here is my sigfig cheering on a bunch of survivors
my sigfig is the red headed man on the platform.
his name is bryn gadarn (bryn-welsh for hill)(cadarn-welsh for firm)
he is noted mostly for his armour with the crown insignia on it, his large posture, his mane of red hair(kingly almost), his shield with the crown and his gleaming sword "freedom."
unlike other members of the brotherhood, who use short, quick and deadly forms of attack, he uses the manacasil style of attack. this style uses the users strength and brutality to deal massive blows to the enemy while still being quick and hard to dodge or parry.
He was once a highly ranked soldier of Renzval Valley, living in Ferlon. One day, he was sent on a mission with other soldiers to find who the leader of the Brotherhood is. As they searched the Eastern Settlement, they were attacked by a group of troll raiders. Members of the Brotherhood helped the soldiers repell the trolls, but Bryn was the only surviving soldier. The brotherhood offered him help. Bryn demanded to know who the leader was, but insulted one leader after making a mistake in a culture beliefs(woops) as he forced the leader to break a tennant by telling bryn what his plans were. The Brotherhood members vanished, and Bryn returned to the king, wounded and sorrowful. Disgusted with his failure, Bryn was stripped of his rank and banished to the Glaciers in the north. There, another Brotherhood member cared for him, and offered him to join. Bryn traveled back to the Eastern Settlement and met with the leader, Arralek. He was granted permission to join, took an oath to serve the Brotherhood and became an apprentice Brother...
i thought of him when i was reading king arthur
he is my symbol for freedom, equality and a proper leader
its alright but i think he wouldnt be very 'assassin-ey' with him clanking around in big armor and standing in front of the crowd when he should be hidden and secluded silent and stealthy quick and swift not slow (cos of armor)and clanky attentoin seeker (thats what he appears like)
It's like Bruce Wayne punching the Joker in Front of the police without bat mask unnoticed. How should he be able to work as brother in an official army armour? He would be arrested on his first mission immediately. Secondly, i doubt, this group would invite a soldier so easily. Aside you photo isn't anything special but nice story telling, unfortunately it's very constructed.
Um... I dont think you got the memo on some of the "no-nos" for your story. Due to the fact that Mythada was created by me, and all the history has not been revealed yet, I wasnt allowing anyone to make up any major events in the history or have the characters have anything to do with important figures from the lore, such as royalty. Also, your charcter doesnt seem to match what everyone else is like. Brotherhood members are supposed to dress... simpler. They dont wear much armor, and try not to wear anything that would draw attention. My advice would be to try to revise some things in the story (such as the whole history with the king), maybe make your fig a bit more fitting to the Brotherhood style, and read over the rules and that kind of stuff in the group. Sorry :(