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Defending Onthawa
Here is my new comic, inspired by Commander Fero.
About this creation
Okay, guys. Here is my new comic! Get ready for an action packed thriller!
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Cunning: That looks like the last of 'em, boys.

Onthawa. A forest planet with tall mountains, the tallest of these H'la. The tall mountain is split in half at some places, linked together by bridges. H'la houses the capital of the planet.

The Seperatists have gained control of the planet, promising supplies in trade for land to build their bases on. The natives have agreed.

Now, the Republic has taken over half of the mountain and are attacking the main Seperatist bridges.

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Clone trooper: Commander, the droids are attacking one of our main posts.

Cunning: Okay, guys, let's move!

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Cunning: Great job.

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Now, let's see if we still have this-

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Ventress: Not so fast, Republic dogs.



Comments

 I made it 
  October 30, 2009
Quoting CC-1792 Commander Trixe That's cool I love the customs nice story uh oh ventress here comes trouble lol!
LOL Thanks for the comment.
 I like it 
  October 30, 2009
That's cool I love the customs nice story uh oh ventress here comes trouble lol!
 I made it 
  October 21, 2009
I just wanted to say that this series is going to be cancelled on account for a moc-off I am holding/doing. Feel free to join, if you'd like. It's Star Wars based.
 I like it 
  October 21, 2009
Nice story i like your clone customs ;)
 I made it 
  October 20, 2009
Quoting Juan Carranza It's a bit short, the concept reminds me of Exo-force, you know moutain split in two joined by bridges... You have too many custom clones, don't get me wrong I like custom clones but if you're looking for a legion color etc. you should keep one uniform and not exactly interesting color scheme, I personally prefer the color=rank order,(green=sargeant, blue=liutenant, red=captain, yellow= commander) but you should only customize high ranking clones and your sig-fig, the story needs some work you need either action or mistery.
Here me out. Commander Gree's Green Company troopers have green on them. And this is more then a one part story. It's going to be long. In the CW series the troopers aren't colored by ranks. Some of them aren't even colored at all.
  October 20, 2009
It's a bit short, the concept reminds me of Exo-force, you know moutain split in two joined by bridges... You have too many custom clones, don't get me wrong I like custom clones but if you're looking for a legion color etc. you should keep one uniform and not exactly interesting color scheme, I personally prefer the color=rank order,(green=sargeant, blue=liutenant, red=captain, yellow= commander) but you should only customize high ranking clones and your sig-fig, the story needs some work you need either action or mistery.
 I made it 
  October 19, 2009
It's actually supposed to be sky. I have a sheet for my sky effects, but I don't know where it is. So, I had to use my water blanket. And, thanks.
 I like it 
  October 19, 2009
Nice job. Cool clones.
 
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