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A knight with a sad story. ALSO MY ENTRY TO THE GROUP OF THEME MUSIC'S CONTEST X3!!!!!!!!!!
About this creation
Templar's Theme: Love is War


So yeah, as I said in the intro, this is my entry to The Group Of Theme Music's contest. Spread the joy of theme music to all of the MOCpages! Also my first Knight of the Broken Cross in a while.

Templar's story is full of remorse and regret. She was once a beautiful and graceful KotBC with a life to be envious of. She had everything. A home. Good food on the table. Good clothes. An action-packed life with no paperwork. And a lover. However, something went wrong.

Her lover left her for another.

Emotionally devastated, her life fell apart. Her self-esteem took a mighty drop. She stopped fighting with grace. She became sloppy. She was demoted to a desk job. She moved to a smaller home. Her food and clothes decreased in quality. Eventually, she became depressed. She confronted her former lover constantly, but he did not even notice her. In the end, she killed her lover, the woman he loved, and then her own life. There is a monument to her on the castle grounds.

It reads:

Here lies Templar.
A valiant knight who felt
love's painful sting.
She loved someone
But that someone
began to love
someone else.
Sadness turned
to depression.
Depression turned
into death.
We will never forget you.
We will all miss you.

-The Knights of
the Broken Cross.
















Another image of her I created is here: Templar Unarmored



Comments

John the Imaginative
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Infinity Life
  November 2, 2009
Pretty Good, I Like the hair.
  November 2, 2009
If you'd like to give me Fenny's backstory, please do so! Although I will be focusing more on the current story - and update him now and then to mirror our RP. Same goes for all the characters who aren't dead. My e-mail is Clrnt20078@AOL.com ---- @Scott: It was a contest? I just built Archangel to be friendly! :P
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  November 2, 2009
Nice build, I forgot about that contest! :S
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  November 2, 2009
Huh. I guess all my suicidal MOC characters have started to rub off on other people :P Nice MOC here - the song does fit, and the japanese/manga-ness kinda fits with the KotBC as well, knowing the rest of your MOCs there... I ought to visit that group more often... and make another knight :)
 
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