Fascinating build! The eye part is totally my favorite, he looks very maniacal! Some of your shots are very interesting, especially the close-up ones. But you could have used a softer light in most of them, the harshness caused a glare. But it's the build that matters, not the photography, so AWEsome job on this, I really love it!!! That weapon with the four blades on it really caught my eye.
You've got potential! This is truly amazing, the eye and the staff both really stand out to me, keep up the good work, and I extend you an invitation to join my group, Makuta's Sons Here's a link: http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/6815