An noe, because so many of you complained, a DESRIPTIONEY THINGY ME BOB.
C.O.P Unloaded there troops onto the UNE mining facility on to the poisened air planet of Galfmair. We thought long and hard on the grounds of those planets. After a few week we were down to only and small company og men, but as we all know, we are COP, and we never surrender. We charged at the enemys base, overwelming it and suprising all UNE troops. Finally, they surrendered.
Yeah, so here yo go, I think it's realitively good, so here you go.
Not bad, but unfortunately not enough to be the victor in this match! I will say I like the concept of the elongated composition, and the action taking place is pretty cool, too. But like so many other battle scenes I've looked at, the creation needs some breathing room in it somewhere. You've got a lot of colors and shapes all visually competing with one another for attention, and the result is just a little messy. If you can in future creations, try to shoot for one or two focal points, and leave other areas a bit less detailed. It will help to lead the viewer's eye to specific areas, and add emphasis to the places that really NEED emphasis. Anyway, a solid entry...thanks for joining in and jumping into the fray!
Anders is right, it is sort of unclear exactly what is happening. your action effects were good, but you completely lacked a storyline of any kind. A word of advice for next time: Let your opponent post his creation first, so you know what you're up against.
If it wasn't for you writing which side was which, I wouldn't found out. The soldiers are not very uniform. The scene could also have been cleaner, because I don't know if it's a city, boarded spacecraft or something else.