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Legend of the Lionknights Part VII
Here is part VII, enjoy!
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 I like it 
  February 21, 2010
That sea serpant ship is pretty cool, isn't it!
 I made it 
  January 7, 2010
Quoting Nufalak of Mythada Alright, here's my critique so far: The beginning seemed a little rushed, but it slowed down a bit and began to make more sense, which is good. The landscape could use some work however. Perhaps using more plates to make gradual slopes on the ground. Also, try using different camera distances and angles for certain scenes. This usually helps with the mood or to show exactley where the characters are. I got a little lost on where they are at because of all the cloe up shots. Also, you might want to work on your dialogue a bit. It feels like the characters are "reading from a script" and they all seem to have the same mood, tone and vocabulary. Maybe a little more variety would help? Another thing, and this is purely a personal opinion, the story doesn't seem to be dark enough for me. It seems pretty generic, which isn't nessecarily bad, but I like things to be different than the norm and a bit darker than this. In the end, the series shows promise to be fairly well made.
Thanks!
 I like it 
  January 7, 2010
Alright, here's my critique so far: The beginning seemed a little rushed, but it slowed down a bit and began to make more sense, which is good. The landscape could use some work however. Perhaps using more plates to make gradual slopes on the ground. Also, try using different camera distances and angles for certain scenes. This usually helps with the mood or to show exactley where the characters are. I got a little lost on where they are at because of all the cloe up shots. Also, you might want to work on your dialogue a bit. It feels like the characters are "reading from a script" and they all seem to have the same mood, tone and vocabulary. Maybe a little more variety would help? Another thing, and this is purely a personal opinion, the story doesn't seem to be dark enough for me. It seems pretty generic, which isn't nessecarily bad, but I like things to be different than the norm and a bit darker than this. In the end, the series shows promise to be fairly well made.
 I like it 
  December 27, 2009
Just reminding you about the contest in Legot.
Justin R.
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commander fire arm
  December 26, 2009
that is awsome ship ,but its small ^-^
 I made it 
  December 18, 2009
Quoting Christian Schlichting The riverside was a very nice picture/diorama. It looks natural.
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
 I like it 
  December 18, 2009
The riverside was a very nice picture/diorama. It looks natural.
 I made it 
  December 18, 2009
Quoting Casey McCoy The scenery was great for this chapter! I like how you used the Sea Serpent too! Even though this one was kinda' short, I'm sure it's leading up to a awesome big one. (Hopefully!) Nice job!
Thanks Casey! The next will be pretty long, but I probably wont do it until after Christmas when I will have some new legos!
 I made it 
  December 18, 2009
Quoting Tom R. Darn! Casey beat me to it! Great issue! Great work. You must join C.C!
Thanks! What's C.C?
 I like it 
  December 18, 2009
cool!
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  December 17, 2009
Great!
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  December 17, 2009
The scenery was great for this chapter! I like how you used the Sea Serpent too! Even though this one was kinda' short, I'm sure it's leading up to a awesome big one. (Hopefully!) Nice job!
 
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