Thats how I planned it. I've goten pretty good at timing my pictures and text with the music over the past year or so.

That's nice and when i saw him wake up the music stopped pretty cool huh. It's like the tenses of the music rising then Wake up the music stops

Man i see why u didnt move the body man the guy is dead i aint touching him ude get like a disease or somin

Well, I wouldn't have, so therefore: he didn't. Jake is based on me :P

i just thought of something wouldnt he have at least moved the dead body from the corner

That was great! incredible suspense! and the war torn bedroom looked awesome! nice bullet damage on the wall!

Sorry, but life gets in the way sometimes. I'm working on a vehicle I need and a song to use (its much arder to find songs for this than Mythada). The rest is set.

When will you post chapter one? It's been like a week!

It looks like he wet himself 0_0

Awesome, this has the makings of a great storyline, can't wait to see it unfold.

cool nice story,nice looking holes

Ah, ya I hope to get some new fans. But it might not be right away. Remember how long it took for me to start getting regular readers when I started Legacies?

What I mean by "Risen Momentum" is that you should try to make new fans and try new things, not just make a comic series and get comments from your Risen fans.

Wow! This is great! When I saw when he woke up, I thought that the invasion was an event to come. When I saw the last pic, I was in total shock, lol! Really nice job! Can't wait for more!

Well, words helped in describing what was going on... just for backstory reasons. It's kind of hinting on what you will find out later on.

It's my goal and pleasure. You're welcome.

Forgot to add- I like how the attack doesn't have large music, like it is silent, and sorta small, it reminds me of some of the sound tracks in Resedent evil 3. I like how the music was perfectly timed, when the dramatic part ending stops, he wakes up, and the sorta ominouse music plays as he looks around. Thanks for getting me in my happy mode. XD

Alright!!!! YEESSS!!!! Post more!!!! Not to sound ungrateful or anything... I must say this is a strong and powerful intro to the story. However, since it was a dream, may I suggest a little technique that would add more to the story? Don't use words. Just pics. The whole lack of English would leave one trying to figure out what was happening, until suddenly you switch to a pick of a rotting ceiling, and then your final pick. That would add major impact to the prologue and pull the reader into the story farther to want to learn more. MEP

cool i realy liked it

There already is a group :)

wow i really like this! the creepiest thing i saw was in that last pic in the corner, was that a skeleton? if so...*shudders* you should make a group for this!*cough*invite me*cough* Ahem, sorry i have a bad cough ;)

Meaning what? Don't make it as "rushed" as Risen, take time between posts? Or do something totally different from Mythada? Cuz I will have a smaller amount of major turns in each chapter and it will be very different from Mythada.

Oh my gosh...one word...EPIC!

Awesome! Those last two pictures were amazing, especially when you saw him wake up, and I was like "Oh, that's no fun at all!" But then I saw the bullet holes, and I was like "Woah." All in all, very impactful, skillfully done Prologue. Just keep in mind, try not to ride on your 'Risen' momentum. Try to achieve something new camera-angle wise, or story-wise. But still, Phazeorz (or whatever) is just trying to act all 'cool and uninterested, but I guess i'll give you a moment of my time out of "comeplete lack of boredom" (Meaning that he isn't bored at all...)'

Oh shoot! It really happened! That was kind of a creepy ending there...

Good teaser, you have me interested and I have questions, too. No doubt will be aswered in all due time...

Well, close to book like. I'll have more detailed narration, more action, and dialogue after this. I kept the prologue vague so I could get the right effect later.

We'll see. I'll most probably continue to read them through a lack of boredom, though I would suggest writing it in a more 'book-like' appearance, as it would help greatly with suspense and just overall apperance.

Well, that's the style of my comics. This is also more of a "teaser" type of prologue. Maybe give it a few more chapters? :)

Nyeh, even for a prologue it did not set up enough intrest for me to want to continue to read on. Maybe it was the completel lack of detail upon one's writing, or maybe just the fact it was all wrapped in one sentence at a time.

Oh you ain't seen nothin' yet!

Sweet!

oh this is awsome great work. so what happened in that guys dream was true. so thats how the city became deserted. the last picture was great with the bullet holes and the massive hole. great work.

Correct. The commander said they needed to clear an "invasion site".

it looked like they were killing citizins in that guy's dream. -Matt Shack

Are you serious? I made it pretty obvious what's going on. At least as obvious as I can make it without it being cheesy at all. Try reading it again.

I love it. It's all a dream.... or is it?

what is going on? -Matt Shack

Capital! I can't wait to see what happens!

More will be explained as the comic continues.

so cool, i love how it was a dream or was it

Nah, its just a dirty old cloth. Post apoc right? Things get dirty.

It looks like he wet his sheets!

The last picture is great, the music was over too quick but generally, perfect choice, i got the idea. For the air scenes maybe a blue background would have fit better. Athmospheric nice start.