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Superman Underworld: Season Finale, Issue #10
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Here's the finale of Superman Underworld!!! It's 37 pages long. I've decided to pretty much end the story without a cliff-hanger, unlike usual. It just seemed like enough has gone on already. I've started working on ideas for the next season and I think you'll like it. It'll be more like Superman Deliverance that this one. Thanks for reading these comics, I've really enjoyed feedback. So tell me how this one was and keep watching for the next season. ENJOY!!!
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  February 12, 2010
Quoting Timothy Mably Great issue!!!! I saw some errors in the dialogue though; "me and Lois" should be "Lois and I" and "Check out this" should obviously be "Check this out." I love the ending as well as the small mention of Steel and the cameo of Metallo is great. Now that he has reason to actually harm Lex, I'm a fan of this version :D
with the dialogue, I'm so bad at grammar that good grammar sounds unnatural to me. :) I plan to follow up on some of the stuff here eventually, but the next season will seem to branch out from Superman Deliverance's ending. I recommend keeping in mind Sydney Happerson, John Henry Irons, and John Corben because they'll hopefully show up later.
Josh L.
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Timothy Mably
  February 11, 2010
Great issue!!!! I saw some errors in the dialogue though; "me and Lois" should be "Lois and I" and "Check out this" should obviously be "Check this out." I love the ending as well as the small mention of Steel and the cameo of Metallo is great. Now that he has reason to actually harm Lex, I'm a fan of this version :D
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  February 10, 2010
Quoting Christian Schlichting Ok, here my opinion: It's still a good made comic like your others and i liked the detective-story plot, it was more complex than the normal supervillain vs. Superman thing. But personally, i didn't like this season as well as the last ones. I respect your idea of a revamp and making all darker and a bit realistic, but basicly it's just trying to tell a (Nolan)Batman story with Superman as maincharacter. This doesn't work for me because Superman is superior and one small scene with Luthor and a cryptonit-gun isn't very thrilling for a complete season. Superman needs an equal villain even if this means more fantasy-style. But that's just my opinion, your storytelling is overall great, the builds and pictures can be improved but ok. Keep your work.
I get what you're saying, and for the most part I agree. the only problem in that this is supposed to be the first appearance of Luthor, and so I either had to make it a little slow or have some cliche plan to take over the world. next season will be more like Superman Deliverance, which a good ammount of action.
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  February 10, 2010
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  February 10, 2010
Ok, here my opinion: It's still a good made comic like your others and i liked the detective-story plot, it was more complex than the normal supervillain vs. Superman thing. But personally, i didn't like this season as well as the last ones. I respect your idea of a revamp and making all darker and a bit realistic, but basicly it's just trying to tell a (Nolan)Batman story with Superman as maincharacter. This doesn't work for me because Superman is superior and one small scene with Luthor and a cryptonit-gun isn't very thrilling for a complete season. Superman needs an equal villain even if this means more fantasy-style. But that's just my opinion, your storytelling is overall great, the builds and pictures can be improved but ok. Keep your work.
 
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