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Winter MocOlympics Round 2 Commander Dune VS. commander freeling
All right I rushed this cause school got in my Way so this story is about a captain (armoralls) Never see him without armor (clone) looks for his stolen ship with his right-hand man (one-eye) and decide to attack a republic info post on a outer rim planet.(just read on!!!) (the rebels are meant to be local special forces who are not right for battle and decided to be info researchers.Now to the Story!!!!!
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Armoralls-Keep moving Prisoner!!!!

Armoralls-stay here!

Armoralls-Hello ? anybody in here?

Guard-Yes?

Armoralls-I have information I need to put in my records.
Guard-Show me some ID.
[shows ID]
"Ok I'll open the door."

Guard-Just a moment.......THERE! you can come in.

Armoralls-Thanks[Sarcasticly]

Get ready!!![one-eye prepares smoke bomb]

Ready.

NOW!!!!![Throws bomb]

(explosion)(screams)

(gunshots)

(more gunshots)





Smoke starts to clear.





(The pirates surround the gun wielding guard.)

(drops gun)Guard-What do you want?

Armoralls-My SHIP!!!! (fires Gun)

(Blood flys all around.)Armoralls- Now just need to find my ship?

Found it!!!!! We need to get to sector 12.

THREE HOURS LATER



Fox-Clear!!!!

(storms room)

Commander dune-Sir their gone.

Commander dune-WAIT! I know where they might be.

Follow me!

Fox-Wait up!!!!

















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  November 6, 2009
Cool,nice idea of using cotton balls as smoke,but try to use legos...
 
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