Alright, Dawn. Not bad! I like what you did with the reds as an addition to the greys. I feel like the reds might actually be a bit too spread out, though. I might have prefered to see them in just a few select places, rather than all over the place and at very equal distances from one another (tends to make things look a little "checkered"). I like the form of the ship from overhead, but the very blocky shape loses a bit from the side. It might have been nice to see the form just a bit more varied in places. So all in all a nicely done MOC, but this time around, I've got to give my vote to your opponent, who did a superb job as well.