Well, I'm back! This is Chapter 11 of my not-so-famous comic series taking place in the Imperial time period of Star Wars.
About this creation
[Play this music if you want a more movie-like experience]
EMPIRE OF DARKNESS: Chapter 11
The evil GALACTIC EMPIRE has routed a band of courageous rebels from a meeting to plot to destroy the Empire. The cruel, vile leader of the Empire himself, EMPORER PALPATINE, is rushing to save the life of his lieutenant, DARTH VADER, and his pupil, DARTH KALOS...
[Palpatine, a stormtrooper, and a mysterious trooper are walking down the edge of the mountain.]
[Palpatine walks to Vader]
Palpatine: Lord Vader, awaken.
[Vader scoots up and groans]
Vader:...Kalos... he fell off the mountain...
[Palpatine walks to the mysterious trooper]
Palpatine: Spectre, look down the mountain. See where Kalos is.
Commander Spectre: Yes, my lord.
[Commander Spectre climbs up the mountain]
[He gets to the top]
[He looks over the edge]
[He sees the fallen Kalos and the part of the mountain]
[He climbs down the edge of the mountain]
[Minutes later, he comes back with Kalos]
[He puts Kalos on the fallen floor]
[The floor is picked up by the Force...]
[...And it is thrown, knocking down Vader, Kalos, and Spectre]
[Zane Starkiller and Rob Rotgers walk in]
[He picks up the floor with the Force...]
[...And throws it into Palpatine]
[Palpatine falls under it]
[Rob and Zane start to walk away...]
[...But they are attacked by Kalos]
[Kalos cuts off Zane's arm]
[Kalos is still in the air but Rob is ready for him]
[He cuts off Kalos' lightsaber-wielding arm]
Rob: Grr! Die!
[Rob jumps into the air and cuts off Kalos' legs]
[Kalos falls to the ground as Rob lands]
[Rob helps Zane up]
Rob: Are you OK? I'm gonna get you out of here!
Zane: Unghh...
[Hours later, Palpatine gets up]
[He walks over to the fallen Vader and Spectre and revives them]
Palpatine: Rise!
[Vader and Spectre get up]
[They walk over to Kalos]
Palpatine: He is still alive. Get a medical capsule.
Commander Spectre: We don't have one sir. But I have an idea.
Well there you go, that's Empire of Darkness: Chapter 11. I hope you enjoyed it. Also my somewhat triumphant return to MOCpages. Next up: EoD 12. Also: (regarding guest stars) sorry, but I am no longer accepting guest stars. If you haven't been featured yet, even if I said you would, I'm sorry, but you are not going to be in Empire of Darkness. Sorry for the confusion. Thanks for looking!
This is good comic but little things that disturb me- there can be only two sith lords -at the time Vader and Sidious- so all their assassins are merely dark jedi- they can consider themshelves sith though but they aren't allowed to use "darth" title... anyway this is just fanfiction -but it disturbs me a bit....
Thanks for the tips, here, I made this comic a while ago, so I couldn't really do anything about the parts situation. And as for the font, I just changed the colors of my pages, so I'm gonna fix that right away.
Nice story you got here, maybe you should build the wreckage and junk instead of just using loose parts, also you should change the color of the letters, it's hard to read it without highlighting it.
Welcome back! It's good to see you posting mocs again. Good job, looking forward to seeing the next one. ~ J
I like it
Kir Kanos Kalinka
October 25, 2009
Nice return. I obviously have had no time to build anythingg. Question: how do you get the pictures big like that? I mean they're equal to the size of your main photo but are placed throughout the story?
I like it
Kir Kanos Kalinka
October 25, 2009
Nice return. I obviously have had no time to build anythingg. Question: how do you get the pictures big like that? I mean they're equal to the size of your main photo but are placed throughout the story?
No, Matt, No. Anyways, Comic was decent, the sets seemed...cluttered, and the story was more-so action based, which wasn't all bad, but I do feel some more story would've helped.
