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Risen: Chapter 15- The Light
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Previously: After discovering that the king is The Master, Ache and Irrek were attacked. Jin'Tak was given the cure, and the Brotherhood leaders arrived to help the battle.
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Jin'Taks vision was blurred when he awoke.

When it cleared up, he could see two men looking down at him.



He sat up.
Jin'Tak: Where am I? Whats going on?

For the first time in years, Jin'Tak looked at his brother with his own eyes.

Jin'Tak: Ache? Is that you?
Ache: Yes, its me. Im still alive.

Jin'Tak stood up and grabbed his brother by the arms.
Jin'Tak: Ache! Im so glad to see you! What are you doing here?
Ache: I came here to find you.

Jin'Tak: Ugh. I feel dizzy. What happened? Whats going on?

Ache: You were overshadowed... by Nefferon. He was controlling you and made you try to kill me.... he made you do this.

Ache turned around and showed Jin'Tak the ruins of the city.

Jin'Tak: But how? Why?
Ache: I dont know how... or why. But thats not important right now. Youre back, and thats all that matters.

Irrek: No, thats not all that matters. Arsem and Nefferon are still out there.

Irrek: Judging from Arsems past, I think he will try to take Mirum next.

Ache: Youre right. We need to stop him... but we cant fight these new creatures alone. Theyre savages, beasts. I barely survived two of them. If hes building an army...

Irrek: Youre right. We need help.

Jin'Tak: The Brotherhood of the Blade will aid you. I will gather everyone I can find.

Brik! Where do our numbers lie?

Brik: The whole brotherhood is either here or there assigned settlement.

Jin'Tak: Its settled then.

My brothers and I will aid you once we gather everyone. Where is your city?

Irrek: At the base of the mounains, to the south east. Just through the pass.
Jin'Tak: Very well.

Jin'Tak bent down and retreived his swords.

Jin'Tak: Brothers... ready your things. War is upon us...



FYI: For everyone in the group "The Brotherhood of the Blade", this chapter does not give you all permission to make random mocs of your figs "fighting a war against the trolls" and that sort of thing. Theres still a story going on here, and you need to wait to see how everything plays out. Thank you.




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Nufalak of Mythada
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comander wolfgang
  November 18, 2009
like make more man. i dont know why i put excellent this is more than excellent this is awsome
  November 18, 2009
like brik masta use what you have closets to my sigfig
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  November 17, 2009
Quoting Green Beret So, whose Arsem and where did he come from?
Is this the first time anyone is noticing him in this series? He was brought back in chapter 8, but he was the MAIN enemy of my first series "Legacies". "Risen is the third installment in my trilogy. Read Legacies, Severed, and Risen in that order.
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  November 17, 2009
So, whose Arsem and where did he come from?
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  November 16, 2009
Quoting Joseph Bulwidas cool,I know i said this before can you please try to get me into this next few chapters?if you don't have any more black capes you can make them from black fabric.
The cape isnt the problem. I dont have that chest, mask, and no spare sabres. I also dont know much about your guy, and I honeslty would have no use just putting one other insignificant (no offense, but compared to the leaders...) character in the story. Sorry.
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  November 16, 2009
cool,I know i said this before can you please try to get me into this next few chapters?if you don't have any more black capes you can make them from black fabric.
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  November 15, 2009
Quoting Green Beret I'm confused. Which comes first? Legacies, Risen, Severed, or am I missing something, because when Irrek and Arsem made eye contact earlier in the series, I'd never even heard or read of Arsem before
This is the order to read them: Legacies, Severed, Risen. The first 8 and a half chapters of Severed happen fifteen years before Legacies, but the rest of Severed happens at the same time as Legacies. Risen is the continuation of both stories and combines the two plotlines into one.
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  November 15, 2009
I'm confused. Which comes first? Legacies, Risen, Severed, or am I missing something, because when Irrek and Arsem made eye contact earlier in the series, I'd never even heard or read of Arsem before
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  November 15, 2009
Wow! The music fit perfectly with this one! Can't wait to see the role of the Brotherhood in the war against Arsem and the Master!
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  November 15, 2009
Quoting Lord Lego 436 Oh yeah, and by the way... The "Breathing" part at the very start was great because it fit in perfectly with Jin'Tak waking up! Nice comic and music, overall.
Ya. When I first found this song, I though the breathing was annoying, but when I thought of this scene, it fit perfectly. Its also great because its kind of echoing the prologue.
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  November 15, 2009
Good music and camera angles at start. I just hope, you don't kill my Brotherhood character soon in your plans.
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  November 15, 2009
Sweet chapter! The beginning of it when you did the blurry to focused was exceptional. Although I think you should think about putting poster board or construction paper underneath your moc storyline sets. Can't wait to see how everything happens!
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  November 14, 2009
I think I'm all caught up now. Can't wait for the next one.
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  November 14, 2009
Quoting Lord Lego 436 Another awesome chapter! I'm hoping for an epic finale soon. Make sure for the music, that you choose something more mournful but inspiring, like this, not something fast paced like something from *shudder* Batman.
Whats wrong with Batman? Dont worry, there will be a healthy mix of slow and mournful with fast and epic in the last chapters. I have just the right songs :P
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  November 14, 2009
Oh yeah, and by the way... The "Breathing" part at the very start was great because it fit in perfectly with Jin'Tak waking up! Nice comic and music, overall.
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  November 14, 2009
Another awesome chapter! I'm hoping for an epic finale soon. Make sure for the music, that you choose something more mournful but inspiring, like this, not something fast paced like something from *shudder* Batman.
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  November 14, 2009
sweet.
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  November 14, 2009
Quoting Green Beret Brilliant, but whose Neffron?
Nefferon is the king of Rezval, and hes also The Master.
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  November 14, 2009
Brilliant, but whose Neffron?
 
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