This is the premiere of CHECKMATE II, which I hope you all enjoy. I recommend reading my first CHECKMATE series to understand what many of the lines mean exactly. I've done my best to make it comedy and mystery until the real action starts so it's never boring. It's 28 pages long. Comment and rate, ENJOY!!!!
Ray Palmer? as in "The Atom" nice creation can't wait for the rest
I like it
Timothy Mably
November 4, 2009
Nice. Cameos are always entertaining. I think Ray needs to act a lot more like Bruce Banner though (doesn't care what he wears, it could be a hoodie despite him being somewhat wealthy)...
I laughed my head off (literally, it's right over there... I think. My eyes are still in it...) at "I woke up three days later with a pounding headache and a cat I don't remeber buying. C'mon, don't tell me I was the only one who did things like that in college!" Literally, this your best comic yet.