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Team "Legion Of Virile Energetic Moccers Unified For Frivolous Ingenious Naughtiness" entry in the “I can write better than George Lucas” category.





Jedi Master Qui Gon Jinn has just saved Jar Jar Binks from being killed by a Trade Federation MTT on Naboo. We join the scene just as Jar Jar is pledging his servitude to Qui Gon with a Gungan “life debt.”




Jar Jar Binks: “Oh mui mui I love you! Mesa called Jar Jar Binks, mesa your humble servant.”







Qui Gon Jinn: “That won’t be necessary.”







Jar Jar: “Oh but it tis! Tis demanded by da gawds it tis! Mesa be with you forever. Wesa being best friends! Mesa never leaving yousa side!”
Qui Gon: “… … …”







VAAAAWUMP







Obi Wan: “Master, I heard your lightsaber. Are you alright? Wait, what happened here?”
Qui Gon: “It was… the will of the force my young padawan. Now quick, grab the legs and help me get this in the bushes.”







Captain Tarples: “Hey yousa dere. Mesa Captain Tarples of the Gungan Grand Army.”
Qui Gon: “This… isn’t what it looks like.”







Tarples: “Oh no nosa. Yousa doing the Gungan peoples a great service! Mesa tell you what. At the end of disen movie when yousa needing an army, yousa come to da Gungans and wesa help.”







Obi Wan: “Well that couldn’t have worked out better now could it?”







Fourth Wall Commentary: I’ve done “Extended Universe” stories for Star Wars before but they had all been “serious” type stories. For this one, I wanted to have a little fun. It’s been said time and time again that George Lucas’ biggest mistake was Jar Jar Binks. Taking the writing out of it, Jar Jar actually had a relevant part to play in the movie. He was the link between the Naboo and the Gungans when the Naboo needed an army at the end to fight the droids. Well, I found a simple solution around that and now we can rewrite the prequels sans Jar Jar!

Till next time true believers!




Comments

 I like it 
  March 13, 2012
I love it! You truly do write better then George Lucas :P
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  November 7, 2010
it should have happened like this after jar jar asked to be servant: (qui gon uses mind trick)that wont be necessary. jar jar: oh yes it will. anakin: i geuss mind tricks dont work if they have no brain. p.s amazing moc
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  May 3, 2010
Is the crocodile getting any of this action, or are you no Peter Pan?
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  March 13, 2010
Hahahaha! Oh man I laughed so loud just then that I embarrassed myself! How did I miss this? I think sometimes my email decides what to show me and what to leave till I really need a good laugh. Thanks dude, I really needed that. Haven't laughed so much since Heath's CC build when you were down the back alley reviewing your last meal.
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  March 4, 2010
Hehehe, your sense of humor is as odd as my Dad's! Poor Jar-Jar.
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  March 1, 2010
Judges are wrong on this one, OK this is a simple (but good) build, but if it was the true story, SW 1 could have been an -almost- good movie. My only complaint : Jar-Jar die too quickly. He deserved to suffer lol Excellent !
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  February 22, 2010
Ha! If that was what George intended, we wouldn't be suffering right now! =D
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  February 20, 2010
I actually used to like Jar-Jar...but now when I watch those movies I can't stand so much of it. I really would've loved a death scene from him, he was a Disney character that just made Star Wars worse....that being said, great work. probly the best Jar-Jar kill I've ever seen. very funny too!
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  February 20, 2010
haha, that would have made the movie so much better.
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  February 20, 2010
haha, that would have made the movie so much better.
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  February 20, 2010
Mesa loves it!
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  February 19, 2010
If Jar Jar was killed, than I'm sure Lucas would find some other character to annoy us all. So I say we're fortunate that we hav... Ah I can't say it. Great job =)
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  February 19, 2010
Quoting Keith Goldman Score of 1. This score has been restored to its original value.
Thank you very, VERY much. And you know I mean that. ~ Chris.
  February 19, 2010
Four points? Really?? As much as I love tha Phip and his moderating intentions for MOCpages, but really: this is very close to "Clone on a plate"! The story is good; the MOC s*cks. I go with Goldman on this one.
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  February 19, 2010
I think this MOC story is really good! There are a lot of "Killing Jar Jar" creations but I think this is one of the best because it doesn't kill him in a ridiculous and violent way.
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  February 19, 2010
LOL, but I feel sory for Jar Jar :(
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  February 19, 2010
Quoting Yuri Fassio I din't figure Hans D. for one who'd behead someone...
Oh, I've been known to behead a dishwasher or two in my day...~H
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  February 19, 2010
Excellent! HAHAHAHA. Jar Jar killed movie 1 and Anakin's teenage tantrums killed movie 2. I like your version of this better! Cheers.
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  February 19, 2010
ROFL!!!
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  February 19, 2010
I won't get into the discussion on how many points this deserves, but I will say this made me laugh and could only have worked out better if Jub-jub the frog fairy had caught a painful AND itchy disease before croaking. Good stuff.
  February 19, 2010
Hahaha, I think they should also nuke it from orbit...it's the only way to be sure. (ps: I just got over sixty e-mails from MOCpages this morning with new creations of people that I call my favourite builders. All from the past few weeks. I thought it was very quiet here lately, but it turns out I just haven't been getting my notifications. Will try and catch up a bit now.)
  February 19, 2010
Quoting Keith Goldman (from a MOC Athalon group thread) Yes, I absoluetly think Phipson's MOC deserves a 1, there is no build. The trees were columns of 2x4 bricks. I refuse to reward that.
Keith Goldman is a wishy-washy, waffling pansy who lacks the courage to stand by his convictions. Anyone else who is unhappy with a score he gave should be up in arms over this. Clearly, I was right all along -- the fix is in.
Chris Phipson
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Noddles .
  February 18, 2010
Well he did lead them the the Gungans..but thats really all....
Chris Phipson
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Noddles .
  February 18, 2010
Well he did lead them the the Gungans..but thats really all....
Chris Phipson
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Michael Sloper
  February 18, 2010
LOL! That was great! Good work with recreating the most painful scene in Star Wars history, but seriously, funny moc. Oh, and could you comment on my Executor when you get the time? Thanks. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/185676 (If you don't want to then I understand)
  February 18, 2010
Um, what happened to Goldman?~H
 I like it 
  February 18, 2010
I'll leave the 'build' critiquing to the judges when it comes to this as an entry. As for whether an 8 year old can write better than Lucas, well that's just...true. I was entertained, even if I saw it coming from 10 parsecs away.~H
  February 18, 2010
Lol that is awesomely funny. XD ~Waff
  February 18, 2010
I would give the story and humor an immediate 5 but instead I'm rating the build. Meh I've seen much better from you. 1/5
  February 18, 2010
Although I like it, the judges were completely biased, except for Goldman. If anyone besides you had made this, the scores would have been all ones. Still, be proud of your fours. They would only be deserving if you made this moc float.
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  February 18, 2010
Certainly on the story side of things this moc is top notch, and would be far better than the original in my opinion. However, this is for both the story and the build. As far as the build goes we have a bunch of plant elements stacked up, and a few brown pillars, and a couple of minifigs on a plate. The photography is top notch though. For the story I'd give it a four for the build I would give it a two for an average score of three (3) points. Lee.
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  February 18, 2010
I heard that slap all the way from Coruscant... XP
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  February 18, 2010
Haha, Keith "the voice of sanity" Goldman strikes again! Seriously, a braindead Halo kiddie can write better than George Lucas. There's no challenge in that.
  February 18, 2010
Woah, a 1 from goldman? Wow, that hurts...
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  February 18, 2010
You attempted to write better than George Lucus... and you did it with flying colors! That was amazing! Not only did you get rid of Jar-Jar binks in a funny way, you made it so the ending was basicly the same. Why didn't YOU write Star Wars? ~ J
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  February 18, 2010
Doesn't anyone feel sorry for Jar-Jar?
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  February 18, 2010
lol, they never needed Jar Jar anyways... ~m0s3s
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  February 18, 2010
Dude, this is mega-awesome! Could you comment on my MOC, the Space Bus?
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  February 18, 2010
"Alas, poor Jar Jar! I knew him, Obi-Wan: a fellow of infinite jest, of most excellent fancy: he hath borne me on his back a thousand times; and now, how abhorred in my imagination it is! My gorge rims at it. Here hung those lips that I have kissed I know not how oft. Where be your gibes now? your gambols? your songs? your flashes of merriment, that were wont to set the table on a roar? Not one now, to mock your own grinning? Quite chap-fallen? Now get you to my lady's chamber, and tell her, let her paint an inch thick, to this favour she must come; make her laugh at that." That's all I could think of as Qui-Gon holds the decapitated head of the fallen Gungan. 4 points from me for being the first to try this category.
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  February 18, 2010
Jar Jar bonked!
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  February 18, 2010
YES! Aside from the prequals in general, Jar Jar was the biggest mistake Lucas ever made. Maybe he'll release a special special edition of the prequals with Binks totally deleted (fingers crossed).
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  February 18, 2010
Way to bring the heat, Chris. Nice build and an finally an excellent ending to a Star-wars build.
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  February 18, 2010
Awesome. Did you get that invitation into BrickLife: The MOCpages Magazine yet?
 I like it 
  February 18, 2010
Finally, a satisfying Star Wars Moc.
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  February 18, 2010
If Jar Jar dies, no one is able to convince the other senators to give supreme chancellor palpatine the emergency power to use the clone army. So in turn all the Jedi would have died or been captured and the separatists would have had a major victory at geonosis and in turn the confederacy might have won the clone wars and the republic would have been abolished again anyway and in turn the empire would have never existed. BUT then again... Dooku was in league with palpatine so palpatine might have ended up controlling the droid army and so the empire the might have still existed in one way or another. Perhaps I am over thinking this... Oh, by the way, great story and scenes.
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  February 18, 2010
Quoting Obi Wan “Well that couldn’t have worked out better now could it?”
Hmmm... I think it could, with some gore an maybe a bit of "color" in the underbush. And I din't figure Hans D. for one who'd behead someone... However, this category called for good writing ideas as well as building, so I need to keep both in consideration to award you... (drum roll) 2 Points. (Just kidding! the actual points are 4, I just wanted to imagine your face when you read that)
 I like it 
  February 18, 2010
HaHa. Nice..
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  February 18, 2010
Lol, I love what you did there.
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  February 18, 2010
This is hilarious. This is what the scene should have been like since the beginning.
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  February 18, 2010
Haha, nice one.
  February 18, 2010
Very nice! I wish that would have happened!
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  February 18, 2010
XD Thats how I wouldve done it! Or maybe JarJar wouldve been eating by the fish monsters...
 
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