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Quinqueviri in "Short Story"
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Team: Quinqueviri
Category: Short Story

FYI: This is a really SHORT story... enjoy...




(He's just a poor mercenary trying to get through life...)



(... and over there on that "shelf" ahem... building... is his target...)



"... it's agonizing waiting here waiting for the right moment to strike, but timing is everything... especially when you're dealing with someone who has eyes literally on the back of her head..."



"Yes! I've got a clear shot!"



(Or does he?)



(Our hero, with his excellent senses and fast reflexes (it helps to have a bit to much caffeine... or sweets) quickly drops his rifle and whips out his sidearm...



(But unfortunately, his adversary shoots him first...) (Ouch...)



(Unable to run, and caught red-handed... his nameless foe dives in for the kill...)



(But wait! Our hero has a Plan-B... (Tip #456: ALWAYS HAVE PLAN-B. If something's going to go wrong, it WILL go wrong...) He pulled out of his magic belt a...uhh...)



Don't get any closer mom, or I'll drop the cookie jar!! (How's the Coffee-Maker?)


The End...


Fourth-Wall-Commentary: Well this is my (rather pitiful) attempt at a short-story... I originally had an idea at a bunch of scenes with showing him killing people, but I figured senseless killing was probably getting old.. so I came up with that... just as a note, this is my first attempt at forced perspective, so let me know what you think about it... and yes, for those of you wondering, this was slightly inspired by "Calvin and Hobbes"


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Comments

 I like it 
  March 11, 2010
Nice build, especially the forced perspective. As the others said, I wanted a more developed story. 3 points.
 I made it 
  March 11, 2010
Quoting Yuri Fassio 3 points. Great build, but I thought by now people would have noticed the difference in rating between large pictures and small pictures...
Sorry... I'll make sure to make them bigger next time...
 I made it 
  March 11, 2010
Quoting Lee Jones Nice build, but hurting story; and seeing this is scored on both, then I can't award any more than three (3) points. Lee.
I was going to rewrite the story a bit but then Mr. Goldman commented on it so then I wasn't able to make any changes...
  March 11, 2010
Nice build, but hurting story; and seeing this is scored on both, then I can't award any more than three (3) points. Lee.
 I like it 
  March 11, 2010
3 points. Great build, but I thought by now people would have noticed the difference in rating between large pictures and small pictures...
 I like it 
  March 11, 2010
Fantastic!
 I like it 
  March 11, 2010
Great job! Love the kitchen!
 I like it 
  March 11, 2010
Great story - Great job!
 I like it 
  March 11, 2010
Haha, awesome build, I was thinking calvin and hobbes before I even read the fourth wall. 5/5
 I like it 
  March 10, 2010
I knew this was inspired by that awesome comic!
  March 10, 2010
I just realized that kitchen looks a lot like yours...
 I like it 
  March 10, 2010
Nice, I'm diggin the perspective. It took me a moment to get the end, but I like it.
 I made it 
  March 10, 2010
Quoting I like Waffles
Quoting 000 000 It's always nice to have one.
Do YOU have a plan B for everything?!?!?!
Of course... this was PLAN-B...
  March 10, 2010
Quoting 000 000 It's always nice to have one.
Do YOU have a plan B for everything?!?!?!
 I made it 
  March 10, 2010
Quoting I like Waffles LOLOLOLOL! Hilarious. I need a plan B for everything...
It's always nice to have one;)
 I like it 
  March 10, 2010
LOLOLOLOL! Hilarious. I need a plan B for everything...
 
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