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No Refuge: Part 08- Another Loss
Previously: Shortly after Jake was experimented on, a group of people came and attacked the base where he was held. The prisoners were freed, the building was rigged to explode, and the charges were activated.
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Jake jumped out of the way of the oncoming mech.

He starred up at the machine, confused.

Suddenly, a gun was being pointed at his head.
"Don't move."

Jake reacted quickly and kicked the gun out of the soldier's hand.

While the soldier was on the ground, Jake opened fire on the pilot of the mech.



He then turned to the man on the ground.
Jake: "Now it's my turn."

Jake: "What's going on here? Why is the military in the city? The war hasn't reached the U.S. so what's going on?"

Soldier: "We are clearing an invasion site. It's just orders. The city must be wiped out... it is his will.

Jake looked at the man confused.
Jake: "Whose will?"

Soldier: "The Lord... We-"

Without letting him continue, Jake pulled the trigger.



He turned around and dropped the gun, realizing he had just taken two lives.

Jake: "Oh no..."

"I hope she's alright..."

Jake began to wake up to the sound of voices.
"It's no use. They're dead. Let's just get out of here."

He got up slowly. His whole body ached from the explosion.

He looked over and noticed the vehicles driving away.

The entire building was in ruins.

Jake looked into the hallway, unable to see Tye's body anywhere.
Jake: "No... Tye..."

He walked over to the bodies and began to scavenge clothing.



Jake looked up at the truck in front of him.

He walked toward it, still sore.

He pushed the bodies out of the back.
Jake: "What were they doing in that lab?"

He walked around to the front of the car...

and began to drive after the people who took his friend's life.




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As an apology for the long wait for this one, I'll be posting the next part within the next two days.



Comments

 I like it 
  March 5, 2010
Love the new look :D keep it coming! great thing you got goin on here!
 I like it 
  February 27, 2010
Nice, hope he catches up to the dune buggys!
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  February 26, 2010
Nice chapter! I like Jake's new outfit.
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  February 26, 2010
this is getting good!
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  February 26, 2010
To chase after the people that rescued him is a bit reckless, unless they were traiters, right?
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  February 26, 2010
cool!, and could you plz rate+comment this? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/188635
 I like it 
  February 26, 2010
Wow, I have to say this is one of the best comics I've ever read, can't wait for part 09 to come out! Your comic structure and storyline is nice! 5/5
 I made it 
  February 25, 2010
Quoting Christian Schlichting Good use of flashbacks (like in LOST) but Jake is stupid to shoot someone who is explaining..
Well, you have to think about what he was feeling then: betrayal, confusion, panic. And what the soldier was saying was sacrilege.
 I like it 
  February 25, 2010
Good use of flashbacks (like in LOST) but Jake is stupid to shoot someone who is explaining..
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  February 25, 2010
Nice job! I'm really glad that we got to see more backstory! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  February 25, 2010
Nice job! I'm really glad that we got to see more backstory! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  February 25, 2010
Nice, I didn't see that one coming. This is a great series!
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  February 25, 2010
...Everyone is dead? Dang i liked those guys. Well another nice episode!
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  February 25, 2010
I feel sad that Jake's friend died, I like hhow Jake looks in that clothing.
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  February 25, 2010
Great work! I like Jake's new holding!
 
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