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"Prisoners"
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Moc-Off Round: 1
Opponent: Awesomeness 124
Category: Comic



Day I



What happened? When did it all go wrong? None of that truly matters now, the stories of the beautiful world this once was have become nothing more than optimist fairytales, lies. True we still have civilisation, but we are surrounded by a barren wasteland. We are "safe" here, yet we have absolutely no contact with the rest of the world. No one leaves or enters those cold walls, well not alive that is. Are we safe, or are we prisoners?

I refuse to be a prisoner.

As I ran, I could hear an officer telling a guard "Hold fire, the desert will deal with him." Perhaps he was right, perhaps I am walking straight to my death...




Day III


The desert is cruel and unforgiving. The sun scorchs not only my skin but my very mind, I will surely become insane, if I am not already insane. I'm in hell, no other words can properly describe this place.

The world is spinning out of control. I fell into the sand, each grain of sand seemed to stab me, to eat me. I know I must get up and continue, but what's the point? I will die either way, why prolong my suffering?

I lifted my gaze to see what lay ahead of me, I saw a dark figure, with no face or human features. Despite it's lack of eyes, I got the strange feeling that it was... staring at me. I am surely mad, yet it seems so real...

I must know, I gathered my withering energies to get up. As soon as I got up the figure, waved at me. This common gesture sent chills up my spine...

The figure ran. Something inside of me made me follow it, I truly do not know why I did, my movements were almost involuntary, as if some unknown force was pulling me.




Day VI


I have followed that shadow for three days now, my mind is slipping along with the shadow. I can hardly remember, little less than a week ago I was... alive and safe. Am I dead? I've never stopped to think what happened after death, perhaps I will find out soon. For now I mindlessly follow this shadow that seems to mock me with every step it takes...
I pursued it to an old shack, it was completely destroyed. After days of pursuing it in this empty wasteland it stopped. It laid down on the sand, almost as if it was dead...

Was it dangerous? What wil happen once I trap it? I reached for my gun, unsure of what will happen...

As I came closer the shadow melted, dissolved into the sand. In it's place was a skeleton, it was half in decomposition.

I looked around, I might survive with these things for a while, not for long but just a bit longer. In the first time in these 6 days I finally felt a bit of hope, these ruins must mean that some inteligent life must live close. What if they're hostile? What if I am killed? All this will have been for nothing.

I gathered everything I could find, a rifle that did'nt seem to be like all the other compact rifle designs I've always known, and a strangely fashioned scarf. I must be insane if I think I'll survive this mess

but I will not die without a fight.




Comments

 I like it 
  March 30, 2010
Very nice, I wouldn't want to die without a fight in such conditions, great job
 I like it 
  January 4, 2010
Cool story line but you copied my idea 0_o even though i haven't posted anything with the black figures :P If i make a comic storyline thing with those, im not copying you :P
 I like it 
  January 3, 2010
Nice story telling, and for a limited size MOC, some nice building as well. Very cool!
 I like it 
  December 22, 2009
Very nice my friend! I love the story line so far. I can't wait to see more!
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  December 22, 2009
AWESOME COMIC!!!!! i like the shadow idea and the ruined shack!
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  December 22, 2009
This is a really strange but cool comic! I like the ruins of the shack you made and the prison that the main character escapes from.
 I like it 
  December 21, 2009
Awesome! I'll start judging this Christmas! Happy Holidays (because, not all people are Christian)!
 I like it 
  December 21, 2009
Muy bien hecho mi amigo, lo que mas me gust fuecuando el guardia dijo, dejalo, el desirto va a acbar con el, muy bien hech repito.
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  December 21, 2009
Muy bien hecho mi amigo, lo que mas me gust fuecuando el guardia dijo, dejalo, el desirto va a acbar con el, muy bien hech repito.
 I like it 
  December 21, 2009
it does look very cool and that scene of him running from the complex is ace
 I made it 
  December 21, 2009
Quoting Louis K. Wow, Iīm overwhelmed by the atmosphere. When I saw the last pic, there was a real movie scene in my head! You gave exactly the right degree of explained facts and imagination, thatīs the perfect combination. I canīt wait for the next part, itīs really suspense-packed, great job!
Thank you, I'm glad you like it;)
Quoting Nate 000 Nice! And you know how I named my fish Jaster, well he passed away several days ago. Other than that BlueFire is beginning to behave oddly. :(
Aww =(
Quoting Commander T-Bird It Almost Seems Like Its Terminator
I can honestly say I haven't seen terminator, so any similarities are pure coincidence.
 I like it 
  December 21, 2009
Wow, Iīm overwhelmed by the atmosphere. When I saw the last pic, there was a real movie scene in my head! You gave exactly the right degree of explained facts and imagination, thatīs the perfect combination. I canīt wait for the next part, itīs really suspense-packed, great job!
 I like it 
  December 21, 2009
It Almost Seems Like Its Terminator
 I like it 
  December 21, 2009
Nice! And you know how I named my fish Jaster, well he passed away several days ago. Other than that BlueFire is beginning to behave oddly. :(
 I like it 
  December 21, 2009
Nice job,and great story!
 I like it 
  December 21, 2009
brilliant story telling
 I like it 
  December 21, 2009
brilliant story telling
 I like it 
  December 21, 2009
brilliant story telling
 
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