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Base on Trapar short comic part 1
This is my contest entry for the star wars tournament!!!! Yet this is also my first comic and throught this was for a contest I will still finish with part 2. Enjoy!
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On the snow planet of Trapar cod, rex and a ARF trooper are planning an offence agenst the droids.
cody:if we make a sneak attack here we could destroy the main droid force.
rex: we need to scout the place first, we don't know much about that sector.
ARF: news just came in, there's a small droid base there, it can aleart the rest of the droid army of our sneak attack when we attack.
A trooper gave cody a holocron of the base.
cody: heres the sector, the base is around here. Most of it is underground and is made of two rooms, one bigger then the other.


Cody and their force got in their gunship.
Cody: really? one of the most importaint missions of this compain and they sent us a bunch of white rookies!
Rex: well teconally one of them is a gunner.

echo (in snow trooper armor): Hey we heard you!
Fives: we were your buddies on rishi base.
Heavy: yeah remeber us?
Rex: oh yeah I remember you.
Cody: me too, but heavy, were you sappose to be dead?
Heavy: oh yeah....
Clone gunner: I'm the rookie here!

Droid 1: fire!
Droid 2: roger roger.

Before they knew it the clone gunship was smashed into the harsh planets snow.
Cody: Everyone O-K? where not that far from the droid base now.
Fives:I don't want to capture the droid base, I'm freezing!!!
Echo: (in snow trooper armor) you should have came prepared.
rex: the droid base is heated/
Fives: WE'RE TAKING THAT BASE!!!


cody: I think I'm picking up something up north, Echo, ARF, you go up there and check it out, then meet us at the base.
echo:OK
ARF: roger.

Cody:I see the base.
clone gunner: me to, but there's a guard droid there.
rex: I'll take care of it.

Back on ARF and echos scout mission.
ARF: you remember that "thing" cody picked up, the reson he sent us here?
echo: yeah.
ARF: I found it, it's a rock.
echo; fish past! well lets try to meet with cody before he destroys all the droids in the base.

cody: gunner, cut us into the base with a fusion cutter.
Gunner: got it!

The strick team got in one of the two rooms of the base with no droid rasistance.
Rex: that wasn't so hard wasn't it.
Heavy: I think I found a peephole to the other room.
Heavy bends over to look in the peephole.
Heavy: well ther are a munch of clankers there, and did they say one room is bigger then tho other?
cody and rex: yeah
Heavy: that rooms about the smae size as the other.
THEY LIED!!!!

to be continued...



Comments

 I like it 
  January 23, 2010
Really cool. The story seems promising and the action is nice. Great job. Could you please check this out. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/180827
 I like it 
  January 18, 2010
Cool little comic.can't wait for part two:)
  December 15, 2009
We've been betrayed. By Condor.
 I made it 
  December 12, 2009
thanks for the comments, and plus I found out that some of the pics were mixed up if any of you where woundering, but now the pics are in the right order. :)
 I like it 
  December 10, 2009
LOL funny and nice job!
 I made it 
  December 9, 2009
Quoting Off The Hook Productions™ I don't get the end they lied? But what was funny was "The base is heated. Were taking that base" good job looking forward to reading part 2.
we "they" said that one room was bigger then another, but both were the same size, yet it basically was a pointless lie.
 I like it 
  December 9, 2009
I don't get the end they lied? But what was funny was "The base is heated. Were taking that base" good job looking forward to reading part 2.
 I like it 
  December 7, 2009
awesome john connor out
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  December 7, 2009
awesome john connor out
 I like it 
  December 7, 2009
awesome john connor out
 I like it 
  December 7, 2009
Awesome comic!Your customs look even better in this!
 I like it 
  December 7, 2009
Great job Kevin! Great story. Now everybody can better see your cool clones! Sorry, but I must go to school. Awesome!
 
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