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Empire of Darkness: Chapter 12
Chapter 12 of my comic series taking place in the Imperial time period of Star Wars.
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Empire of Darkness: Chapter 12

The evil GALACTIC EMPIRE, intent on ruling the entire galaxy with an iron fist, has driven out incontents planning a rebellion from a meeting to plan their next move against the Empire...


[In the cockpit of a starship. Rocky and Ricky walk up to Mitch Bob and another rebel, named Davis]
Ricky: Now what. Got any leads, Davis?
Davis: Not really. Let's got have a talk with Sgt. Ty.


Ricky: Okay.
[They walk away]


[They walk up to a rebel in a hallway on their starship]
Ricky: Davis said you might have a lead on Imperial targets.
Sgt. Ty: Well... not exactly.


Sgt. Ty: There is, however, a little meeting happening in an Imperial Garrison on Carida. Going there would be your best bet, maybe get some classified info. Sign into the base as Shartan. Karl Shartan. We also have a spy inside the base. She won't be able to get out unnoticed, so you guys are gonna have to make a dsitraction for her to get out too. She's gonna identify herself by giving you a code: The port is on the side.


Ricky: Well Davis, I guess we're going to Carida.
Davis: Huh. Always wanted to go there.


[The next day, in front of Imperial base on Carida]


[Ricky and Davis walk up to gate]
Stormtrooper: Name please.
Ricky: Eh... Shartan. Karl Shartan.


Stormtrooper: You're not on the list Mr. Shartan.


[Ricky waves his hand]
Ricky: There is a mistake. We can go ahead.


Stormtrooper: There is a mistake. You can go ahead.


[They walk in]
Davis: Show-off.


[Inside the base]


Drunken Imperial Officer: It's so fun! Hehehehe!
[Ricky nods sarcastically]


[The drunken officer starts dancing in front of Ricky and Davis]


Woman: The port is on the side.
Ricky: Hello. Where is an info port?
Woman: In the barracks, down the hall to the left.
Ricky: Thanks. We'll be back.


[Ricky walks down to the hall]


[Ricky and Davis walk down the hall]


[They reach a stormtrooper in front of a door]


Stormtrooper: Uh, what do you want?


[Ricky waves hand]
Ricky: This is my room. I'm gonna go in.
Stormtrooper: This is your room. You're gonna go in.


[Ricky and Davis walk in]
Ricky: That never gets old.
Davis: Hmm.


[Ricky gasps inside the room]
Davis: What is it?
Ricky: This... this is Commander Fed's room. He was a Commander during the Clone Wars...
Davis: And now he's hunting down the rebellion. We'll just need to be all the more vigilant.


[Ricky starts hacking into Commander Fed's data terminal]


[Imperial walks down the hall]


Stormtrooper: Uh... hello? Who are you?
Imperial officer: Uh... this is my room. I'm Commander Fed... fool!
Stormtrooper: Uh... how did you get out without me seeing? I saw you go in.


[Commander Fed drops his drink]
Commander Fed: Jedi!
Stormtrooper: Jedi?! Where?
Commander Fed: In- [sighs] Never mind.


[Fed runs down the hallway]


[He gets to the main area]
Fed: Jedi! Down the hallway! In my room!


[Fed and stormtroopers walk down the hallway]


[They get to the door]


Davis: are you almost done? Sounds like the Imperials found out we're here.
Ricky: Almost...


Ricky: Now. Now I'm done.


[Davis grabs Fed's machine gun from the wall]


[They get ready for the fight]


[Ricky pushes the door with the Force...]


[...straight into the Scout Trooper]


[Ricky runs out and starts shooting up the Imperials]


[Davis runs out too and shoots them too]


[Soon all of the troops are dead and Ricky and Davis run up the hallway]


[General Cras jumps out in front of them]


[Ricky Force Pushes General Cras]


[Ricky runs in]


[Then the Imperial Officers surround him]
Imperial officer: Drop the gun now, rebel scum!


[Ricky drops the gun and puts his hands up in the air]


[Imperial troops rush in]


[Dark Trooper holds him at gunpoint]


[Davis runs to the chaingun that was dropped by a dead Imperial trooper]


[He then runs back up the hallway...]


[... and immediately starts shooting, tearing the Imperials to shreds]


[Quickly, most of the Imperials are dead]


Ricky: Now drop the gun.
Imperial officer: Humph...


[Ricky has the Officers up agains the wall]


[But one of the officers lunges to grab a gun]


[But he is instantly shot]


Davis [to the other Imperial Officer]: Don't move.


Imperial Officer: I would rather die than be the hostage of some rebel scum!


[The officer dives and rolls across the floor]


[He grabs a gun...]


[...and shoots one of the servants...]


[...killing him]


[Ricky twists and shoots the officer]


[The officer lunges and falls to the ground]
Officer: Rebel scum...


[The officer is dead]


Ricky: It amazes me that he would rather die than go with us. And why did he kill the servant?
Davis: I guess he got bad service.


Woman: Very funny. Now we gotta get out of here, the bomb is about to go off!


[They run out of the base]


Ricky: Crouch behind the statue! Hurry!


[The servants run out too, as Ricky climbs atop the statue]


[He creates a sheild with the Force as the bomb detonates]


[But the force of the explosion is too great and the statue falls on top of Ricky]


[Hours later]


[Ricky gets up from under the statue]


[Davis gets up as Ricky revives the spy]
Ricky: You okay, Davis?
Davis: Yea. I'm fine.


[Ricky helps the spy up]
Ricky: I never got your name. and are you OK? That was a nasty explosion.
Spy: I'm fine. And my name is Kaelin. Allana Kaelin.
Ricky: Well, I'm glad you're okay, Allana Kaelin.


[The other servant gets up and sees the other one burning from the explosion]
Servant: Noo!
Ricky: It's too late. He's already dead. C'mon, let's go. We have a long journey ahead of us.


[Later...Commander Fed is buried in the rubble]


[But he punches it out of his way and climbs up]


Fed: You're a dead man, Ricky Seneria!


[In a dark Imperial hospital room]
Medical Droid: HE HAS REGAINED CONCIOUSNESS SUPERIOR. I HAVE INJECTED THE FORCE-WIELDING CHIP AS YOU SPECIFIED SUPERIOR.


Palpatine: Good.


Darth Kalos: What Happened... where am I?
Palpatine: You were badly mutilated. Many of your orginal parts have been... replaced.
Kalos: Him...
Kalos: That Jedi!
Palpatine: Yes, him.
Kalos: Too far... Too much... He will die. And he will die slow. And he will beg for mercy that does not exist. He will know I am coming for him, not matter how long it takes...

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Well, there you have it, Empire of Darkness: Chapter 12. Hope you liked it! [Credit to Awesome-o-Saurus The-Not-So-Great for the closing lines]
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 I like it 
  May 31, 2010
This one is good part but i didn't like outfits of imperials- that place looked like cantina more than imperial base- strange colorful outfits- was that masquarade party?
 I like it 
  December 25, 2009
nice job man you make awsome comics can't wait for the next one
 I like it 
  November 19, 2009
Kind of violent, but interesting. I can't wait to see the next part. Make sure to check out a comic I should be posting in a few weeks.
 I like it 
  October 31, 2009
it is awsome man i loved it
Rocky W.
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Kir Kanos Kalinka
  October 29, 2009
Kool. Srg. Ty well idk if that was a reference to me it probably was not, and great story! The build was very messy and noticable in spots though. Keep it up.
 I like it 
  October 29, 2009
sweet.
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  October 29, 2009
awesome this is truly the best yet and why have you been all inactive latly?
 I like it 
  October 29, 2009
This is one of my favorites so far. Good job with the sets. ~ J
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  October 28, 2009
sweet, can I be in the series helping the Jedi, I am a Dark Jedi/ Bounty Hunter?
  October 28, 2009
Cool!=D
 I made it 
  October 28, 2009
Perhaps. :)
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  October 28, 2009
Great story, since Fed left is it possible that he will die in your series?
 I like it 
  October 28, 2009
Yay! I'm in the credits! And you're sets are getting better. That's a very good thing.
 
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