You have inspired me, now I want to do a sci-fi comic, too. To answer the question you asked, I just put him together from four different sets. The torso and pants are from 10039 Black Falcon fortress, and the head is, of course, from the adventurers line, the shield is from 6030 Catapult, and the helmet is from King Leo's castle. Thanks for all the positive feedback! P.S. I asked you a question on my group, would you please answer when you have the time? Thanks!
 I like it 
  October 16, 2009
sweet.
 I like it 
  October 16, 2009
Great backstory but I have a problem with this line "be sure to come back alive" you should change it. Except for that it's really cool=)
 
By Casey McCoy
Add to my favorite builders

21
people like this. See who.

2,976 visitors
19 comments
Added October 16, 2009
 You are at the beginning of this folder. We're Not Alone - Ep 2 - Dead on Arrival
More from Casey
More across MOCpages
 You are at the beginning of this group. We're Not Alone - Ep 2 - Dead on Arrival
 


LEGO models my own creation MOCpages toys shop We're Not Alone - Ep 1 - The BeginningSpace and science fiction


You Your home page | LEGO creations | Favorite builders
Activity Activity | Comments | Creations
Explore Explore | Recent | Groups
MOCpages is an unofficial, fan-created website. LEGO® and the brick configuration are property of The LEGO Group, which does not sponsor, own, or endorse this site.
©2002-2014 Sean Kenney Design Inc | Privacy policy | Terms of use