As the holo-vid beeps the commander turns it on while removing his helmet.
"Execute order 66." "It will be done my lord."
Commander Gyre signals to the clones to execute the order, and the aim on the two jedi quickly.
The jedi looks back and is stunned to see his men firing upon him.
The commander climbs the bricks and jumps at the jedi. "For the republic!"
Nate prepares to decapitate his troop.
The jedi is knocked on the ground, but he wasn't ready to die........
He slashes the blaster causing the commander to panic.
The commander is forced pushed next to a head less soldier.
A jedi is shot by a droid, just before getting its head chopped off.
Quoting Kevin Carston
Not bad, a little confusing. (personaly I like Flare's entry better, sorry to say...)
I like mine better because:
Flares vigs are less detailed, though there are many, it is better to have on detailed one. Also I don't think he captured the feel or the event very well. But anyone could win!
Quoting Commander Flare !
nice but i agree with juan it is a little confusing occasionally. nice job though. :) BUT YOU DIDN"T ASK TO USE THE HOLOGRAM PROJECTER DESIGN!!!!! ;) its ok though nice job...