I love it! You truly do write better then George Lucas :P

it should have happened like this after jar jar asked to be servant: (qui gon uses mind trick)that wont be necessary. jar jar: oh yes it will. anakin: i geuss mind tricks dont work if they have no brain. p.s amazing moc

Is the crocodile getting any of this action, or are you no Peter Pan?

Hahahaha! Oh man I laughed so loud just then that I embarrassed myself! How did I miss this? I think sometimes my email decides what to show me and what to leave till I really need a good laugh. Thanks dude, I really needed that. Haven't laughed so much since Heath's CC build when you were down the back alley reviewing your last meal.

Hehehe, your sense of humor is as odd as my Dad's! Poor Jar-Jar.

Judges are wrong on this one, OK this is a simple (but good) build, but if it was the true story, SW 1 could have been an -almost- good movie. My only complaint : Jar-Jar die too quickly. He deserved to suffer lol Excellent !

Ha! If that was what George intended, we wouldn't be suffering right now! =D

I actually used to like Jar-Jar...but now when I watch those movies I can't stand so much of it. I really would've loved a death scene from him, he was a Disney character that just made Star Wars worse....that being said, great work. probly the best Jar-Jar kill I've ever seen. very funny too!

haha, that would have made the movie so much better.

haha, that would have made the movie so much better.

Mesa loves it!

If Jar Jar was killed, than I'm sure Lucas would find some other character to annoy us all. So I say we're fortunate that we hav... Ah I can't say it. Great job =)

Thank you very, VERY much. And you know I mean that. ~ Chris.

Four points? Really?? As much as I love tha Phip and his moderating intentions for MOCpages, but really: this is very close to "Clone on a plate"! The story is good; the MOC s*cks. I go with Goldman on this one.

I think this MOC story is really good! There are a lot of "Killing Jar Jar" creations but I think this is one of the best because it doesn't kill him in a ridiculous and violent way.

LOL, but I feel sory for Jar Jar :(

Oh, I've been known to behead a dishwasher or two in my day...~H

Excellent! HAHAHAHA. Jar Jar killed movie 1 and Anakin's teenage tantrums killed movie 2. I like your version of this better! Cheers.

ROFL!!!

I won't get into the discussion on how many points this deserves, but I will say this made me laugh and could only have worked out better if Jub-jub the frog fairy had caught a painful AND itchy disease before croaking. Good stuff.

Hahaha, I think they should also nuke it from orbit...it's the only way to be sure. (ps: I just got over sixty e-mails from MOCpages this morning with new creations of people that I call my favourite builders. All from the past few weeks. I thought it was very quiet here lately, but it turns out I just haven't been getting my notifications. Will try and catch up a bit now.)

Keith Goldman is a wishy-washy, waffling pansy who lacks the courage to stand by his convictions. Anyone else who is unhappy with a score he gave should be up in arms over this. Clearly, I was right all along -- the fix is in.

Well he did lead them the the Gungans..but thats really all....

Well he did lead them the the Gungans..but thats really all....

LOL! That was great! Good work with recreating the most painful scene in Star Wars history, but seriously, funny moc. Oh, and could you comment on my Executor when you get the time? Thanks. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/185676 (If you don't want to then I understand)

Um, what happened to Goldman?~H

I'll leave the 'build' critiquing to the judges when it comes to this as an entry. As for whether an 8 year old can write better than Lucas, well that's just...true. I was entertained, even if I saw it coming from 10 parsecs away.~H

Lol that is awesomely funny. XD ~Waff

I would give the story and humor an immediate 5 but instead I'm rating the build. Meh I've seen much better from you. 1/5

Although I like it, the judges were completely biased, except for Goldman. If anyone besides you had made this, the scores would have been all ones. Still, be proud of your fours. They would only be deserving if you made this moc float.

Certainly on the story side of things this moc is top notch, and would be far better than the original in my opinion. However, this is for both the story and the build. As far as the build goes we have a bunch of plant elements stacked up, and a few brown pillars, and a couple of minifigs on a plate. The photography is top notch though. For the story I'd give it a four for the build I would give it a two for an average score of three (3) points. Lee.

I heard that slap all the way from Coruscant... XP

Haha, Keith "the voice of sanity" Goldman strikes again! Seriously, a braindead Halo kiddie can write better than George Lucas. There's no challenge in that.

Woah, a 1 from goldman? Wow, that hurts...

You attempted to write better than George Lucus... and you did it with flying colors! That was amazing! Not only did you get rid of Jar-Jar binks in a funny way, you made it so the ending was basicly the same. Why didn't YOU write Star Wars? ~ J

Doesn't anyone feel sorry for Jar-Jar?

lol, they never needed Jar Jar anyways... ~m0s3s

Dude, this is mega-awesome! Could you comment on my MOC, the Space Bus?

"Alas, poor Jar Jar! I knew him, Obi-Wan: a fellow of infinite jest, of most excellent fancy: he hath borne me on his back a thousand times; and now, how abhorred in my imagination it is! My gorge rims at it. Here hung those lips that I have kissed I know not how oft. Where be your gibes now? your gambols? your songs? your flashes of merriment, that were wont to set the table on a roar? Not one now, to mock your own grinning? Quite chap-fallen? Now get you to my lady's chamber, and tell her, let her paint an inch thick, to this favour she must come; make her laugh at that." That's all I could think of as Qui-Gon holds the decapitated head of the fallen Gungan. 4 points from me for being the first to try this category.

Jar Jar bonked!

YES! Aside from the prequals in general, Jar Jar was the biggest mistake Lucas ever made. Maybe he'll release a special special edition of the prequals with Binks totally deleted (fingers crossed).

Way to bring the heat, Chris. Nice build and an finally an excellent ending to a Star-wars build.

Awesome. Did you get that invitation into BrickLife: The MOCpages Magazine yet?

Finally, a satisfying Star Wars Moc.

If Jar Jar dies, no one is able to convince the other senators to give supreme chancellor palpatine the emergency power to use the clone army. So in turn all the Jedi would have died or been captured and the separatists would have had a major victory at geonosis and in turn the confederacy might have won the clone wars and the republic would have been abolished again anyway and in turn the empire would have never existed. BUT then again... Dooku was in league with palpatine so palpatine might have ended up controlling the droid army and so the empire the might have still existed in one way or another. Perhaps I am over thinking this... Oh, by the way, great story and scenes.

Hmmm... I think it could, with some gore an maybe a bit of "color" in the underbush. And I din't figure Hans D. for one who'd behead someone... However, this category called for good writing ideas as well as building, so I need to keep both in consideration to award you... (drum roll) 2 Points. (Just kidding! the actual points are 4, I just wanted to imagine your face when you read that)

HaHa. Nice..

Lol, I love what you did there.

This is hilarious. This is what the scene should have been like since the beginning.

Haha, nice one.

Very nice! I wish that would have happened!

XD Thats how I wouldve done it! Or maybe JarJar wouldve been eating by the fish monsters...