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Risen: Chapter 14- Demoralized
Previously: Upon arriving at Ferlon, Ache and Irrek found the entire city in ruins. They saw a soldier dragged off and were attacked by a new powerful creature.
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When they entered the upper level, Irrek spotted the corpse of the soldier they saw. His body was covered in a black substance.

To the right was the orb Arsem and The Master took from the portal, spilled open.

Irrek heard footsteps behind him and swung his sword, but it was stopped mid-swing.
Irrek: King Nefferon!

Irrek: What are you doing here?
Nefferon: I was going to ask you the same thing.
Irrek: Sir, your city is destroyed and your people are being murdered.

Suddenly, the kings face began glowing orange.
Nefferon: And you will join them!

He blasted Irrek and Ache off the balcony.



Irrek stood up, only to look into the demonic eyes of Jin'Tak.

Jin'Tak grabbed Irrek and threw him into the air. Ache stood in horror, not knowing what to do.

Nefferon walked onto the balcony.
Nefferon: Come my children! Attack the intruders! Let them regret living!

Two more of the strange black creatures ran off the roof toward Ache.

Irrek called out to a nearby soldier: Please. Help me.

The undead soldier turned around and glared at Irrek.

More began walking toward him.



As Ache was fighting the creatures, he noticed his brother about to thrust his blades into Irrek.

Filled with rage, Irrek dispatched the two creatures...

And ran at Jin'Tak while opening the cure.

He jumped on top of Jin'Tak...

and shoved the vial into his mouth.

The two then began fighting off the undead soldiers.

They finally finished... but they soon realized they were doomed.

The creatures Ache cut down were regenerating and more armored ones were approaching.

Ahead of them, a horde of trolls was walking toward them.

The creatures lunged at Ache and sent him flying through the air. Irrek heard a voice next to him: So we meet again, boy.

Irrek turned around to see Arsem...

Who blasted Irrek to the ground with a bolt of energy.

Irrek looked up to see the feet of the armored creatures.

He cut the legs out from under one which melted and blocked the sword of the other.

Suddenly, Irrek noticed a group of men fighting off the trolls.

Ache continued to be mauled by the strange creatures.

Arsem shot at Irrek once again.

As Irrek turned away and braced for impact, a glowing sheild came from his hand and blocked the shot.

He looked at his hand, confused.

Just then, Nefferon came to Arsem and they both dissappeared.

Irrek looked over to the battlefeild. Everything was still.

Everyone began walking toward the awakening Jin'Tak.




Comments

 I like it 
  November 15, 2009
Nice! Cool fight scene! I wonder if the potion will work!
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  November 14, 2009
In case I didn't say it before I really like the head you used for my fig. Awesome strip! I REALLY loved this one, between all the sudden twists and turns of the plot in just these couple of pics. and more puddle monsters this was great.
 I like it 
  November 14, 2009
oh that is ok
 I made it 
  November 12, 2009
Quoting Joseph Bulwidas oh ok if their is going to be a battle can my sigfig be seen?
I really dont have the peices for yours. Its probably just going to be these guys featured in other parts. Sorry.
  November 12, 2009
oh ok if their is going to be a battle can my sigfig be seen?
 I made it 
  November 11, 2009
Quoting Joseph Bulwidas wait you said that appearing in the story ended when severed ended,but i still like it
Ya, chances to appear in it. These guys were already in it, and theyre the leaders, so....
 I like it 
  November 11, 2009
wait you said that appearing in the story ended when severed ended,but i still like it
  November 11, 2009
Medieval Zombie Plague. Cool!
 I like it 
  November 11, 2009
Nicely done, like that shield, what more unknown powers does he have more, good job
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  November 11, 2009
great work, this reveals allot of history.
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  November 11, 2009
Epic chapter! Music was great, along with the battle. Can't wait to see why Irrek can block Arsem's shots! I want more...Good job! 5/5
Nufalak of Mythada
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Jon Capa (yeah "Plutark")
  November 10, 2009
EPIC!!!! Who are the Brotherhood members that show up at the end? I reconize Brik but thats it....
Nufalak of Mythada
Jon Capa (yeah "Plutark")
  November 10, 2009
Ooooohhhhh
 I made it 
  November 10, 2009
Quoting forced sim nice story! althogh to make it better i would have had someone die...like the dude with red hair (arsem?) sorry this is the first of your comics i have read
Ok well, dont take this in a rude tone or anything cuz it isnt, but I would suggest reading through my other comics. Then you would know why I cant just randomly kill people off. Its actually a delicate balance trying to keep the story fresh and interesting. Start with my first series, "Legacies", with the prologue. Read through that, then read "Severed". Once youre done with those, catch up on this one.
 I like it 
  November 10, 2009
nice story! althogh to make it better i would have had someone die...like the dude with red hair (arsem?) sorry this is the first of your comics i have read
 I like it 
  November 10, 2009
While I was reading this, then I actually expected it to be the end! Nice job, a great comic.
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  November 10, 2009
Very creepy story, the music fit in perfectly! Great job as usual. -Danny
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  November 10, 2009
Sweet, undead warriors
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  November 10, 2009
This is epic. Lots of action. Good job.
 I like it 
  November 10, 2009
This is epic. Lots of action. Good job.
 I made it 
  November 10, 2009
Quoting Jon Capa (yeah "Plutark") EPIC!!!! Who are the Brotherhood members that show up at the end? I reconize Brik but thats it....
Those are all four Overseers.
 I like it 
  November 10, 2009
Action....!
 I like it 
  November 10, 2009
awesome chapter!and im sure it was the broother hood that came at the end
 
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